VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[pinuz1]

I wonder is Victoria is the reason some people drop the game at the start? I'm by no means a "vanilla" guy but anything related with her never made me disgusted or have a feeling of wanting to drop the game. The way her character is handled in the story is very well done imo.

In general I hear a lot of people say this game is too extreme and I've kinda never agreed with that, the only scene I disliked and felt a bit disgusted towards was Veronica's punishment during the first exhibition, but other than that the whole game is nothing too crazy and very enjoyable, hell it's got some more wholesome scenes than many other games that try to be as vanilla as possible.

 

[DezeNaam]

Maybe a stupid question but, can I just download and start with this version or are there links to Ch. 1 through Ch. 3 before I start this one?
Tried searching here but can only find Ch. 3 versions (I use Android).

 

[Takkatakka]

Maybe a stupid question but, can I just download and start with this version or are there links to Ch. 1 through Ch. 3 before I start this one?
Tried searching here but can only find Ch. 3 versions (I use Android).

The version in the OP should contain every chapter. There are no separate versions for individual chapters as far as I know.

I wonder is Victoria is the reason some people drop the game at the start?

Honestly there seem to be a lot more people hoping to see more of Victoria, than there are people who might've dropped the game due to her.

 

[UmbralKnight]

so when does the next version come out ?

 

[dolfe67]

so when does the next version come out ?

This year. Stay tuned.

 

[xslayermkdx]

Anyone having Save File when MC Dreaming about Grace?

 

[Dark479]

Anyone having Save File when MC Dreaming about Grace?

Not sure if my mind in completely blanking out right now but...who is Grace? I mean there are a ton of minor and side characters like Dalia, Nicolette, Harper, Sophia, etc. etc. but the name Grace rings zero bells and her name does not come up a single time in the game's guide at all.

 

[ename144]

Not sure if my mind in completely blanking out right now but...who is Grace? I mean there are a ton of minor and side characters like Dalia, Nicolette, Harper, Sophia, etc. etc. but the name Grace rings zero bells and her name does not come up a single time in the game's guide at all.

Grace is Killian's mom. The MC had a crush on her growing up. It's implied he still has a thing for her, but so far it only really comes up if you don't hook up with Hana after her big date.

 

[Dark479]

Grace is Killian's mom. The MC had a crush on her growing up. It's implied he still has a thing for her, but so far it only really comes up if you don't hook up with Hana after her big date.
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Thanks for the reminder. I literally only saw her once in the game so far and completely forgot her name. I mean I did remember the whole event but only remembered her as Ian's mom, completely forgot her name.

 

[GMDominance]

Not sure if my mind in completely blanking out right now but...who is Grace? I mean there are a ton of minor and side characters like Dalia, Nicolette, Harper, Sophia, etc. etc. but the name Grace rings zero bells and her name does not come up a single time in the game's guide at all.

If I recall correctly, Grace is Killian's mom

 

[tuff_luvr]

Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better

 

[Adhdclassic]

Have question was MCs mom once apart of the organization he works for.

 

[ffive]

Nobody talks like this

Correction: nobody you know talks like this. No need to be upset some people have more extensive vocabulary.

 

[Dr. Mick]

Have question was MCs mom once apart of the organization he works for.

Not that we know of.
She did some porn when she was younger, to pay the bills as a single mom, but nothing in years.
To our knowledge she's never worked for the club or organization where the MC works, unless the company she did porn shoots for had some connection. We don't know enough about that past to say for certain, but she doesn't have any current connection.

 

[Fapparition]

Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better

I actually find pleasure in the way writer choosing their words. To have an open dictionary while wading through meticulously crafted sentences might be somewhat grueling, yet one should not disregard the irrefutable positive effect this kind of spelling inflict. I hope you will be able to reconsider your deplorable stand and bask with us in cordial felling those words provide.

 

[Ottoeight]

Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this

Have you ever heard of the difference between spoken and written language? ever heard of the notions of literary style and linguistic register?

 

[Idontplay]

Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better

Actually I think the dialogues are pretty simple; simple at a middle school level. I suppose this is due to the fact we went to different schools.

 

[dolfe67]

MC's thoughts/narrator's lines are quite wordy with elevated language indeed. I don't remember if dialogues are too. But yeah some characters wouldn't speak with that kind of language, being whores or criminal. But the patrons and Chuck/Kat could.

 

[Ass prefer]

Im liking the theme setup, characters, animations, but. Why the fuck is the dialogue so wordy? Nobody talks like this, its kind of ruining the VN when a girl is dirty talking using words like hedonistic, saccharine tone, simulacrum. Sounds like the writer just randomly adds words. and then uses the synonym tool on Word to the most complicated word he finds. Im only in week 2 but its making it kind of a drag to get through. You could say its because its written as the inner dialogue of a nerdy med student, but even the girls sometimes talk with a bunch of wordspaghetti. Really hope it gets better

I completely agree with you. Although, at times, I liked this attempt at intelligence.

 

[ffive]

MC's thoughts/narrator's lines are quite wordy with elevated language indeed. I don't remember if dialogues are too. But yeah some characters wouldn't speak with that kind of language, being whores or criminal. But the patrons and Chuck/Kat could.

Hey now, criminals and whores can be pretty articulate and educated, too. For that matter both Chuck and Kat are criminals but still know words with more than three syllables. And Edwin's mother was a whore, didn't prevent her from enjoying Italian cinema.