VN Unity Out of Touch! [v3.58] [Story Anon]

[Krytax123]

How about all the constant puppy talk about CJ, making everything about herself always and straight away going for "CJ is my loyal servant" when they meet the other gang again in ~C33. There was clear separation between what was "her hurting" and what was her normal demeanor and the latter didn't garner any sympathy. I was actually more sad for her mother in the end. She got somewhat better later but I'm not certain her character has changed that much really. All in all she was raised as a spoiled princess and she acted like that. Furthermore she's the only one that acted like that in the group.

To each their own but I was really glad when that arc was over. I'm not actually sure did she ever thank anyone on screen before or after the time skip.

Wow you're way too much of a snowflake if youre getting insecure or even offended about the "puppy"-talk. Everyone in the group knows and understands it isnt serious, we're able to read her thoughts too and its very obvious that she didnt consider herself higher than cj.

She's just playing dude .. the real roles between her and cj are shown in every single lewd scene and every single time when they are serious about something. She jumped from a fucking skyscrapter because she thought herself and her problems are a burden for her friends.

And if you consider a girl spoiled who isnt allowed to take any decisions for herself and everyone has huge fucking expectactions towards her to behave in ways she hates and which conflict deeply with her whole being, than you got something wrong.

 

[akselx]

How about all the constant puppy talk about CJ, making everything about herself always and straight away going for "CJ is my loyal servant" when they meet the other gang again in ~C33. There was clear separation between what was "her hurting" and what was her normal demeanor and the latter didn't garner any sympathy. I was actually more sad for her mother in the end. She got somewhat better later but I'm not certain her character has changed that much really. All in all she was raised as a spoiled princess and she acted like that. Furthermore she's the only one that acted like that in the group.

To each their own but I was really glad when that arc was over. I'm not actually sure did she ever thank anyone on screen before or after the time skip.

Oof, someone doesn't understand inside jokes and playful banter. How do you even interact with the opposite sex? Oh, wait...you don't. That's why u are here.

Wait, this might have been a self own.

 

[akselx]

you do you.

That's what we're all doing here. Because, you know, it's a porn site.

 

[imjusthereforthebrowsing]

Leah is too hot to hate

 

[nzn]

game looked interesting.
untill:

what a disappointment.

 

[derekthered56]

game looked interesting.
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what a disappointment.

I suggest you keep going a little longer. This game can have its silly moments, but it's not the memefest this scene suggests, and it does have some compelling drama.

 

[buff]

game looked interesting.
untill: View attachment 2796483

what a disappointment.

Things aren't quite what they seem on the label. if you were a god talking to a not-very-bright 14yo boy that you wanted to impress but not scare, how would *you* appear?

 

[buff]

To each their own but I was really glad when that arc was over. I'm not actually sure did she ever thank anyone on screen before or after the time skip.

I disliked Leah a lot less after her arc- knowing why someone is a bitch makes them easier to take, and we saw more of her funny and sexy sides. Knowing she annoys herself as much as she annoys the reader makes her more believable.

That being said, she's still my least favorite of the mains. She is definitely good for the story though.

 

[WhitePolarFoxxx]

I suggest you keep going a little longer.

Strongly disagree. If you can't stand CHAD THUNDERCOCK then go fuck yourselfOoT is not for you

 

[soyuyuka]

game looked interesting.
untill: View attachment 2796483

what a disappointment.

A pussy.

 

[CapnBlaze]

game looked interesting.
untill: View attachment 2796483

what a disappointment.

There are those who find that scene incredibly funny and will die on the hill that it should be left alone and not edited out. I am not one of them. It's supposed to be a joke but it's out of place, misleading to what kind of VN/game this is, and the picture style is a one off for the sake of trying to make a funny joke. Although you shouldn't skip it because the story elements are crucial.

With that being said - that's the only time something like that appears. The rest of the story and pictures are very good and the sex scenes (which are slow burn but then make up for lost time) are excellent. Some of the best I've ever seen.

 

[Story Anon]

 

[akselx]

Welcome to our monthly "the game was good until meme appeared but now it's the stinkiest dogshit in the world and the dev deserve to die from hepatitis in a russian prison" discussion!

 

[nzn]

There are those who find that scene incredibly funny and will die on the hill that it should be left alone and not edited out. I am not one of them. It's supposed to be a joke but it's out of place, misleading to what kind of VN/game this is, and the picture style is a one off for the sake of trying to make a funny joke. Although you shouldn't skip it because the story elements are crucial.

With that being said - that's the only time something like that appears. The rest of the story and pictures are very good and the sex scenes (which are slow burn but then make up for lost time) are excellent. Some of the best I've ever seen.

well i'm of the mindset of skipping the rest of the vn TBH.
as a joke this is not funny.
if this is the writing and storytelling that is expected here than i'm not really missing much of value.
i know there are people with weird sense of humor and power to them.
but this is neither funny nor am i interested in a story this appears to be.

Although you shouldn't skip it because the story elements are crucial.

The rest of the story <...> are very good <...>

these two statements contradict each other significantly.

 

[Story Anon]

well i'm of the mindset of skipping the rest of the vn TBH.
as a joke this is not funny.
if this is the writing and storytelling that is expected here than i'm not really missing much of value.
i know there are people with weird sense of humor and power to them.
but this is neither funny nor am i interested in a story this appears to be.

The reason I put so much effort into that part, and spent hundreds of dollars to get a well known voice actor to voice it, is because a big absurdist set piece at the beginning acts as a really good filter for humorless dickbags with a negative post-like ratio.

The game is unapologetically weird, and if you can't handle that you won't get the rest.

 

[ReservoirCreature]

This is the problem with the WOKE world now a days!

eh, this was definitely not an instance of 'woke' objection to comedy. nzn did not express any sort of outrage at the contents of the scene. He just thought it was dumb and/or out of place. I think it is important to remember that not every criticism you witness is motivated by the ideologies that you oppose. Sometimes it's just a case of incompatible humor, and that's okay.

 

[Draugo]

I disliked Leah a lot less after her arc- knowing why someone is a bitch makes them easier to take, and we saw more of her funny and sexy sides. Knowing she annoys herself as much as she annoys the reader makes her more believable.

That being said, she's still my least favorite of the mains. She is definitely good for the story though.

My thoughts exactly.

 

[TigerWolfe]

Do you actually have a clear definition of what "woke" means?

Does anyone who uses it as a pejorative?

 

[TigerWolfe]

Woke anymore is not it's original meaning.. now it's...

1. Attack against God and Christianity (What the transgenders did to the representation of Jesus on the cross! The taking of God's promise the rainbow as there flag)
2. Attack against comedians because it's not politically correct and may offend someone
3. The crap White Supremacy if if your black, red, yellow if you go against this your White!
4. Attacks against our very Constitutional right to Free Speech
5. Blackmailing businesses to push this gender with E.S.G to the point it destroys our very constitution
6. Attacks against Democracy itself

No Woke is not what it originally was meant to be it was corrupted like everything gets corrupted! Black Lives Matter turned to terrorist by the corrupt though it should of been All Lives Matter! No WOKE now is a very bad meaning against God himself. That is what it means now.

Oh wow you're a special one...

 

[Nennius]

No WOKE now is a very bad meaning against God himself. That is what it means now.

You know I thought your original post was some lukewarm ironic humor, but now you've gone full ignorant Merican of preaching an argument that loses 90% of it's meaning when you're realizing we're on a fucking international forum.

However I must profusely thank you for the hilarity of screaming about respecting God on a fucking Porn Piracy Site. As if your precious fragile religion wouldn't have you and I both condemned to the 2nd circle of hell for simply having an account here.
Besides, here we should only care for one morally questionable sycophantic cloud man.