PilotLara I think I came across a little logic/continuation error that may have slipped through the cracks, as it´s from chapter 7.
During Wade´s birthday party at Blazer, when Ian and Wade find Cindy talking to Axel, Ian monologues about "a tall blonde guy, I had seem him here before, talking to Ivy", and then proceeds to talk to him, as if he doesn´t know who he is.
In this scenario he had in fact already met him twice before, and they were already introduced by name. That evening at the Bar with Jeremy and Jess, where he showed up with Seymour. And later, after the live drawing in Molly´s cafe Ian also talks to Lena about having met her ex and what to do about him. (Lena and Ian are not a couple in this run, if that matters)
While at it, also a small textual error re: the MMA tournament. There´s two occasions where you can let Wen explain the rules.  Wen tells you it´s three rounds per fight, and you can win a fight by winning 2 of 3 rounds, KO, etc... but the actual fights are in fact only 2 rounds, right?