This game feels like someone had an idea for a game and then gave up on it halfway through...
On top of that, it seems like the translation was done by someone with a relatively poor grasp of English. Mainly because I'm pretty sure I saw spelling mistakes at a couple of points, and MTL doesn't do those. It chooses the wrong words and makes weird sentence structures, but the words are in the DB and it can't make those mistakes.
Not gonna check to be sure though. This fame isn't really worth replaying unless you're really, REALLY bored and have nothing better to do with your life.
Not the worst way to waste a couple of hours, but not a particularly brilliant H-game either.