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Gundamu0079

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I hate to break it to you but potential is all you're going to get.
If you have been playing this since the original game you know that, as it never took off. The dev is good at picking models and making renders, but when it comes to a story it remains disjointed and rather poor. Oh and the music is rather nice.
If you can deal with that low quality of story, then there is a lot of good renders to enjoy, but don't get your hopes up. It's been years now and nothing has changed, so why would it now.
even pandora 1 was a bit lacking lol
this seems better but story is still weird
 

88stanford88

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even pandora 1 was a bit lacking lol
this seems better but story is still weird
it's not that if some people doesn't like the story, that makes a void star a bad story writer.
you confirm that he his own style that for you weird...

Weird doesn't mean awful for everyone

Personally I believe that his way of writing shows intelligence and desire to be different ... sometimes surprising and not obvious. I like his style a lot and I'm not the only one.
 
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I liked the first game and I'm enjoying this second chapter too, but the updates are like 3 minutes long now. At this pace, when the game will be over it will be possible to finish it in an hour or so.
 

somguy

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Thanks for the update.
Old man scene started out hot, not too much near the end. Don't know bout you but staring at an old man's ass isn't sexy, nice side view where you can actually see the girl would be better imo, or doggy. Aside from that rest was pretty good
 
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Dualyth

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Well, Ellie became my favorite character as soon as she got introduced, and it's a good thing that the dev took his time before finally giving her the D.

Though, I'm kind of surprised how little of an event that was. Ellie herself doesn't even remark that she just gave her first time to an old bastard she never met just to stay on the good side of a guy giving her money for her mother. She was more hesitant blowing her first guy.
The intercourse was quick too and didn't go into her thoughts.

Don't get me wrong the scene itself was cool (even though she had a thin black line on her upper thighs), but I guess I was expecting it to be a bigger deal for her, and expecting more of her thoughts and feelings about the act.
Oh well, she's still my favorite, and I'm glad that she got her cherry popped by such a pillar of the nsfw games' universe, the Ugly Old Bastard.
 
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Dr Secz

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I hate to break it to you but potential is all you're going to get.
If you have been playing this since the original game you know that, as it never took off. The dev is good at picking models and making renders, but when it comes to a story it remains disjointed and rather poor. Oh and the music is rather nice.
If you can deal with that low quality of story, then there is a lot of good renders to enjoy, but don't get your hopes up. It's been years now and nothing has changed, so why would it now.
Good renders and graphics, deserves better story line. I am enjoying, i really do... But... Always that but...
 

Vlad11

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Well, Ellie became my favorite character as soon as she got introduced, and it's a good thing that the dev took his time before finally giving her the D.

Though, I'm kind of surprised how little of an event that was. Ellie herself doesn't even remark that she just gave her first time to an old bastard she never met just to stay on the good side of a guy giving her money for her mother. She was more hesitant blowing her first guy.
The intercourse was quick too and didn't go into her thoughts.

Don't get me wrong the scene itself was cool (even though she had a thin black line on her upper thighs), but I guess I was expecting it to be a bigger deal for her, and expecting more of her thoughts and feelings about the act.
Oh well, she's still my favorite, and I'm glad that she got her cherry popped by such a pillar of the nsfw games' universe, the Ugly Old Bastard.
Agreed.

I thought that the scene of the Ellie loss of virginity and her reflections would be much more interesting and emotional. And here it seems that she did not even notice how she lost virginity.

Or the penis in the old man was too small and did not tear the hymen?

I think void star should correct this in the next version.
 

boulimanus

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Agreed.

I thought that the scene of the Ellie loss of virginity and her reflections would be much more interesting and emotional. And here it seems that she did not even notice how she lost virginity.

Or the penis in the old man was too small and did not tear the hymen?

I think void star should correct this in the next version.
Nah, you lot just don't get it.
It is exceptional story telling and amazing writing skills that are simply beyond your comprehension...
:sneaky:
 

Vlad11

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Nah, you lot just don't get it.
It is exceptional story telling and amazing writing skills that are simply beyond your comprehension...
:sneaky:
Don't make me laugh ))) Story not bad, but event with Ellie and old man sex not very well worked out. My opinion that these events should be reworked in the next versions.
 
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88stanford88

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I thought that the scene of the Ellie loss of virginity and her reflections would be much more interesting and emotional. And here it seems that she did not even notice how she lost virginity.

Or the penis in the old man was too small and did not tear the hymen?
Not all girls react in the same way especially if they are used to fingering themselves like Ellie...
Ellie is also a squirter and she was drenched like hell after the 3 fingers she received in her pussy before the old guy cock
Ellie may have already lost her virginity (if she was) when Scarlet almost fisted her to make her squirt on teacher Ishani face at day 11 or before
squirt on.jpg Shiani!.05.jpg

And as you can see there is no "virgin" tag in this game.

The VoidStar style is not that he have to write everything...
the visual renders and animation describe the story without the need to write long dialogues to explain what you are able to see with your eyes.
This way of writing allows you to use your imagination to understand why the scene was worked the way it is

That scene is perfect and well worked
Ellie is not the type of girl that starts to cry like a child just for breaking her hymene :cool:
She is strong-willed enough not to give any satisfaction to those old guys
she is the one who decided to do it! Super strong girl|
 
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Vlad11

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Not all girls react in the same way especially if they are used to fingering themselves like Ellie...
Ellie is also a squirter and she was drenched like hell after the 3 fingers she received in her pussy before the old guy cock
Ellie may have already lost her virginity (if she was) when Scarlet almost fisted her to make her squirt on teacher Ishani face at day 11 or before
View attachment 2406954 View attachment 2406957

And as you can see there is no "virgin" tag in this game.

The VoidStar style is not that he have to write everything...
the visual renders and animation describe the story without the need to write long dialogues to explain what you are able to see with your eyes.
This way of writing allows you to use your imagination to understand why the scene was worked the way it is

That scene is perfect and well worked
Ellie is not the type of girl that starts to cry like a child just for breaking her hymene :cool:
She is strong-willed enough not to give any satisfaction to those old guys
she is the one who decided to do it! Super strong girl|
I disagree.
The game says many times that Ellie is virgin before sex with the old man. And Ellie not super strong but clever and she is not unscrupulous slut in this monent.
Some emotions (not necessarily crying) - sign of normal healthy people in this situation - she is not a robot or doll. Вesides, Ellie was more hesitant blowing a school guard.

And in her dreams, Ellie imagined that she would lose her virginity by having sex with a handsome guy.

In scenes with Scalet not was signs of loosing virginity. And old man noticed that Ellie never had sex.

My opinion not changed. I think that scenes with Eliie and old man sex events should be reworked in the next versions. Scenes of this impotant moments should be much more expanded. Now this scene is not perfect.
 
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