VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

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sunaboz

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Meabe37 said:
Yes? That's exactly what i'm saying. It's Week 3, not week 1. And she still kinda outside. Will she have an bigger impact or be more connected to the club in the last week? Maybe? But for now, she feel disconnected to me.

Like i said, she is great and like her a lot (A LOT) but i just wish at this point she didn't felt like a bit of an outsider.
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So it's been only a month and she had one boyfriend only and you want her to end up in a brothel... That will take some real writing skills to do it convincingly. And it's strange you're saying that about Mina but not about Victoria for example. The fact she's connected to Edwin is enough, he after all is at the center. She's disconnected from the club but not from the story.
 
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Meabe37 said:
Yes? That's exactly what i'm saying. It's Week 3, not week 1. And she still kinda outside. Will she have an bigger impact or be more connected to the club in the last week? Maybe? But for now, she feel disconnected to me.

Like i said, she is great and like her a lot (A LOT) but i just wish at this point she didn't felt like a bit of an outsider.
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Leave us alone. Most of all, leave Mina alone.

Most - 99,99999999999% - people here don't want to see the only main girls who aren't prostitutes pimped. Leave Mina and Hana (and Victoria) alone.
 
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ename144 said:
I feel like we've discussed Sophia to within an inch of her life, so I don't see how you're surprised that my rating of her is very different than yours.
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Hi again!
I know we´ve discussed Sophia often and it was clear to me that you would not rank her highly, but I did not estimeta it being so low.
 
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Meabe37

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Ottoeight said:
Leave us alone. Most of all, leave Mina alone.

Most - 99,99999999999% - people here don't want to see the only main girls who aren't prostitutes pimped. Leave Mina and Hana (and Victoria) alone.
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?? What are you talking about. I never asked for Mina to become a prostitute. And it would ruined her character. But it dosn't mean she can't be a bit more part of the club plot.

As for Hana... after seeing this update and her scenes, it feel like she is slipping dangerously into her role and the whole club thing and liking it. she is not as good as people think imo, don't be blind
 
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Meabe37 said:
?? What are you talking about. I never asked for Mina to become a prostitute. And it would ruined her character. But it dosn't mean she can't be a bit more part of the club plot.

As for Hana... after seeing this update and her scenes, it feel like she is slipping dangerously into her role and the whole club thing, she is not as good as people think imo, don't be blind
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Mina being on the outside and externally related to the club adds to the story and realism overall (my opinion). Not every one should be tied up to it and immediately sucked into it directly. She being inside the club at any time will get her too much into it at least.
 
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imagica

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Cmon, it feels that Mina is less connected to the story, only because this exact update is mostly happening inside the club. Mina still have enough connections to all the cast and of course will stay relevant.
 
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