VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [v1.0 Ch.1] [Lewtopia]

4.40 star(s) 69 Votes

Ken Moreno

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May 16, 2017
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I enjoy slow burns and get that this game is going for that but we seriously need some sex scenes at the very least with some random side character or hell even a masturbating scene especially with how long the updates for this game take to release and believe me as much as I enjoy AVN for the story downloading a new update with 0 lewds just makes me want to skip it and play the game until the next one, I think lewds get enchanced by story but the same can be said about the story it needs some lewds to enhance the story as well.

Anyways see you guys in 5 more months I wont bother downloading a 500 render update with no lewds I will just read the story parts next update which I hope it has at least a sex scene by then.
 

Gari Fuze

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Feb 19, 2020
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I forgot about this game but this update is diapointing, i guess i will note the name of the dev, if next update is still so little, in so much "time" i guess the dev will fishish on my "never give money list".
So, about a year passed and there is not a single sex scene in this game? This is H-Game website right?

Yet, the game was bombed by 5-star reviews without even proving that it is an H-game to begin with.

I am not sure why so many game "developers" insist on being great writers and think their stories are so great, that people are dying to read another chapter of pointless blah blah.
 

Snusen

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May 27, 2018
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Nice update, Nice story bits and all that. But i can already tell that it's starting to hit an slow burner approach.

Look dev, Your dialogue and so far story is great. But Most people are probably just playing this not only for the story but to also see this red head plow some pussy, or jerk off. Sort of hitting the same issue that Eruption Imminent has, great story, great characters but the main thing people on here is after is lacking. Straight up anything lewd is good enough i think, Seeing that gilf.....mmmmmmmmmmm
 

Birdnman993

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The game is still in its infancy, people are too eager, they want to fly an F-35 fighter jet before they can even crawl. I recently saw a title that had been around for two years and was a giant mess, with lots of useless options. Here, at least I can say that the characters are enjoyable, and Luna is great. despite her appearance, which at first glance seems shy and delicate, I feel like she has an intense fire inside her that is waiting to burn everything down and dominate the bitches of the city.

Another great feature is the work done on the menus and interface, not to mention that it is now available in several languages, which is much appreciated. At this stage in life, every game that comes out should have several languages available.
 
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Burnknight

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May 11, 2017
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The game is very good, I like the slow burn chapter one, but it seriously needs to ramp up the excitement in chapter two. Slow burn no action can get you so far, otherwise everything is very well done, maaaybe the dick size is a bit too giant but i can live with that.
 

BC

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Jul 13, 2017
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It doesn't touch the soul, there are no interesting plot twists, no characters that stand out in any way ( exept visual look), even the main character, due to her complexes and fear of revealing herself, doesn't come across as very good. I could go on like this for a long time, because I read everything that was written in the game and saw that the plot doesn't deserve all the attention, if you defend this plot, then most likely you haven't read too many books in your life.
It's one thing to focus on the plot, but it's another thing to not add any lewd content to a porn game at all...
Based on the merit of this reply, it is safe to say that I am far better read than you lol.

"the main character, due to her complexes and fear of revealing herself, doesn't come across as very good"

lol wtf does this sentence even mean?

You can't see it, but there is a lot of complexity in these character relationships with some nice setup for future relationships and conflicts.

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Sure, I'd love more H-content, but for a first timer, this is pretty damn good, and the dev is one person. There's only so many ways to spin a wheel, and a lot of archetypes are covered here. We have moved past the totally mortified phase to the experimental phase, so it is easier and more organic to get spicy from here.

Bu yes, please keep insulting my ability to analyze the plot of a game. It is so well-founded and convincing.
 
4.40 star(s) 69 Votes