Post-Chapter 13 & 14 Comments
Quotes of the chapters:
“Why are we all just standing around like retards?!” ← That's Ashley's job!
“Who fucking cares about you?” ← When you have so little personality, the bad gal does't even know how to insult you. (I'm sure more Teresa characterization is coming, definitely, probably.)
“Is that the afterlife? Another dimension? A dream world?” ← Jamie already over the shock and ready to start figuring out how to categorize and study magic land. Just watch, in 20 chapters she'll be tracking magic stuff in her spreadsheets.
“Mrs. Chad Johnson Thundercock Jr.” ← Not actually a line of text, but one picture of Jamie's wedding fantasy is worth 1000 words. As usual Jamie is so far ahead of the girls in some ways... and so far behind in others.
Investigating the nurse's office was a good idea, but unfortunately “only magic can defeat magic”. When your opponent can warp reality like clay to hide the wounds of the body she's stolen, playing Nancy Drew won't do shit. Though it does raise the question of who took the medical bags and why if Red Spirit had no interest in patching up Kieran's body.
Red Kieran's threat to snitch on the three girls for “being where they aren't supposed to be” is very weak sauce. It's the nurse's office! Just say Teresa felt sick and they wanted to ask for medical help or something.
We switch to CJ, who doesn't seem too traumatized by his dream experience, though he's certainly stressed. No CJ, I don't care if the red spirit is hot, don't stick it in the crazy you are surrounded by much saner hot girls and also Ashley.
So the wounded girl in the hall is obviously the human Kieran, temporarily freed from her possession. It looks like the Red Spirit prefers to use supernatural power to change her hair color rather than hair dye it as everyone no doubt assumes. Kieran seems to have inherited some part of Red Spirit's obsession with CJ... unless she's naturally obsessed with CJ and that's why Red Spirit took her over. Quick, check Kieran's hand for a ring! Maybe the reason everyone ignores Ashley is that she's not “really” part of the harem. (I did notice that Kieran is in several of the sample images on the first post of the thread, so I guess she's not going away anytime soon.)
In Chapter 14, we cut to femme-chad Jamie. “Oh me? Just running a corporate conglomerate part-time as a side gig from school. Hold on, one of my three hot and personally devoted to me servant girls needs to bring me the briefcase holding my laptop and the souls of those who opposed me.”
But seriously, maids are good culture. Even if Jamie wouldn't ordinarily let Mayu wear the costume... outside. Are the three of them going to be a sub-harem that Jamie uses as her back-up fuck squad?
When Jamie hooks back up with CJ at school, she continues to be the rational one who reassures him that she saw everything too, he's not crazy, there's definitely magic all up in this shit. As usual, the other girls run around and accomplish little while Jamie actually has CJ's back. Then they get the taunting texts and CJ runs off to “water”, which based on the locations we explored earlier I guess will be the river bank?
End with Sarah proving she's a magic person by getting voice acted dialogue, though annoyingly the chapter cuts off in mid-story. Seems like Sarah was 'created' (or at least 'incarnated') only shortly before meeting CJ for the first time, since she wasn't even sure how to walk yet. And that's it!
Chapter 15 is another porn chapter with a scene in the gallery, Fingers crossed it's not another Red Fox scene; sure she's hot but come on. When is it someone else's turn?