VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[dolfe67]

NOPE. This is one of the longest updates.

I counted 24 scenes in the last ch4 part 3 update.

I've counted 34 scenes in this update so far, and I haven't finished it yet.

This update has many branches and variations, on only one playthrough it may feel a bit short. At least shorter than the few previous ones.

Shoutout to details like Felicia's expression if you don't press her on using blackmail, the talking animations in the car, the establishing animations for the art exhibit, the taillight streaks, the kind of awkward phone call with Veronica, and that support rather than PDA was what Felicia was looking for from the date.

One of my favorite images of this update:

Spoiler: <3 <3 <3

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[Mr.Nonnypants]

So I absolute adore this update. Each scene is the gold standard for writing, rendering, sound design, pacing. Fuck everything is on point. However I was thrown for a loop when Felicia stated that she has kids. I don't remember this at all and I think it might actually weaken her character. The idea that she is this nymphomaniac socialite but also an extremely deep character is perfect to stand out against Veronica and Rosalind, however I feel like giving her kids (even though they are always offscreen) might step into Rosalind and even Lucy's domain. With each character being so distinct this might be an oversight into the metafetishes presented.

If I am incorrect in this assessment I am more than welcome to be corrected.

PS: Using Steam purely for advertising is also a tactic I recommend. Not sure about their guidelines but I know this project deserves more than just my pitiful support. Piratesoftware has really good insight into using Steam to bring in an entirely new audience.

 

[TD1900]

So I absolute adore this update. Each scene is the gold standard for writing, rendering, sound design, pacing. Fuck everything is on point. However I was thrown for a loop when Felicia stated that she has kids. I don't remember this at all and I think it might actually weaken her character. The idea that she is this nymphomaniac socialite but also an extremely deep character is perfect to stand out against Veronica and Rosalind, however I feel like giving her kids (even though they are always offscreen) might step into Rosalind and even Lucy's domain. With each character being so distinct this might be an oversight into the metafetishes presented.

If I am incorrect in this assessment I am more than welcome to be corrected.

She has stepchildren. She's mentioned them once or twice before, plus you see their photos in her penthouse.

 

[Mr.Nonnypants]

She has stepchildren. She's mentioned them once or twice before, plus you see their photos in her penthouse.

I stand corrected. In fact I am happy to be wrong. I completely forgot about them.

(Kathleen can never be best girl so long as Dalia opposes her.)

 

[Madm]

is there a compressed version of this new update?

 

[Ungawa]

So I absolute adore this update. Each scene is the gold standard for writing, rendering, sound design, pacing. Fuck everything is on point. However I was thrown for a loop when Felicia stated that she has kids. I don't remember this at all and I think it might actually weaken her character. The idea that she is this nymphomaniac socialite but also an extremely deep character is perfect to stand out against Veronica and Rosalind, however I feel like giving her kids (even though they are always offscreen) might step into Rosalind and even Lucy's domain. With each character being so distinct this might be an oversight into the metafetishes presented.

If I am incorrect in this assessment I am more than welcome to be corrected.

First diner meet up, she mentions how those two are her world when all the Carnations are beginning to meet every Saturday.

In the penthouse, you see the kids and they come up as he's going out.

In regards to her character, really pay attention to what she says and what drives her in regards to art and where she hangs out when she needs to get away.

What I'd say is that if you've ever read Alice in Wonderland, every character has two sides to them. For Felicia, her outgoing nympho socialite side hides the intelligence and skills she has in other areas. There's certainly more but like Kathleen, I'll leave you to find it.

 

[Shawnchapp]

So I absolute adore this update. Each scene is the gold standard for writing, rendering, sound design, pacing. Fuck everything is on point. However I was thrown for a loop when Felicia stated that she has kids. I don't remember this at all and I think it might actually weaken her character. The idea that she is this nymphomaniac socialite but also an extremely deep character is perfect to stand out against Veronica and Rosalind, however I feel like giving her kids (even though they are always offscreen) might step into Rosalind and even Lucy's domain. With each character being so distinct this might be an oversight into the metafetishes presented.

If I am incorrect in this assessment I am more than welcome to be corrected.

PS: Using Steam purely for advertising is also a tactic I recommend. Not sure about their guidelines but I know this project deserves more than just my pitiful support. Piratesoftware has really good insight into using Steam to bring in an entirely new audience.

Wait are the kids actually hers? i must've missed that part i could've sworn they were just her husband kids making or step mother by marriage only...

 

[420691312]

maaaaaan why the hell you gotta ruin a perfectly good threesome with analingus

 

[arth-dom]

Another great update. I love that I can be both nice to the girls outside of sexual encounters but still be dominant during sex. Too many games make it so if you want to be dominant in bed, you must be an asshole at all times.

this

 

[Takkatakka]

is there a compressed version of this new update?

Yes, but you have to search through the thread yourself, since they aren't posted in the OPs anymore.

 

[Ragnar]

Lucy scene was high voltage. On the other hand is a shame you cant bang the shit out of the journo in the blackmail route.

 

[thememeguy123]

Why would you think that?? Feeling compassion is ALWAYS a good thing - fictional character or not. It's an priceless character trait. Preserve it in your heart at all costs! Being cold-hearted looks only good in gay hollywood movies. No one was ever happy being cold hearted. The sexual desire in me sadly is like genghis khan, but listening to one's sexual desire is a huge mistake anyway.

Can you get roses route without using her in the first scene? But yes, I mostly meant that one gets locked out of her route if one doesn't apologize to her after doing her - in my understanding because she sees no way manipulating/using a cold-hearted edwin.

Contrary to the modern narrative, not enjoying other dicks on your girl is a sign of an intact mind. Virgins were highly esteemed for about... always - but alas, modern clownworld knows better.

May all of our plans for rose come to fuition

Thank you for the kind words but once again, it gets to a point you keep thinking about stuff way too hard, emotions flowing into it etc. it's per se too much "good" for your own good.

Yes, she offers the deal to you if you don't use her in first scene.

Not much to add here

Good luck to you and thanks for the nice talk. Let's see what happens in the next update.

 

[dolfe67]

PS: Using Steam purely for advertising is also a tactic I recommend. Not sure about their guidelines but I know this project deserves more than just my pitiful support. Piratesoftware has really good insight into using Steam to bring in an entirely new audience.

Because of the render engine used (Honey Select), it can't be on Steam due to copyright issues

 

[RandomQuiggle]

Have the devs read Stirner-egoisim-type stuff? MC's conversation with Chuck at the restaurant is genuinely thought-provoking philosophically (plus many other conversations in the game ofc, really liked the convos about art with Felicia too)

 

[testers123456]

Wait are the kids actually hers? i must've missed that part i could've sworn they were just her husband kids making or step mother by marriage only...

TD mentioned they are her step children but to add a little more to it, they are basically the children from Elias and his previous wife that past away.

 

[Ragnar]

 

[Deleted member 7173412]

man I need the android port

 

[Randomguy3478]

Thank you for the kind words but once again, it gets to a point you keep thinking about stuff way too hard, emotions flowing into it etc. it's per se too much "good" for your own good.

Yes, she offers the deal to you if you don't use her in first scene.

Not much to add here

Good luck to you and thanks for the nice talk. Let's see what happens in the next update.

Not sure. Its an interesting topic, but probably not the right time and place.

Wasn't aware of that. Changes things a bit, then.

Thank you as well. Hope you make yourself a nice day.

 

[Deleted member 3788572]

First off, last time I didn't save at the end screen, so I had to replay the last parts of the previous update. It reminded me of how great the scene with Edwin face-fucking Britteny in the stall and Veronica standing outside is. Always makes me chuckle.

As a Felicia fan I ate very well this update obviously. The date I was looking forward to delivered in every aspect. Others are certainly better at describing all the great details, so I'll leave it at that.
I also enjoyed the different conversations, Ian - Rosie, August - Otto/Hana, Chuck - MC/Sophia, etc.
Lastly, the music. PC is one of the few games where I don't turn off the ingame music. Always great tracks that fit the mood.

Looking forward to the next update and ultimately, to the next exhibition. Expecting another punch in the gut. It's been a while, np? Thanks!

 

[sunaboz]

Lucy scene was high voltage. On the other hand is a shame you cant bang the shit out of the journo in the blackmail route.

Maybe we will get a chance, it certainly looked like Liza wanted to fuck Edwin once he asserted dominance over her. I wold like to see it to be honest but there are probably better scenes for GIL and TD to work on (e.g. Ian x Victoria, Edwin x Grace, Chuck Edwin x Sophia, anything with Lucy who is IMO the second hottest character in the whole game, etc.).