Moving on from the switch to Unity, I just finished Ch 18. Short but sweet is my official take.
It was really nice to see all seven of them unwind after all the drama. As cute as Jamie was (and I'm a huge Jamie fan!) the cutest of the night goes to little Ashley. She did indeed drink it all.
It'll be fun to see how CJ deals with the fallout of
The Kiss. Later in the night, you can almost see him mentally comparing Vic's kiss to Jamie's, and I think he liked them both, which is going to confuse the crap out of him.. You should probably start sneaking in some smoke coming out of his ears when he does his "deep thinking". It's almost painful to watch.
And how freaking great is to to be Sarah, right? Just chilling in bed and *BOOM*! O-Town; population three.
Great work,
Story Anon!