VN Unity Out of Touch! [v3.58] [Story Anon]

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malaac2025

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The first one was probably just a type and she was 19 but since ages are not easily caught it was probably a typo and suppose to be 19. So with 8 month time skip as you stated she could easily have turned 20 during the 8 months time skip so her 20th birthday probably happened.

It's easy for people to catch mistypes and pronunciation and such for typos but a date would be near impossible unless it specifically stated at the very beginning of the game her exact age with DOB.

Since it really was not that important in overall story nobody really paid attention to it, but I expect that the first time her age was mentioned it was probably suppose to be 19 and not 18.

But overall since most of us have been playing this for a long time and not a binge playing for the first time none of us would of caught a date error like that.
 
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malaac2025 said:
The first one was probably just a type and she was 19 but since ages are not easily caught it was probably a typo and suppose to be 19. So with 8 month time skip as you stated she could easily have turned 20 during the 8 months time skip so her 20th birthday probably happened.

It's easy for people to catch mistypes and pronunciation and such for typos but a date would be near impossible unless it specifically stated at the very beginning of the game her exact age with DOB.

Since it really was not that important in overall story nobody really paid attention to it, but I expect that the first time her age was mentioned it was probably suppose to be 19 and not 18.

But overall since most of us have been playing this for a long time and not a binge playing for the first time none of us would of caught a date error like that.
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I can see that being the case but the funny thing is that as i said before, in that chapter specifically the mention of her being 18 is done twice, i just didn't take a capture of the second.

So if it was a typo, it was done twice in that chapter.
 
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justonemore20 said:
I can see that being the case but the funny thing is that as i said before, in that chapter specifically the mention of her being 18 is done twice, i just didn't take a capture of the second.

So if it was a typo, it was done twice in that chapter.
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Everything before 22 is from 2021 and is on Anon's to re-write list for once Tropicali is done.
There's a lot more little inconsistencies than that but you're unlikely to notice them on a single playthrough.
Anon doesn't keep notes when he writes, madman.
 
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Nennius said:
Everything before 22 is from 2021 and is on Anon's to re-write list for once Tropicali is done.
There's a lot more little inconsistencies than that but you're unlikely to notice them on a single playthrough.
Anon doesn't keep notes when he writes, madman.
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Got it, i only wanted to point it out in case they didn't notice it so they could do a quick fix if it was a typo. I didn't know they would clean inconsistencies after they finished Tropicali, like i said, I'm new here. Now that I know it, I will avoid commenting on other inconsistencies since they are all going to get fixed in the future anyway.
 
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Got it, i only wanted to point it out in case they didn't notice it so they could do a quick fix if it was a typo. I didn't know they would clean inconsistencies after they finished Tropicali, like i said, I'm new here. Now that I know it, I will avoid commenting on other inconsistencies since they are all going to get fixed in the future anyway.
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Don't worry, we like to bully Anon over them.
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I haven't checked but what are the currently popular theories about Mr. Skygod? Mine is that CJ conjured him up and that the one Sarah claimed to have met was actually the Kid CJ who kept showing up throughout the story (though I still don't have much of a clue who THAT person is).
 
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Dorfnutter said:
I haven't checked but what are the currently popular theories about Mr. Skygod? Mine is that CJ conjured him up and that the one Sarah claimed to have met was actually the Kid CJ who kept showing up throughout the story (though I still don't have much of a clue who THAT person is).
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i also believe its all convenient things that CJ summon unconsciously to make himself feel better.
 
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I have to say, the litmus test for this isn't the Father or at the very least, it isn't just him... It's the dialogue or like CJ's personality. It's great when he's serious but when he calls Jamie, pussy and fag. It brings to mind someone who was spent his entire time online and didn't talk to actual people. It's borderline toxic masculinity if it isn't exactly that. Christ... How did he grow up with Sarah and not be a little mindful.

Ah fuck it, its in character. He's a dumbshit. I hope to god, he gets better but given the existence of the Father... I think the Dev's sense of humor is memes and 4chan...
 
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TeeEight said:
I have to say, the litmus test for this isn't the Father or at the very least, it isn't just him... It's the dialogue or like CJ's personality. It's great when he's serious but when he calls Jamie, pussy and fag. It brings to mind someone who was spent his entire time online and didn't talk to actual people. It's borderline toxic masculinity if it isn't exactly that. Christ... How did he grow up with Sarah and not be a little mindful.

Ah fuck it, its in character. He's a dumbshit. I hope to god, he gets better but given the existence of the Father... I think the Dev's sense of humor is memes and 4chan...
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Chapter 8

Oh my god, this man... Someone please help him. I don't even care about the way he and some of these people talk, I'm fuckin' invested.

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Why does Father sounds so much like Takahata...
 
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