Well, I'm no longer that young, so I guess this particular trigger point will stay with me till I die.
I apologise for the offence.
I just found that that language made me feel uncomforable, but everything else seemed good so I made some edits.
I have a problem where the likability of the main character is a big part of whether I can enjoy a story. And personally, I don't associate with people that use that language, It's the kind of thing that can sour my opionion of a person.
I've never experienced this "boys will be boys" kind of locker talk with any of my friends.
In the end, as Story Anon mentioned, there are only a few instances anyway so I only really saw "soy boy" come up like twice after I changed it. Probably wasn't worth it.
In case I wasn't clear, I am not advocating that Story Anon change their game to suit me, they can use whatever language they want. I quite enjoy the game and I have made a donation through itch.io. I wish Story Anon all the success they deserve.