I wanted to make an actual review since I've gone through pretty much everything so far. I'm really enjoying your game.
1. I absolutely love the little descriptions of how certain choices can affect the outcome. They're descriptive and don't just tell you "+1 corruption, -2 annoyance". It reads like your character is giving you their thoughts on picking that option.
2. I really like the story so far. Despite being only a short amount of text to go through, I was already devoted to the story and looking forward to more.
3. While I'm a sucker for more muscular characters that are ripped, I didn't mind the body types you gave the characters. They didn't look disgusting or super "twinky" which turn me off quite a bit. They also didn't look unnecessarily young. The 18 year old actually looked 18. Overall, I found the characters to still be attractive.
4.The overall expressions looked incredibly real. No over-the-top facial expressions that only really tell you "this character feels this emotion". The characters body expressions also looked natural. When one of the characters went "finally", I totally felt for the character that they expressed their thoughts with just one word and a simple pose.