VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [Demo] [Lewtopia]

[Mad4lifeBraven]

Sometimes life gives you hope... but also, sometimes... lol

You:
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THX for sharing...

Thrice im sure u liar xD

 

[B.W.H]

you might be using an older version... download the latest version from joiplay's patreon page... it's free

Gave me the link pls

 

[dadencuto3]

Although Futa not my thing and most definitely I will skip this game, GL to dev Lewtopia , you are really really talented. Renders preview are above amazing, 100% on par with some of the best in the market right now. For a second i though Summer Heat or Acquainted Dev are making another game so Pog champ.
Hoping that you could make a regular game with a guy MC, damm these renders are all perfect till i saw the meat 1.5 times bigger than her arms, not my kink sadly.

 

[yunosykk]

Gave me the link pls

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[Tankill]

I'm still figuring out this whole pricing thing as I go, and I'm totally flexible about changing the tiers. Being my first game and all, I'm honestly just learning as I go - that's actually why I put out the demo first, so I could get some real feedback before the full release.

I'd like to clarify that the current pricing tiers are placeholder and will definitely be subject to change.

About that $35 tier and the extra content - I think there might be some confusion. What I'm planning is this separate section in the gallery with totally non-canon stuff - just fun extras that don't impact the main game at all. (It's also not completely clear yet)

I want to assure everyone that I'm carefully considering all of your comments and suggestions. I truly appreciate your patience as I adjust and fine-tune things during this learning process.

I recommend making this external to the game, something like a bonus render, or a subscriber poll for a certain amination/comic. Just an opinion


(your character models are criminal, they're so well done)

 

[SD0083]

This game has a great start.

 

[Lewtopia]

Thank you for your answer. I'm not a fan of femboy stuff at all and that's why I find him grating, even if he will be just in the story and not in the sex part, but I understand what you're saying.
I'm looking forward to more content to get a better idea how this is going to work and what direction the game is going to take.

Regarding kinks, what other optional stuff are you planning? I'm asking more because it would be bad to have releases where you get 50% less content because it's kinks that you chose to opt out of.

Is the MC the only futa in the setting or will she meet other girls like her?

What are your plans for sex scenes? I don't expect the MC to be plowing her mom and grandma in the first release, but some games make you grind for years before "real" content starts showing up. You don't have to rush actual sex scenes. Even dream sequences could work or get some side characters that the MC has sex with early, so that you have some sexual content early to keep the interest on.

While I understand the comments about dick size I think it looks good. Hey, it's fantasy futa stuff. Just make sure you don't have her hide her dick in hammer space. I mean no tight pants or anything like that lol.

Optional content will largely depend on how niche or extreme it is. I'll also be mindful of player preferences - for example, some players may prefer to avoid Femboy content entirely, and I want to respect that.

Regarding the intimate scenes, while I don't want to spoil too much, I can share my vision for how family relationships develop with Luna. I'm aiming to create an authentic family dynamic in this game, moving away from the typical adult game approach where characters are family in name only. This means relationships will develop naturally rather than jumping straight to intimate scenes. However, I also understand that players don't want to wait forever to see this content unfold. I'll do my best to find that sweet spot between meaningful relationship development and satisfying intimate scenes.

 

[swiver]

Patreon + Visa + Mastercard on their way to have only the most vanilla non-IRL porn allowed
oh but barely legal teens starting an onlyfans or a patreon page is all fine and dandy... payment processors wont block those transactions

Yeah been hearing also Fansly as it is intended for adult, so fewer restriction. Watersports is the standard example viz what's allowed compared to OF..

You mentioned The Red Room in a way that I can consider you a fan and then you mention that the MC's size unrealistic (which is, but that's not a problem)... Really now? The Red Room has a character with a literal horse cock...
But I do understand your comment though, you are probably worried that such a size may not fit with the Dev's vision for the game. I understand that much, but I would wait and see how the game is going to turn out to be after a few releases

As for her size, for me as long as the Dev show some clothes bulging when MC's get erect (which I find lacking in a lot of games where the futas are BIG), I'm down for any size. Heck, true monsters or very cute PPs are amazing no matter what, if the game is as good as I imagine it will be, we can get even more out of it.

Hardly said "make look like Red Room", have I? Regardless, it's a physics-perception thing. When it's askew it effects you idk if there's psych/cognitive sc. or aesthetics major around probably can explain it to us.

It's moot but nonetheless for the sake of comparison, the horse and if memory serves the rapist cop were maybe almost off, I think with the maid it was more the boobs though than the dick, but it was still better than this. Maid was heavy set and cop was quite tall and broadshouldered so it balanced out with body and the thing itself didn't look off, this has too thin a root to support the perceived weight of the bulging middle. Anyway, btw, horsemaid was something to ignore/live with for me there_ actually half the characters were, but of course they had their enthusiasts so it's not something that a reasonable person may criticise.

I've caugth a somparison to arm size? This thing is more like the thigh. Even if it exist irl it can't be added here without appearing for many of us as if it was patched from a different art with different dimensions...

Great Renders Man keep it up!

looks even hotter than
Eruption Imminent

Very apt comparison. Exactly the same niche I'm hoping this one aims to service. I'm excited for this as MC is a bit girlier, compared to this for example

but maybe it was just the texture of the graphics that didn't do it for me in such images...

I hope the dev sticks to his original vision and keeps the MC dick size the way it is now, I am tired of people on this site feeling extremely entitled to changing a games content just because it doesnt appeal to their own personal kinks and fetishes by bullying and harassing devs to get them to do what they want.

Its honestly pathetic to see so many people behaving like children throwing a tantrum because they dint get what they wanted and its even funnier to see people who don't support devs financially act more entitled than the people who are actually subbed to devs and supporting them financially.

One: don't worry about the people who say "the dick is too big" "oh no, the futa ruins it" and stupid things like that. People who don't like it shouldn't open the thread clearly tagged with futa.
Two: this is great, you are awesome, can't wait to see more!

Though it may well be understandable that one becomes quickly defensive given previous experiences, particularly in ntr threads, it does not excuse you not noticing that most comments weren't against MC having a big dick let alone being a dickgirl. For once this was a discussion by people actually interested in the material of the thread constructively criticising (with an explicit invitation by the dev, I might add) rather than implicitly objecting to its existence.

Try sniffing the post before you start pissing on it once in a while why dontcha

Instead of thinking how hot the scene is I'd be thinking "she's going to fucking murder that poor woman!". It's a massive turn off ON.

You've made a typo, love! But no worries, I gotcha'ya'back

Can we bring back burning at the stake for reviews like this?
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[zh]

I'm a very simple human: I don't need anything else than a beautiful FUTA with a VERY BIG FAT cock to be happy playing those games. The bigger the better.

And I'm very happy right now! Thanks

 

[HeinousFromKansas]

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Reverse for me. I love it I see some self discovery in finding out where else she can deposit

 

[Kodek]

Hardly said "make look like Red Room", have I? Regardless, it's a physics-perception thing. When it's askew it effects you idk if there's psych/cognitive sc. or aesthetics major around probably can explain it to us.

It's moot but nonetheless for the sake of comparison, the horse and if memory serves the rapist cop were maybe almost off, I think with the maid it was more the boobs though than the dick, but it was still better than this. Maid was heavy set and cop was quite tall and broadshouldered so it balanced out with body and the thing itself didn't look off, this has too thin a root to support the perceived weight of the bulging middle. Anyway, btw, horsemaid was something to ignore/live with for me there_ actually half the characters were, but of course they had their enthusiasts so it's not something that a reasonable person may criticise.

I've caugth a somparison to arm size? This thing is more like the thigh. Even if it exist irl it can't be added here without appearing for many of us as if it was patched from a different art with different dimensions...

This was not my point. I never pointed that you asked the Dev to make the game like Red Room. I only pointed that you criticized one aspect of the game that is overly present in another game which you appeared to be a fan of, simple as that. I didn't imply nothing else negative about your comment. If you could live with a horse cock maid, then why can't you survive this big dick cutie?

But you actually touched another problem with many futanari/dick girl games and even games with males: The association between a character height/muscle/appearence and their dick.
This association is harmful and also dumb in many ways for the fetish, because of it most futa games nowadays the futa has to be 3 meters tall with ballon muscles and a fully dom personality for her to have a big dick... I would rather have futas be lean and cute and even petite too, more variety is better. I'm frankly tired of the muscle bound, giantess, big cocked futanari that I actually prefer them to be cute and have a big cock, the striking dichotomy between cuteness/feminity and a bulging cock is incredible hot.

As for the dick having a thin root... I can actually remember at least two trans porn actresses from memory who have/had penises with the exact same format as the MC here (one of them being Mariana Cordoba), of course their penises being smaller. Meaning that it's not an unrealistic dick shape to have, and it's actually not that rare.

Though it may well be understandable that one becomes quickly defensive given previous experiences, particularly in ntr threads, it does not excuse you not noticing that most comments weren't against MC having a big dick let alone being a dickgirl. For once this was a discussion by people actually interested in the material of the thread constructively criticising (with an explicit invitation by the dev, I might add) rather than implicitly objecting to its existence.

This part of the comment was not made towards me, but I think it's a good way to further illustrate my point on this comment section.

My main point is: If the Dev wants to change the MC's size, it needs to be done from their own volition and not because of some huge wave of hate and disaproval. If they find themselves finding the dick to be too big and choose to reduce it out of their own will, I would accept it.
But I don't approve the wave of dislikes and whiny complaints being throw their way just because some people didn't like something. Critics are acceptable of course, but being honest 80% of the negative comments I've seen about the MC's dick size didn't even bother to make a proper critic to the game, they just kind of went "Dick too big! Me no like! Change it now!", so I hope you see where I'm coming from here.

I'm answering you because you actually made a point and gave a good constructive critic, which is everything I want. This is the proper way to build a community and help a Dev polish a game for the better.

 

[Marcus_S]

Yeah been hearing also Fansly as it is intended for adult, so fewer restriction. Watersports is the standard example viz what's allowed compared to OF..

Hardly said "make look like Red Room", have I? Regardless, it's a physics-perception thing. When it's askew it effects you idk if there's psych/cognitive sc. or aesthetics major around probably can explain it to us.

It's moot but nonetheless for the sake of comparison, the horse and if memory serves the rapist cop were maybe almost off, I think with the maid it was more the boobs though than the dick, but it was still better than this. Maid was heavy set and cop was quite tall and broadshouldered so it balanced out with body and the thing itself didn't look off, this has too thin a root to support the perceived weight of the bulging middle. Anyway, btw, horsemaid was something to ignore/live with for me there_ actually half the characters were, but of course they had their enthusiasts so it's not something that a reasonable person may criticise.

I've caugth a somparison to arm size? This thing is more like the thigh. Even if it exist irl it can't be added here without appearing for many of us as if it was patched from a different art with different dimensions...

Very apt comparison. Exactly the same niche I'm hoping this one aims to service. I'm excited for this as MC is a bit girlier, compared to this for example

but maybe it was just the texture of the graphics that didn't do it for me in such images...




Though it may well be understandable that one becomes quickly defensive given previous experiences, particularly in ntr threads, it does not excuse you not noticing that most comments weren't against MC having a big dick let alone being a dickgirl. For once this was a discussion by people actually interested in the material of the thread constructively criticising (with an explicit invitation by the dev, I might add) rather than implicitly objecting to its existence.

But I suppose it is nice to see that the same blind verbal diarrhoea oozes both pro and contra people of any given interest.

Try sniffing the post before you start pissing on it once in a while why dontcha



You've made a typo, love! But no worries, I gotcha'ya'back



I believe this is will be deleted; by its own admission it breaks the review rules.

Thank you for your quote. You are of course right. But please note that I tried to specify that the dev should ignore those comments and people who just come to state how they hate futa and how it ruins the game. Constructive criticism is always good. But "you shouldn't do this cause I don't like it" is not constructive.
(I tried to sniff the post, but now I have to clean the snot from my screen )

 

[Cresil-]

How this monster

can fit in this piece of cloth?

And not even show a bulge.

 

[swiver]

This was not my point. I never pointed that you asked the Dev to make the game like Red Room. I only pointed that you criticized one aspect of the game that is overly present in another game which you appeared to be a fan of, simple as that. I didn't imply nothing else negative about your comment. If you could live with a horse cock maid, then why you can't survive this big dick cutie?

But you actually touched another problem with many futanari/dick girl games and even games with a males: The association between a character height/muscle/appearence and their dick.
This association is harmful and also dumb in many ways for the fetish, because of it most futa games nowadays the futa has to be 3 meters tall with ballon muscles and a fully dom personality for her to have a big dick... I would rather have futas be lean and cute and even petite too, more variety is better. I'm frankly tired of the muscle bound, giantess, big cocked futanari that I actually prefer them to be cute and have a big cock, the striking dichotomy between cuteness/feminity and a bulging cock is incredible hot.

As for the dick having a thin root... I can actually remember at least two trans porn actresses from memory who have/had penises with the exact same format as the MC here (one of them being Mariana Cordoba), of course their penises being smaller. Meaning that it's not an unrealistic dick shape to have, and it's actually not that rare.

Well I guess I shouldn't have added the second part. My answer was simply that the maid's dimensions did not cause me the same cognitive fuzz.

For the sake of argument though, by living with it I meant the whole character was something to ignore while I enjoyed the rest of the game. Had the maid been a key LI or MC I simply would not have played (and before someone jumps in about my being a buzzkill, I would have been a good lad and not commented either as I would've known to respect this was catered to someone else). That would've been a starkly different situation though, as I'm into this, totes dude, also the issue is with the main character and it is a demo, so I'm not exactly being an ass in recommending something unfeasible that's been chugging along fine before my big mouth emergéd...

This part of the comment was not made towards me, but I think it's a good way to further illustrate my point on this comment section.

My main point is: If the Dev wants to change the MC's size, it needs to be done from their own volition and not because of some huge wave of hate and disaproval. If they find themselves finding the dick to be too big and choose to reduce it out of their own will, I would accept it.
But I don't approve the wave of dislikes and whiny complaints being throw their way just because some people didn't like something. Critics are acceptable of course, but being honest 80% of the negative comments I've seen about the MC's dick size didn't even bother to make a proper critic to the game, they just kind of went "Dick too big! Me no like! Change it now!", so I hope you see where I'm coming from here.

I'm answering you because you actually made a point and gave a good constructive critic, which is everything I want. This is the proper way to build a community and help a Dev polish a game for the better.

I do not think volition is under threat by opinions, let alone ones they've invited. As to your concern for etiquette, I do take to heart, but would nonetheless say that some familiarity may not be altogether unwelcome, let alone amount to bullying or hate. Much was abrupt, but not necessarily unfriendly. I do trust you don't mean me, though, as my comment consisted mainly in praise with at least some semblance of an argument to my criticism.

I won't be double-checking, so maybe wrong, but, honestly, again, this thread left a relatively positive impression on me as far as the tenor of critics is concerned. The yea's were by far the ruder, which one might well ignore, only then one might also believe it and dismiss the constructive criticism and valid suggestions which the dev may want to consider. Of course, consider does not necessarily imply implement (alliteration accidental, lol).

 

[swiver]

Thank you for your quote. You are of course right. But please note that I tried to specify that the dev should ignore those comments and people who just come to state how they hate futa and how it ruins the game. Constructive criticism is always good. But "you shouldn't do this cause I don't like it" is not constructive.
(I tried to sniff the post, but now I have to clean the snot from my screen )

How this monster
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can fit in this piece of cloth?
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And not even show a bulge.

Cute shorts though

 

[Lewtopia]

How this monster
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can fit in this piece of cloth?
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And not even show a bulge.

 

[PyoT]

Would be hilarious if it were a tiny dick when not erect.

"That's what all the fuss is about?" ...

 

[Lynava]

It's a pretty good start, but I, like everyone else, think the dick is too big. And I think the developer should give an answer about the size. Either hold a vote or take and say yes I will reduce the dick or no I will not reduce the dick. I think reducing it by 1/3 and you'll be fine. Because avoiding the question, as far as I'm concerned, makes the situation worse.
Well so I'll keep an eye on the project, even though MC isn't futa, it's interesting to watch the story progress.
Good luck to the developer.

 

[tmu500]

while it is still a demo, the game has a good potential. Keep up the great work.

 

[Rabonixxx]

It's a pretty good start, but I, like everyone else, think the dick is too big. And I think the developer should give an answer about the size. Either hold a vote or take and say yes I will reduce the dick or no I will not reduce the dick. I think reducing it by 1/3 and you'll be fine. Because avoiding the question, as far as I'm concerned, makes the situation worse.
Well so I'll keep an eye on the project, even though MC isn't futa, it's interesting to watch the story progress.
Good luck to the developer.

If Dev made the size like this is because likes it this way, don´t need to answer some complaints about it; there are a lot of people supporting. Can´t believe with an amazing renders and animations people complain about a big fat delicious dick. Enjoy the story and the game, obviously there will be things to improve maybe, but size is not one of them at all, it´s the package perfect .