Thank you for your helpful feedback!My thoughts:
1. Overall good music choices. Also nice SFX. It really helps. If you bought them in some online outlet, please say where!
2. Really good milf design. Better than your typical ones. Clearly a mature leady with wrinkles and such. Hair is not my cup of tea...
3. Nothing to say about MC. Pajama pants looks like out from a circus. I would have choosen something more typical.
4. Good grammar. Easy for me to read.
5. Storywise I would explain a bit better why MC decided to help auntie. Maybe also deep a bit more about the 'I was rarised here' joke or how auntie feels about the death in the family.
6. pornwise, I don't like that the only spicy bit it's peeking in the shower or sniffing -didn't even try that-. I really don't like the pervy route. A bit more of suggestive dialogue would be better IMO.
7. Render-wise, be careful with auntie skin. Try to make it a bit more clear if you want to keep using the same lights. Can't say anything about the scenary, usually I think the way daz deals with rooms really sucks...
by the way, is the scond floor camera angle an homage to original Alone in the darkness trademark camera angles?
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I didn't understand the question.by the way, is the scond floor camera angle an homage to original Alone in the darkness trademark camera angles?
Can you explain please?
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