VN Ren'Py Pablo's Project [alpha-0.1] [dude4dadfun]

i0Bjh0

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Just wanted to mention a bug I found.
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The prompt is slightly broken. The question is actually its own option which seems to do exactly the same as "No".
 

i0Bjh0

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Thank you... I'll have a look on it!
Hadn't found it the first time around but I noticed that the description of one of the Dad options says that corruption is at 0. But I was able to get corruption to 1 right before that prompt.
 

i0Bjh0

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I wanted to make an actual review since I've gone through pretty much everything so far. I'm really enjoying your game.

1. I absolutely love the little descriptions of how certain choices can affect the outcome. They're descriptive and don't just tell you "+1 corruption, -2 annoyance". It reads like your character is giving you their thoughts on picking that option.
2. I really like the story so far. Despite being only a short amount of text to go through, I was already devoted to the story and looking forward to more.
3. While I'm a sucker for more muscular characters that are ripped, I didn't mind the body types you gave the characters. They didn't look disgusting or super "twinky" which turn me off quite a bit. They also didn't look unnecessarily young. The 18 year old actually looked 18. Overall, I found the characters to still be attractive.
4.The overall expressions looked incredibly real. No over-the-top facial expressions that only really tell you "this character feels this emotion". The characters body expressions also looked natural. When one of the characters went "finally", I totally felt for the character that they expressed their thoughts with just one word and a simple pose.
 
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I wanted to make an actual review since I've gone through pretty much everything so far. I'm really enjoying your game.

1. I absolutely love the little descriptions of how certain choices can affect the outcome. They're descriptive and don't just tell you "+1 corruption, -2 annoyance". It reads like your character is giving you their thoughts on picking that option.
2. I really like the story so far. Despite being only a short amount of text to go through, I was already devoted to the story and looking forward to more.
3. While I'm a sucker for more muscular characters that are ripped, I didn't mind the body types you gave the characters. They didn't look disgusting or super "twinky" which turn me off quite a bit. They also didn't look unnecessarily young. The 18 year old actually looked 18. Overall, I found the characters to still be attractive.
4.The overall expressions looked incredibly real. No over-the-top facial expressions that only really tell you "this character feels this emotion". The characters body expressions also looked natural. When one of the characters went "finally", I totally felt for the character that they expressed their thoughts with just one word and a simple pose.
Man, this made my day. Okay, it's easy to say because it's such a positive feedback :) BUT you stressed the things that are important to me: descriptive responses through storytelling, not only by showing the player the numbers; normal / average characters (not extreme muscular, twinky / young, old); no exalerated facial and body expressions; and hopefully a story that is also interesting (beside the goal to make the guys having much sex at the end :) )

THANK YOU
 
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