VN Ren'Py Pandora's Box 2 [v0.30] [Void Star]

[88stanford88]

The game says many times that Ellie is virgin before sex with the old man. And Ellie not super strong but clever and she is not unscrupulous slut in this monent.

you are free to disagree with me but I have write exactly why VoidStar worked that scene like it is and why the scene is perfect!
THAT SCENE WILL NEVER BE REWORKED if you don't like the story you are free to don't play it...

But the point is here:
This is the power of VoidStar that makes the story so interesting that even those who don't like it can't avoid to downloading the next update soon as ready.
The scene with the grandpa is a choice that you are free to don't take (but was irresistible for you to click, do you? (amazing voidstar writing skill)
You are complaining about a single scene as if it is disconnected from the reality in which the protagonists are living and it seems that you do not understand a shit about the whole storyline of this modern family

The way is wrote mean the losing the virginity is not a drama for Ellie as it is not for her Mom Nadia

THIS IS PURE AMAZING WRITING SKILL

I know that in the game there are many dialogs about her virginity and this is the point she was a slut for sure.
She decided to get money and She is proud to help her mom and happily (with little shame) she squirted in old guys hands
(in the dialog box there is a little hell-heart)

This is pure sexual pleasure...
She want help her mom!

Ellie was very proud of her choice, the developer described the scene in that way to make you understand that Ellie lives with her mom who sacrificed everything to make her go to college ... in the conditions of this family the fact that Ellie is no longer a virgin and... that it hasn't been a "drama inside a more biggest drama" is a relief for everyone! And the prove is here:

Nadia said:"She has really grown up. I am so proud"
The storyline in this game is a real drama and for all of them if Ellie is no more virgin IS NOTHING!
Being a virgin is overrated in any modern big city and only has value for old-fashioned, religious and bigoted people..
this story tells how this modern "open" family lives today in a big city!
This is not a storyline in VANILLA STYLE!

I suggest you to restart this great story from the beginning and i'm sure you will agree with my point of view because the story is very well written!

trust me creating drama in the scene where she is losing her virginity would have been illogical and meaningless (TOTAL NON-SENSE)... personally I would have laughed out loud and complained to the developer.

 

[boulimanus]

*eating_popcorn*

 

[Vlad11]

you are free to disagree with me but I have write exactly why VoidStar worked that scene like it is and why the scene is perfect!
THAT SCENE WILL NEVER BE REWORKED if you don't like the story you are free to don't play it...

But the point is here:
This is the power of VoidStar that makes the story so interesting that even those who don't like it can't avoid to downloading the next update soon as ready.
The scene with the grandpa is a choice that you are free to don't take (but was irresistible for you to click, do you? (amazing voidstar writing skill)
You are complaining about a single scene as if it is disconnected from the reality in which the protagonists are living and it seems that you do not understand a shit about the whole storyline of this modern family

The way is wrote mean the losing the virginity is not a drama for Ellie as it is not for her Mom Nadia

THIS IS PURE AMAZING WRITING SKILL

I know that in the game there are many dialogs about her virginity and this is the point she was a slut for sure.
She decided to get money and She is proud to help her mom and happily (with little shame) she squirted in old guys hands
(in the dialog box there is a little hell-heart)
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This is pure sexual pleasure...
She want help her mom!

Ellie was very proud of her choice, the developer described the scene in that way to make you understand that Ellie lives with her mom who sacrificed everything to make her go to college ... in the conditions of this family the fact that Ellie is no longer a virgin and... that it hasn't been a "drama inside a more biggest drama" is a relief for everyone! And the prove is here:
View attachment 2408604
Nadia said:"She has really grown up. I am so proud"
The storyline in this game is a real drama and for all of them if Ellie is no more virgin IS NOTHING!
Being a virgin is overrated in any modern big city and only has value for old-fashioned, religious and bigoted people..
this story tells how this modern "open" family lives today in a big city!
This is not a storyline in VANILLA STYLE!

I suggest you to restart this great story from the beginning and i'm sure you will agree with my point of view because the story is very well written!

trust me creating drama in the scene where she is losing her virginity would have been illogical and meaningless (TOTAL NON-SENSE)... personally I would have laughed out loud and complained to the developer.

You exaggerate a lot about amazing writing. Void star can't for a long time get more 420 patrons. Story should not be completely disconnected from reality.

This pictures prove nothing. Ellie should comments Losing the virginity. And she's not an unscrupulous stupid whore. Ellie is a nerd with good intellect and shouldn't act like nothing happened.

I agreed that story not bad, but insist that event scenes with Elllie and old man sex should be reworked - need more emotions and comments after that.

Eliie May not give money to Nadia - this is the player's decision. And Nadia doesn't know what Ellie doing with a neighbors - she thinks her daughter is helping a neighbor with cleaning.

 

[88stanford88]

You exaggerate a lot about amazing writing. Void star can't for a long time get more 420 patrons. Story should not be completely disconnected from reality.

This pictures prove nothing. Ellie should comments Losing the virginity. And she's not an unscrupulous stupid whore. Ellie is a nerd with good intellect and shouldn't act like nothing happened.

I agreed that story not bad, but insist that event scenes with Elllie and old man sex should be reworked - need more emotions and comments after that. Ellie should not behave like nothing happend.

Eliie May not give money to Nadia - this is the player's decision. And Nadia doesn't know what Ellie doing with a neighbors - she thinks her daughter is helping a neighbor with cleaning.

yes...
but we was talking about a specific scene!

you have to read the small textbox where there is the prove about what I'm talking about!

I do not agree with you
ViodStar is an amazing game developer in rendrs and story telling!

 

[Vlad11]

yes...
but we was talking about a specific scene!

you have to read the small textbox where there is the prove about what I'm talking about!

I do not agree with you
ViodStar is an amazing game developer in rendrs and story telling!

There is only proves of arosal. ViodStar make exellent renders and story with big potential, but need some improvements.

 

[88stanford88]

I have already posted what I think ... repeating is useless i will ignore you!
I can only suggest to replay the game by reading the dialogs
ViodStar will never rework scenes that are perfect!
Cheers
Popcorn time closed

 

[Vlad11]

I have already posted what I think ... repeating is useless i will ignore you!
I can only suggest to replay the game by reading the dialogs
ViodStar will never rework scenes that are perfect!
Cheers
Popcorn time closed

I am not changed my opinion about sex scenes and events with old man.

First you try prove that Ellie lost her virginity from Scarlet fingers, then from neighbor's fingers. You'll make up your mind )))

Many users in comments above agreed with me.

 

[danvo2004]

I took the liberty of updating sir Ripson's mod to 0.13

Mega

Android port with the mod here

could you pls update mod for v0.14 ? cheers

 

[Dualyth]

The way is wrote mean the losing the virginity is not a drama for Ellie

I don't think people wanted it to be a big drama or a traumatic event, I just think it was a mistake to gloss over it as if nothing happened.

Ellie is a thinker and a sensitive girl. She is the character who expresses the most how she feels, and it would have added way more flavor to show and tell how she experienced her first time.
Nobody here is saying losing your virginity is a bad thing, we're all adults looking for porn games ; but the first time is something important nonetheless. Wether it's the best thing ever or a letdown, it shapes individuals.
Is intercourse how Ellie imagined it would be ? How does it compare to the touch of Scarlet ? Does she love doing it with a stranger ? Or on the contrary does she feel disconnected from the act because she feels nothing for this man ?

You see, there is much to explore in this situation. Plenty of things to add to convey the feelings of the character, to differentiate a sex scene with Nadia from a sex scene with Ellie for example. While the former has a more casual approach to intimacy and goes straight to the point without getting attached, the latter is discovering it, trying exciting things and getting a little confused. Both perspectives could be further developped, instead of rushed like in this scene. Oh, I'm sorry, "left to the imagination".

I think people following the game like it. I for one really like Ellie and commend VoidStar for making her model unique and with realistic proportions.
Though giving constructive criticism is not bashing or hating. Sharing how we liked or didn't like something is the point of forums like this one.
At the end of the day, it's never good for writers/creative people to be in an echo chamber surrounded by yes men. You can only improve by getting different perspectives.

 

[cxx]

could you pls update mod for v0.14 ? cheers

maybe updating it. did visit here today.

 

[Vlad11]

I don't think people wanted it to be a big drama or a traumatic event, I just think it was a mistake to gloss over it as if nothing happened.

Ellie is a thinker and a sensitive girl. She is the character that expresses the most how she feels, and it would have added way more flavor to show and tell how she experienced her first time.
Nobody here is saying losing your virginity is a bad thing, we're all looking for porn games, but the first time is something important nonetheless. Wether it's the best thing ever or a letdown, it shapes individuals.
Is intercourse how Ellie imagined it would be ? How does it compare to the touch of Scarlet ? Does she love doing it with a stranger ? Or on the contrary does she feel disconnected from the act because she feels nothing for this man ?

You see, there is much to explore in this situation. Plenty of things to add to convey the feelings of the character, to differentiate a sex scene with Nadia from a sex scene with Ellie for example. While the former has a more casual approach to intimacy and goes straight to the point without getting attached, the latter is discovering it, trying exciting things and getting a little confused. Both perspective could be further developped, instead of rushed like in this scene. Oh, I'm sorry, "left to the imagination".

I think people following the game like it. I for one really like Ellie and commend VoidStar for making her model unique and with realistic proportions.
Though giving constructive criticism is not bashing or hating. Sharing how we liked or didn't like something is the point of forums like this one.
At the end of the day, it's never good for writers/creative people to be in an echo chamber surrounded by yes men. You can only improve by getting different perspectives.

I completely agree. This is what I think.

 

[Alxyen]

Pff, i didn't like the last update.

 

[dolfe67]

We have a big simp/shill here

Also the ending with the male MC and Akasha, what happens to the 2 female MCs? The game ends there and we don't know, this is a half-assed job.

 

[88stanford88]

I don't think people wanted it to be a big drama or a traumatic event, I just think it was a mistake to gloss over it as if nothing happened.

Ellie is a thinker and a sensitive girl. She is the character who expresses the most how she feels, and it would have added way more flavor to show and tell how she experienced her first time.
Nobody here is saying losing your virginity is a bad thing, we're all adults looking for porn games ; but the first time is something important nonetheless. Wether it's the best thing ever or a letdown, it shapes individuals.
Is intercourse how Ellie imagined it would be ? How does it compare to the touch of Scarlet ? Does she love doing it with a stranger ? Or on the contrary does she feel disconnected from the act because she feels nothing for this man ?

You see, there is much to explore in this situation. Plenty of things to add to convey the feelings of the character, to differentiate a sex scene with Nadia from a sex scene with Ellie for example. While the former has a more casual approach to intimacy and goes straight to the point without getting attached, the latter is discovering it, trying exciting things and getting a little confused. Both perspectives could be further developped, instead of rushed like in this scene. Oh, I'm sorry, "left to the imagination".

I think people following the game like it. I for one really like Ellie and commend VoidStar for making her model unique and with realistic proportions.
Though giving constructive criticism is not bashing or hating. Sharing how we liked or didn't like something is the point of forums like this one.
At the end of the day, it's never good for writers/creative people to be in an echo chamber surrounded by yes men. You can only improve by getting different perspectives.

if you want that I follow the nonsense of your writing you have to start write your own game so you will be able to see if I'm a yes man or not!
Voidstar doesn't give a fuck about those who complain. I love his way to handle with this kind of nonsense criticism

He is able to create stories that are interesting even for sanctimonious moralists... this is evident in all his professional productions..
Are you playing this game and you want to change some part because doesn't fits with you moralistic culture?
In any case you will never stop to play because the story is written very well and it is impossible to resist to click in the choices that are not for you--- you know that you do not agree but you click... because it is inresistible also for you that normally you wouldn't have done that.. but tis game is write a super skilled developer and his style

you are free to try to suggest about how for you the story must be written but you have to support him with expansive plan if you want to get his attention...
In any case this dev has a solid style and allmost all suggestions like
"he have to rework that scene or another already developed scene" will be just useless and nonsense
I don't like developers who change their creation just to please the moral judgments of others or for adapt the story to Steam rules and so on.. VoidStar is a great true artist and that's why I follow and support him

Good luck with your useless attempt in story-changing suggestions…he doesn't listen to them and that's the right thing to d!

PS: I'm not a yes-man! I JUST DO NOT AGREE WITH THE MEANING OF WHAT YOU WROTE!
(in this case I'm your NO-MAN)

Ellie is a thinker and a sensitive girl. She is the character who expresses the most how she feels, and it would have added way more flavor to show and tell how she experienced her first time.

More what? flavours? flowers?
Are you sure you read Ellie's thoughts correctly described in the scene?
Ellie went to the neighbour to fuck only with him... then there are so many choices and it is you that click...
first time? What's romantic about fucking old men who pay you for the first time?
It is not a romance

She accepted money to being fucked (flowers or shit flavours should be a total nonsense)

I just think you were so eager to see the ending that the super skilled writer made... that you forgot to read Ellie's dialogue and her sensitive thoughts..which are described perfectly...

try again and replay the scene

Just my opinion!

 

[Dualyth]

the nonsense of your writing

The irony. It's always the people with the most broken english that are the first to attempt to criticize what they don't understand. Flavor, flowers. Oh man. I get why you think this game has perfect writing now.

Well, I'm glad you found your dream game and your new faith in the god VoidStar.

Thank you for encouraging me to keep following the updates, I will try ; alas I'm certain I won't be able to reach your level of fervor.

ps : yes, "fervor", "flavor" and "flower" are three separate words. I know, it's confusing.

 

[estrada777]

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[cxx]

well not bad update except short (was at least longer than that young guy's stamina).

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[estrada777]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.14 + WT/Gal from Ripson updated by ME!

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[Vlad11]

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[Jhin00]

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