TheMilkMan
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- Sep 7, 2017
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Wow this is fantastic! Going to need as much Mina and Hana as I can get. Also need Veronica to chokeslam me through a table.
There's not really scenes with Victoria per se, so far they've all been a single image or two overlayed on top of key moments I want to get hamfisted with.can someone tell me when the victoria scenes / flashbacks happen? like what character/dialogue do i have to interact with to get the scene
so excluding rosalind's scenes, can u tell me all of the other characters which trigger victoria scenes? or can you just provide pics as an attachment?There's not really scenes with Victoria per se, so far they've all been a single image or two overlayed on top of key moments I want to get hamfisted with.
And there's quite a few of them, most of them are tied to Rosalind's content. I don't recall if any of them is missable there, with the exception of a player determinant scene where the MC chickens out during the Rosalind part of exhibition 2 and Ian steps up to fill his role. There's also a flashback during the interview with Felicia's husband, which if I recall correctly, requires the player character to both have sex with her and then choose to get indignant over Felicia's wealth/being a giant ho.
Jesus, Bruh. You want us to rustle up some lotion and tissues for you as well while we're at it?so excluding rosalind's scenes, can u tell me all of the other characters which trigger victoria scenes? or can you just provide pics as an attachment?
Too much work to track down all of them, especially with details. But vaguely:can someone tell me when the victoria scenes / flashbacks happen? like what character/dialogue do i have to interact with to get the scene
I welcome criticism, but I would caution that you keep your assumptions tempered over how much of it will be actionable and weigh that against the time it will take you to compose some rather lengthy (by your standards) to judge if its worth the effort for you. A lot of the time, I find people conflate "what I would've done or would've liked to seen" type suggestions as constructive feedback, when it really is just a statement of preference on character/content and not in support of what would've best served the story's themes or plot beats. Which is something that is made much more tricky to do as an outsider of the creative process since the story has not yet reached a conclusion to judge it on.With all that said there are quite a lot of issues of Ch3Upd4 and Ch4Upd1 i'd like to bring to your and this threads attention, so expect some rather lengthy (even by my standards) posts. PC grew quite big in content, and while i admire your work and respect your creative vision i believe there are parts which could be done better within the borders of your worldbuilding and without tarnishing the essence of your narration. It may not look like it, but i am really hesitant to butt into anothers creative vision uninvited, but i am at a point where i consider to mod your script for myself, which would be probably the best course of action if i wouldn't delude myself into believing you guys could find my points actually viable and interesting.
Contracted authors working for a publisher usually enjoy the support of a lecturer to review their work and to help them in their writing, and i like the idea we, the fanbase, could partly fill this role for you guys. But i don't want to impose myself on your work, so please always treat my utterances as mere humble suggestions or outright discard them as the garbage they are: the unwanted ramblings of a conceited fan.
I mean... I haven't played the game but from what I can gather from this thread the mom isn't a LI, so it technically isn't cucking/NTR?Wow... And they say this isn't a cuck game... smh my head.
That by definition makes it a cuck game already.I mean... I haven't played the game but from what I can gather from this thread the mom isn't a LI, so it technically isn't cucking/NTR?
The characters are from a web comic (non-smut) of GIL's that predates this project.is this silver hair and fox girl cameo from other game? View attachment 2290026
That by definition makes it a cuck game already.
If she isn't fucking you, she's fucking other guys, and that's cucking in my book.
That's what a cuck would say.The characters are from a web comic (non-smut) of GIL's that predates this project.
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Thank you for your answer!I would caution that you keep your assumptions tempered over how much of it will be actionable and weigh that against the time it will take you to compose some rather lengthy (by your standards) to judge if its worth the effort for you.