VN Ren'Py our secret [Game Development Thread] RELEASED

majdaddin

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Is Alexandra "your mother's lady friend", or your "Auntie"? Or not of course, but to fool the good & decent people, pick one.
 

ThePoi

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Nov 11, 2017
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As many other's have said the game is good. I really like the model for Alexandra. But I feel like the writing is a bit too stiff. Not enough conversation between getting out of car to entering house and things like that. I can't say that I'm a better writer so I can't really give any tips on making it flow better.

Playing the short demo I can still say you did a good job 17moonkeys. Looking forward to this and continuing UFO.
 

Pogo123

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Mar 25, 2019
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horror and porn can be really interesting sometimes - especially if there is no extreme stuff like gore and more horror atmosphere. i really like the bodyshape of the milf. very very tasteful and hot. just hope there will be ntr or some voyeur porn where you can either watch her getting fucked, you don't know how she gets fucked during doing something lese per choice OR you push her into getting fucked via choice. and since its horror i hope there is either some creepy zombie, clown or at least some creepy old pervert who can have (multiple) times sex with her. anyway: sound interesting will try it and hope for more to come with open kinks
 

coffeeaddicted

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Apr 13, 2021
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I like to give you feedback. 17MOONKEYS

Disclaimer. I am developing my own little adventure.

I think i like really most of it.
Renders looks really good to me and it's with sound. I do like the lights that shimmer from the room to the floor.

I can imagine that there went a lot of labor in to this game/VN.

The background sound is good and gives a sense of urgency.

I like the house. I tried it once myself. Beautiful and really great for anything. Good choice i may add.

Even the guy looks pretty nice. Not sure what figure he is.

Anyway, i think the beginning gives a hint and so far i enjoyed it.

One thing i learned and like about your game is that sound transports the story. It gives you the vibe of the game and i think that's the way it should be.
So i am looking forward how the story unfolds.

Great first chapter.
 

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adult fairy tales
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I like to give you feedback. 17MOONKEYS

Disclaimer. I am developing my own little adventure.

I think i like really most of it.
Renders looks really good to me and it's with sound. I do like the lights that shimmer from the room to the floor.

I can imagine that there went a lot of labor in to this game/VN.

The background sound is good and gives a sense of urgency.

I like the house. I tried it once myself. Beautiful and really great for anything. Good choice i may add.

Even the guy looks pretty nice. Not sure what figure he is.

Anyway, i think the beginning gives a hint and so far i enjoyed it.

One thing i learned and like about your game is that sound transports the story. It gives you the vibe of the game and i think that's the way it should be.
So i am looking forward how the story unfolds.

Great first chapter.
Thank You!