VN Unity Out of Touch! [v3.91.1] [Story Anon]

[Justonemore20]

How is it stretching the correlations in case of CJ possibly literally being the god of creation lol

If he created the goddesses (including their wishes/fetishes/whatever) to fulfill his needs/desires, they are hardly to blame for being like that and for wanting a CJ who is able to fulfill these needs and desires. Its his grand design and plan which created all that.

Indeed CJ is not in control of the machinations at the moment but i get the feeling more and more that it is indeed part of his plan that he is NOT in control. Having full control of everything makes you responsible for everything happening too after all.

We see snippets of this when CJ is in this empty room and moving the camera towards strange angles, being overwhelmed and confused about the possibilitys, that a CJ with full control and i think he doesnt want it. The goddesses are less players who control him and more like forces of nature (created by him for their purpose).

The goddesses could have been meant to be a split of his power/control in the first place like decentralizing the proccess of creation and destruction lol

I dont think this is a story about the protagonist being eager to be "in control" it seems more like the opposite.

And your example doesnt really work out, its closer to timetravel where a past or future version of yourself made a decision for your present you.

You kinda sound like you spent way to much time with jamie's grandpa and take all of his theories by word while they ALWAYS were wrong/flawed/the wrong conclusion.

I don't remember it ever been confirmed that glory made the goddesses, as far as I know they never specify that, unlike cro who constantly claims that she was made by him, so until this is confirmed I can't really agree with you.

And as for the time travel thing you mention, it is clear that you and I have VERY different opinions of how we see a "being" and their "shards". Let me put khione and victoria for example: Victoria and khione share traits with each other since victoria is a shard of khione, she has her personality, her likes, her way of thinking, but she DOESN'T have her memories, that is the most important distinction between them. Khione regards victoria's mother as a tool and a nuisance, something that she discarded and let her die once it's purpose was completed. That is something that victoria would NEVER do since she loved her, she was born as a human who grew and made memories and relations of her own, and this own feelings of her would only return to the original once her shard died and fuse back with her.

Cro is the best example of what this looks like, a cro with all her memories of her pain and suffering is the red fox cro we all know, while a cro with no recollection of any of this is a sarah. Same with carpo, she made her shard and by that definition herself suffer SO MUCH since she didn't care because from her experiences this was necessary for her goal and she had already suffered worst. meanwhile her shard is having a mental breakdown and throwing herself from the top of a building.

For me the "whole" and the "shard" have a relationship more akin to clones where the shard have their minds wipe completely while the "whole" remains whole and is capable of seen and feeling through their clone. I see the "whole" and their "shards" has the same being but split.

And this is too how a see CJ's case but worse, because he is not even a shard, he is a product made by the four.

Your definition of CJ being glory just makes it seem like CJ did all of this to himself completely aware of everything, that he ruined families, destroyed lives, and suffer so much himself out of his own free well and then... forgot about it? act like he didn't know? wipe his own memory? seeing his personality this seems completely out of character. I see CJ's and Glory's actions as separate, while you seem to associate them. I don't even know how the rest of the game would make sense if he has been just doing this to himself as CJ. That is why i see CJ and Glory as two separate entities, the whole and the shard, although glory is supposedly fragmented so i don't really know.

Also I have to say, if this is glory's plan then he is worse than grampa, he made his lovers suffer the worst hell and become the worst monsters because of him... I just can't see CJ and think, "yeah, he would definitely cause all this pain thinking that at the end he would just fix it all with his god powers".

I guess it all boils down to "This game if freaking confusing and we lack information".

Note: My main language is not English so it takes me a while to write something decent and respond but I actually like sharing views like this since this games is the kind that makes you theorize a lot and search for other points of view, so feel free to challenge my views about this.

 

[Krytax123]

I don't remember it ever been confirmed that glory made the goddesses, as far as I know they never specify that, unlike cro who constantly claims that she was made by him, so until this is confirmed I can't really agree with you.

"Confirmed" is very relative in this avn but it was stated by Cro, something along the lines of that he created the goddesses in harmony and in pairs of two which made her wonder why she was created alone (and thought sarah was her other part).

And as for the time travel thing you mention, it is clear that you and I have VERY different opinions of how we see a "being" and their "shards". Let me put khione and victoria for example: Victoria and khione share traits with each other since victoria is a shard of khione, she has her personality, her likes, her way of thinking, but she DOESN'T have her memories, that is the most important distinction between them. Khione regards victoria's mother as a tool and a nuisance, something that she discarded and let her die once it's purpose was completed. That is something that victoria would NEVER do since she loved her, she was born as a human who grew and made memories and relations of her own, and this own feelings of her would only return to the original once her shard died and fuse back with her.

Cro is the best example of what this looks like, a cro with all her memories of her pain and suffering is the red fox cro we all know, while a cro with no recollection of any of this is a sarah. Same with carpo, she made her shard and by that definition herself suffer SO MUCH since she didn't care because from her experiences this was necessary for her goal and she had already suffered worst. meanwhile her shard is having a mental breakdown and throwing herself from the top of a building.

For me the "whole" and the "shard" have a relationship more akin to clones where the shard have their minds wipe completely while the "whole" remains whole and is capable of seen and feeling through their clone. I see the "whole" and their "shards" has the same being but split.

And this is too how a see CJ's case but worse, because he is not even a shard, he is a product made by the four.

Your definition of CJ being glory just makes it seem like CJ did all of this to himself completely aware of everything, that he ruined families, destroyed lives, and suffer so much himself out of his own free well and then... forgot about it? act like he didn't know? wipe his own memory? seeing his personality this seems completely out of character. I see CJ's and Glory's actions as separate, while you seem to associate them. I don't even know how the rest of the game would make sense if he has been just doing this to himself as CJ. That is why i see CJ and Glory as two separate entities, the whole and the shard, although glory is supposedly fragmented so i don't really know.

I see CJ and glory similar to Cro and Sarah with the difference that glory is splittered in shards. The relationship between the shards of the goddesses and the goddesses is different to that.

They (CJ & Glory and Sarah and Cro) are more or less the same, its just that their memorys got deleted and they where allowed to have a "reboot", they are not new unique beings.

CJ is a product by the goddesses but thats what glory intended imo and he indeed is a (the) real shard. The slight changes/interventions from the goddesses is imo actually the part which elevated him (or formerly jacob) from simply being a shard to becoming THE shard of glory. I see it like the usual glory shards are missing the essence of glory which the goddesses added manually back to CJ.

Its what makes him different from all the other glory shards we already encountered, he was "perfected" to become who he was once more in a proccess which needed apparently eons of time.

Also I have to say, if this is glory's plan then he is worse than grampa, he made his lovers suffer the worst hell and become the worst monsters because of him... I just can't see CJ and think, "yeah, he would definitely cause all this pain thinking that at the end he would just fix it all with his god powers".

It was a desperate plan as we saw in the prologue. Something was happening to the goddesses, they may were dying or already fracturing. Cro mentions in the prologue to glory how he "can still save them" and imo thats what this story is mainly about. Glory is trying to rescue his loved ones.

He deemed this necessary to save his loves and its a major theme of this avn how love can be corrupt(ed) or obsessive and lead to bad actions/outcomes.

And i think youre looking at this (like Cj and unlike for example glory) from a very emotional/human perspective. From Glorys or for example Auxo's perspective its just the way of life/nature, universes get created and destroyed. People are born and die, civilizations get created and destroyed and so on.

Its a very philosphical topic. You see the goddesses more like humans/living persons while i see them more as a "concept" like death/life/creation and so on.

I guess it all boils down to "This game if freaking confusing and we lack information".

With this, i agree

 

[Justonemore20]

"Confirmed" is very relative in this avn but it was stated by Cro, something along the lines of that he created the goddesses in harmony and in pairs of two which made her wonder why she was created alone (and thought sarah was her other part).



I see CJ and glory similar to Cro and Sarah with the difference that glory is splittered in shards. The relationship between the shards of the goddesses and the goddesses is different to that.

They (CJ & Glory and Sarah and Cro) are more or less the same, its just that their memorys got deleted and they where allowed to have a "reboot", they are not new unique beings.

CJ is a product by the goddesses but thats what glory intended imo and he indeed is a (the) real shard. The slight changes/interventions from the goddesses is imo actually the part which elevated him (or formerly jacob) from simply being a shard to becoming THE shard of glory. I see it like the usual glory shards are missing the essence of glory which the goddesses added manually back to CJ.

Its what makes him different from all the other glory shards we already encountered, he was "perfected" to become who he was once more in a proccess which needed apparently eons of time.



It was a desperate plan as we saw in the prologue. Something was happening to the goddesses, they may were dying or already fracturing. Cro mentions in the prologue to glory how he "can still save them" and imo thats what this story is mainly about. Glory is trying to rescue his loved ones.

He deemed this necessary to save his loves and its a major theme of this avn how love can be corrupt(ed) or obsessive and lead to bad actions/outcomes.

And i think youre looking at this (like Cj and unlike for example glory) from a very emotional/human perspective. From Glorys or for example Auxo's perspective its just the way of life/nature, universes get created and destroyed. People are born and die, civilizations get created and destroyed and so on.

Its a very philosphical topic. You see the goddesses more like humans/living persons while i see them more as a "concept" like death/life/creation and so on.



With this, i agree

Well, that was a great answer, gave me a lot to think about, and I agree with this:

And i think youre looking at this (like Cj and unlike for example glory) from a very emotional/human perspective.

I don't go around playing god so I can't put myself in that headspace. I guess we will have to wait and see.

By the way, your answers are kind of curious, you seem to remember a lot considering how long this AVN is... are you the dev using an alt account or something? Am I making a fool out of myself discussing with the actual writer?

 

[Krytax123]

Well, that was a great answer, gave me a lot to think about, and I agree with this:

I don't go around playing god so I can't put myself in that headspace. I guess we will have to wait and see.

By the way, your answers are kind of curious, you seem to remember a lot considering how long this AVN is... are you the dev using an alt account or something? Am I making a fool out of myself discussing with the actual writer?

Lmao no and if one of the devs reads my theorys, they are probably gonna ask themself which kind of crack i smoked to get to these conclusions.

I simply REALLY enjoy this story and i think i played the whole thing _at least_ three times lol

And there are people (who are not devs either) here and on the discord who still have way more knowledge (and maybe understanding) of this story compared to me i think

 

[Zorad]

Yeah I kind of saw it as a manifestation of his crisis of identity. Like I said, I was left wondering if they loved CJ because who he is, like who he is without the goddess' intervention or do they love him because he was molded by the goddess's to be desirable? but who even is he without their intervention? Though, while Jaime might not be my fav LI for CJ, her feelings are at least real probably ( kind of the point of the end of the chapter I know)

Got to admit that makes me a bit depressed lol spend 50 chapters getting invested in some of the relationships and see characters fall for each other, only to then see that it could all be a lie. Like I thought Carpo at least might have put the idea in Leah's head to focus on CJ so I during her arc I was wondering if her feelings were truly hers. But even before that there seemed to be something there, So it seemed like she fell for CJ on her own and that was that. I honestly really got into their story and interactions so it sucks to now learn that the CJ she fell for might not be real and neither are those feelings lol. Guess I liked the idea of rescuing a princess from a gilded cage and offering the world to her, and her willing to burn the world burn for you lol

This chapter made me anxious as fuck while reading it for the same concers that you have (my favorite characters are also the same ones you mentioned there at the end lol). But upon replaying the game after it, I don't think it is as bad as grandpa made it sound like. He LOVES to take a portion of the truth and manipulate it to fit his owns goals, and since his goal was for CJ to literally kill himself, he had all the reasons to make him feel as miserable as possible.

From a purely meta point of view it wouldn't make sense for the author to write 49 chapters of relationship buildup just to throw it all in the trash.

My own theory is that the goddesses created him based on their own ideals, like grandpa said, but they don't actively control him. So basically they picked traits like understanding, caring, reliable, forgiving etc. when creating him and from that point on everything CJ did were his own actions based on said preset values. When you look at it from this point of view it doesn't sound too different from how gene mods work in this universe, only that instead of being a more generalist package it was designed around 4 individuals. Meaning that he COULD have accused Vic of rape but didn't. As for the "I will make all your dreams come true" bit, that seems more like CJ being good at reading people than Carpo controlling what he says. To some that may still be the same thing but to me it makes a big difference. Regardless of where his values came from, CJ is still CJ and his actions are his. Of course, you could say that he never really had a chance to form his own morals like people do but eh, I don't think that's completely true either.

It's also important to note that he isn't 100% compatible with all of the girls. In fact, during the train scene we see that CJ is actually afraid of Leah's (and by extension Vic's) bloodlust on some level. That's one of the examples of his own morals conflicting with the goddesses/shards. Another example is at the end of Teresa's arc when HE controls Vic and Leah when they get too blinded by rage and their goddesses' influence.

Like I thought Carpo at least might have put the idea in Leah's head to focus on CJ so I during her arc I was wondering if her feelings were truly hers. But even before that there seemed to be something there, So it seemed like she fell for CJ on her own and that was that. I honestly really got into their story and interactions so it sucks to now learn that the CJ she fell for might not be real and neither are those feelings lol.

I don't think people notice (or at least they don't talk about it much) that Leah was actually developing a crush for CJ at the start of the game. With the few scenes they have at the early chapters we can see both through Leah's thoughts and her body language that she is feeling attraction towards him. Their scene at the Tea Club and the next one in the hallway solidified that for me.

However, once she learned about the existence of the rings and what they implied, she completely closed herself off and started to second guess any growing non-platonic feelings towards CJ. We can notice that there was a shift in her behaviour with CJ after that. What I think Carpo did in her arc was - through magic - open Leah's mind about CJ again while also nudging her towards him using her own memories of Glory. So you could say that Carpo simply made things pick up from where they were left off, with a little extra.

And even with that, Carpo still had to actively intervene A LOT in order for her plan to work. The most blatant case was after CJ, Sara and Leah came back from Sima's world and Vic asked to talk to Leah about the night at the karaoke bar. If that conversation had gone uninterrupted, they would probably hook up and that would either make Carpo's plan fail or it would make it extremely more difficult. So, she took control of Ayu and made her call Leah, which caused Leah to become even more pessimistic about her situation.

Just the amount of work Carpo had to put in in order to make Leah fall for CJ should be indicative that what Hayato said about CJ is not the whole truth.



With all that being said, it will take some time until all our characters are fully comfortable with these revelations, regardless of how true they are or how manipulated they were. Leah will probably be the least affected and Teresa will have some trouble, but CJ and Vic in particular are gonna be MISERABLE in the next chapters.

 

[Dactess]

This chapter made me anxious as fuck while reading it for the same concers that you have (my favorite characters are also the same ones you mentioned there at the end lol). But upon replaying the game after it, I don't think it is as bad as grandpa made it sound like. He LOVES to take a portion of the truth and manipulate it to fit his owns goals, and since his goal was for CJ to literally kill himself, he had all the reasons to make him feel as miserable as possible.

From a purely meta point of view it wouldn't make sense for the author to write 49 chapters of relationship buildup just to throw it all in the trash.

My own theory is that the goddesses created him based on their own ideals, like grandpa said, but they don't actively control him. So basically they picked traits like understanding, caring, reliable, forgiving etc. when creating him and from that point on everything CJ did were his own actions based on said preset values. When you look at it from this point of view it doesn't sound too different from how gene mods work in this universe, only that instead of being a more generalist package it was designed around 4 individuals. Meaning that he COULD have accused Vic of rape but didn't. As for the "I will make all your dreams come true" bit, that seems more like CJ being good at reading people than Carpo controlling what he says. To some that may still be the same thing but to me it makes a big difference. Regardless of where his values came from, CJ is still CJ and his actions are his. Of course, you could say that he never really had a chance to form his own morals like people do but eh, I don't think that's completely true either.

It's also important to note that he isn't 100% compatible with all of the girls. In fact, during the train scene we see that CJ is actually afraid of Leah's (and by extension Vic's) bloodlust on some level. That's one of the examples of his own morals conflicting with the goddesses/shards. Another example is at the end of Teresa's arc when HE controls Vic and Leah when they get too blinded by rage and their goddesses' influence.



I don't think people notice (or at least they don't talk about it much) that Leah was actually developing a crush for CJ at the start of the game. With the few scenes they have at the early chapters we can see both through Leah's thoughts and her body language that she is feeling attraction towards him. Their scene at the Tea Club and the next one in the hallway solidified that for me.

However, once she learned about the existence of the rings and what they implied, she completely closed herself off and started to second guess any growing non-platonic feelings towards CJ. We can notice that there was a shift in her behaviour with CJ after that. What I think Carpo did in her arc was - through magic - open Leah's mind about CJ again while also nudging her towards him using her own memories of Glory. So you could say that Carpo simply made things pick up from where they were left off, with a little extra.

And even with that, Carpo still had to actively intervene A LOT in order for her plan to work. The most blatant case was after CJ, Sara and Leah came back from Sima's world and Vic asked to talk to Leah about the night at the karaoke bar. If that conversation had gone uninterrupted, they would probably hook up and that would either make Carpo's plan fail or it would make it extremely more difficult. So, she took control of Ayu and made her call Leah, which caused Leah to become even more pessimistic about her situation.

Just the amount of work Carpo had to put in in order to make Leah fall for CJ should be indicative that what Hayato said about CJ is not the whole truth.



With all that being said, it will take some time until all our characters are fully comfortable with these revelations, regardless of how true they are or how manipulated they were. Leah will probably be the least affected and Teresa will have some trouble, but CJ and Vic in particular are gonna be MISERABLE in the next chapters.

Yeah I agree with you. And to the point of the goddess's controlling or manipulating him, and the others, why would they allow them and the group to befriend Jaime. Like even as kids. They hate Jaime and know what she is so why not cause the group to ostracize her? Was just a thought that I thought lol CJ, or at least this CJ was always gonna be what he is, the person Cro loved lol and she knew... Or at least that has seemed to be a point. So yeah I agree that CJ is obviously getting manipulated and well it worked (on both the character and me lol)

But that is also why I liked Leahs so much, it felt genuine. Vics feelings felt genuine but not much was done for them, they were always there. Whereas with Leah, there were chapters dedicated to her developing those feelings feelings kind of but CJ had to work for them it seemed, or at least get her to open up. Whereas like you said, Carpo could've just forced it if she had true control over them.

In the end it is just me wondering how much of CJ is CJ and how much is the Goddess's influence. I mean they made him sure, but Jacob (the little guy) also played a part in what he grew up to be. I mean my point with Jaime was how much can the 4 truly influence him. Eh will find out i guess

 

[Incarnation123]

Nothing in this game stung more than when Jamie called CJ just a booty call lol

 

[Sir. Cockalot]

4 weeks after the update is released i finally got around to playing it. and boy was it a wild ride.

 

[Mahko]

Just like the lack of vocabulary to understand goddess concepts, I don’t think there’s any words for mortals to fully grasp what the experience of this game truly is.

To summarize... It's great!

EDIT : Aaaaaand just finished... Still weirdly great... Every bit of this game is worth it and i sure think what's comes next will be the same.

 

[Mahko]

Hi Story Anon, i'm in chapter 50 and it would be a pleasure to help you with french translation if you need it. I saw some mistakes soooo... Anyway, happy to help if you ever need.

 

[soyuyuka]

Hi Story Anon, i'm in chapter 50 and it would be a pleasure to help you with french translation if you need it. I saw some mistakes soooo... Anyway, happy to help if you ever need.

There is someone on discord who currently does french translation, they are done up to end of volume 2 as far as I know.

 

[Mahko]

There is someone on discord who currently does french translation, they are done up to end of volume 2 as far as I know.

Didn't know that, thanks. But above all i was refering to french dialogue in chapter 50, it doesn't match the quality of the global writing (and it's totally understandable, even as a native french, i know this language can be a piece of work).

 

[Justonemore20]

I have a technical question about the latest update after replaying it a bit, I doubt I'll get an answer but I'll post my question anyway in case someone who knows sees it.

¿Why doesn't Diary have voice lines in the finale of this arc?

All of Cro pieces got voice lines; Sarah, Kieran, Cro, yet Diary who is a piece of Sarah (and therefore a piece of Cro too) didn't got any. This became more confusing when I replayed the part where Sarah and Kieran went to the park to talk about Kieran's new condition and then suddenly Diary appears and talks to Kieran about being sisters, at witch Kieran gets confused and tells Sarah that she heard her voice coming from the opposite direction. So this confirms that Diary doesn't just have Sarah's appearance but also her same voice, and Sarah already has voice lines in the finale of the arc so ¿why don't do the same for Diary?.

¿Was it a money thing?, ¿Mayby it wasn't worth it since she is a very secondary character that doesn't even appear in the final confrontation?, ¿was it to avoid confusion?. That last one I doubt since this AV is confusing already as it is.

I'm just curious what the technical reason for that was, even if it's something stupid.

 

[soyuyuka]

I have a technical question about the latest update after replaying it a bit, I doubt I'll get an answer but I'll post my question anyway in case someone who knows sees it.

¿Why doesn't Diary have voice lines in the finale of this arc?

All of Cro pieces got voice lines; Sarah, Kieran, Cro, yet Diary who is a piece of Sarah (and therefore a piece of Cro too) didn't got any. This became more confusing when I replayed the part where Sarah and Kieran went to the park to talk about Kieran's new condition and then suddenly Diary appears and talks to Kieran about being sisters, at witch Kieran gets confused and tells Sarah that she heard her voice coming from the opposite direction. So this confirms that Diary doesn't just have Sarah's appearance but also her same voice, and Sarah already has voice lines in the finale of the arc so ¿why don't do the same for Diary?.

¿Was it a money thing?, ¿Mayby it wasn't worth it since she is a very secondary character that doesn't even appear in the final confrontation?, ¿was it to avoid confusion?. That last one I doubt since this AV is confusing already as it is.

I'm just curious what the technical reason for that was, even if it's something stupid.

Not making VA do too much work and probably time constraints. Keep in mind, Sarah, Cro and Kieran are all voiced by the same VA (for a reason that should be obvious now after this chapter). Because of some situation it was only recorded a few days before release and update was already delayed because I couldn't edit nearly 750 voice lines in this update in time. Even with 24 hour delay and pulling all nighter only finished few hours before release.

 

[ElukiaTV]

You guys forgot that Diary is not a Cro, she literally tells you that she was a flower fae that Sarah picked and with time she started to look like her.
Dont worry, Anon is more than ready to give Ally even more work...
and not only Ally, but.. that's spoilers.

 

[soyuyuka]

You guys forgot that Diary is not a Cro, she literally tells you that she was a flower fae that Sarah picked and with time she started to look like her.
Dont worry, Anon is more than ready to give Ally even more work...
and not only Ally, but.. that's spoilers.

He originally planned to have her voiced.

 

[Justonemore20]

Not making VA do too much work and probably time constraints. Keep in mind, Sarah, Cro and Kieran are all voiced by the same VA (for a reason that should be obvious now after this chapter). Because of some situation it was only recorded a few days before release and update was already delayed because I couldn't edit nearly 750 voice lines in this update in time. Even with 24 hour delay and pulling all nighter only finished few hours before release.

thanks for the reply, I kind of suspected that their VA was the same with different filters, although I wasn't sure since I hadn't actually seen the credits before. Still, I had already guessed that it was the same, what I meant when I said that Diary and Sarah have the same voice was that it wasn't even necessary to make a new voice filter (or whatever it's called) for Diary since she should sound EXACTLY like Sarah. But you already explained why that couldn't be.

Now I'm curious if Diary would get voice lines added in this chapter in future updates just like Sarah had them added to previous chapters later on.

 

[Justonemore20]

You guys forgot that Diary is not a Cro, she literally tells you that she was a flower fae that Sarah picked and with time she started to look like her.
Dont worry, Anon is more than ready to give Ally even more work...
and not only Ally, but.. that's spoilers.

As far as I know Diary is a shard of Sarah that she created from a flower that she took from the ocean. She took care of that flower and eventually she put a shard of herself in it (or made her a shard somehow, I don't know how that process works).

She even says in game that she sent pieces of herself to collect everyone when they were scattered in their search for Hebe, and that the piece that she send to get Kieran was Diary.

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[Taureum]

Hope the side girls will get some love this year. They could really use some CJ to relax.

 

[thothon]

can someone give me full save plss