VN Ren'Py Pandora's Box 2 [v0.35] [Void Star]

[TheVillainWins]

This game lacks a middle aged boss character or some middle aged man, ugly or not, with power and money that corrupts the female leads. There is too many male antagonists and none of them are even a little bit impactful. A male MC family member like a not too old dad or an asshole brother would also add spice and taboo ntr to the game but there are none.

One of the characters with more potential in the previous Pandoras Box game was the female's MC boss IMO but he had just one sex scene and was forgotten if I remember correctly. The ugly neighbor design in this game is atrocious, it's like a stereotype of what an ugly italian dwarf or something like that would look like. It takes you out of the immersion. I prefer ugly antagonists to handsome ones sometimes but they should be somewhat realistic IMO, this one looks forced.

 

[Avaron1974]

This game lacks a middle aged boss character or some middle aged man, ugly or not, with power and money that corrupts the female leads.

Except Nadia is already as corrupt as it comes, she is a mega slut and loves it. Ellie is well on her way through Scarlets influence.

There is no impact any other male antagonist could do.

Not like there can be any NTR either, they are all single.

 

[TheVillainWins]

Except Nadia is already as corrupt as it comes, she is a mega slut and loves it. Ellie is well on her way through Scarlets influence.

There is no impact any other male antagonist could do.

Not like there can be any NTR either, they are all single.

You are right, I'm complaining about things more pertinent to the first game. Still, I'd had preferred Ellie to have an office job with some middle aged manipulative, dominant boss. And I would have liked the male MC to find a love interest in this game, focus in their relationship and then have ntr in some of the ways I described. Nadia being a slut from the start and having sex with many men who have one scene each is boring IMO. The only thing I enjoyed in this game are the lezdom scenes. Still I'd preferred if the dominant female character had Ellie's design. A character with Ellie's design (very pretty without tattoos and piercings) being a dominant bitch with femdom and lezdom content would be hotter than Scarlet who could be a submissive (having tattos and piercings doesn't mean she can't be a sub).

 

[SteveCamera]

My save game is gone. Thank you, I guess - for update :/

 

[estrada777]

I took the liberty of updating sir Ripson's mod to 0.35

PLEASE don't reply, or @ me, or DM me for updates. I always update my ports, YES I ALREADY KNOW ABOUT THE UPDATE.

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Android port with the mod here

Updated

 

[thecorruptionfreek]

As someone who had been a subscriber for this game, the pregnancy story is the single most stupid thing I have ever seen in an H game. I had given up the game because of that update.

 

[Vlad11]

As someone who had been a subscriber for this game, the pregnancy story is the single most stupid thing I have ever seen in an H game. I had given up the game because of that update.

Most people like this story and they voted on patreon for Ellie pregnancy.

 

[thecorruptionfreek]

Most people like this story and they voted on patreon for Ellie pregnancy.

I like pregnancy content in general but the way this is executed not so much. As other threads had mentioned, they wasted so much potential on what they could have dones

 

[roe_jogan]

I'll say it, this game has been a tremendous disappointment, I had my gripes with the first one but at least the story was interesting, the characters more compelling and you get the feel of the consequences of your actions, like cheating on your wife with her mother, etc, on this one, THERE IS NO STORY, you are still forced to play it in a way that makes Nadia like a submissive and literal call worker or you'll miss out any content thereafter, she's has been a lost cause since the first one but in this "game" she's beyond pathetic, as someone who used to be naive back in the day, at some point you stop bearing it and grinding, that’s not Nadia, she will put up with it … even if is for the All-Mighty and Highest Patreons’ sake.

Speaking of disappointments, there is Ellie, nice way to slowly introduce the game, until she connects with Scarlett, from there on it was all downhill, she lost her personality and now she’s basically Scarlett literal plaything, whether you want or not, Scarlett’s story purpose? No purpose, besides fulfilling the All-Mighty and Highest Patreon's tier.

Personal suggestion: Scarlett could be an amazing character if we split her in two paths, one listening to her wills would makes us go down to a path of no return, an ultimate Pandora’s box, with her personality shifting completely to evil, Akasha-esque, with the second path being tied to going against her will and straightening her up, kinda like GGGB’s Jessica.

Speaking of Akasha, she’s one of the many good/interesting characters left behind, Riley was really cool – but after what the dev did to her maybe writing her off is the best play – Diana is still unexplored and others pretty poorly like Teresa, Alex (note that I never mentioned any male character, I wonder if has anything to do on how bad their subplots are).

Speaking of males, shoutout to the male MC, he is there (I don’t know his name to begin with), he's doing something, no one knows what it is yet or if it will lead into anything, but he's there, so anyone looking for male figure feels represented.

Is there any fixing? The developer has the means, the tools and the support, of course there is, he/she needs the urgency to address it, right now, the “game” is just a Patreon kink pool, dump everything and anything they want, no, don’t do that, give the story a direction, you showed us on the first game you’re capable, the game could be great if the developer wants, right now he/she doesn’t care.

I offer this feedback in the hopes that maybe the developer takes a glance in this forum looking for REAL FEEDBACK, from critical reviewers/real people that are not bootlickers that just want to PLAY SOMETHING GOOD, not just have their fantasies fulfilled.

 

[cxx]

As someone who had been a subscriber for this game, the pregnancy story is the single most stupid thing I have ever seen in an H game. I had given up the game because of that update.

welcome to the club.

 

[boulimanus]

Just played and although Nadia has been a lost cause from the start and the story has always been rubbish, the sex scene for once, doesn't end in 3 frames. A nice surprise.

 

[Vlad11]

Just played and although Nadia has been a lost cause from the start and the story has always been rubbish, the sex scene for once, doesn't end in 3 frames. A nice surprise.

At the beginning of the game, the plot was not bad, but then the story turned spoil. My opinion is that VoidStar could come up with a lot of interesting things if he tried to.

For example - deeper relationships with Theresa, Scarlet and Ellie, including jealousy, and may be, blackmail (at the beginning of the plot, the player can choose who Ellie will help with the warm-up at the stadium - Teresa or Scarlet. But for some reason this does not affect the plot at all); Criminal history with drug dealers and, may be, with Scarlet's mother's lover; arrests by police; Ellie's unexpected pregnancy (especially after she confused antibiotics with contraceptives) and so that the player does not know for a long time from whom she knocked up, especially if the player has chosen the path of lust.

It would also be nice if, at the player's choice, Ellie would remain Scarlet's puppet or learn to act on her own, and, for example, would invite Scarlet to Larry to he fuck her.

It would be interesting if, according to the plot, Ellie became a fallen nerd after her friendship with Scarlet, including soft drugs, alcohol, promiscuous sex/prostitution and an unexpected pregnancy and her class performance rating would sank decently. And then, by the player's choice, Ellie could improve herself, especially if she learned not to be Scarlet's puppet and to be more friends with Teresa.

And It would be interesting if Akasha returned after a while.

 

[Vlad11]

I like pregnancy content in general but the way this is executed not so much. As other threads had mentioned, they wasted so much potential on what they could have dones

About potential i wrote in my comment above. The story turned spoil. I consider the latest updates to be a careless work. And now a new version comes out every two months. Therefore, I will not support the developer. But Ellie's pregnancy is quite natural, because she does not know how to protect herself.

 

[cxx]

But Ellie's pregnancy is quite natural, because she does not know how to protect herself.

yes but made stupidly, either that that blackmailer get her preggo or larry the asshole or her idiot classmates or some unknown.

 

[jaques]

But Ellie's pregnancy is quite natural, because she does not know how to protect herself.

The fuck it is, unless virgin Mary is natural. You can avoid the D with Ellie the entire playthrough (Nadia as well btw) until Void's brainfarts evolved into brain diarrhea in the last few updates.

 

[Vlad11]

The fuck it is, unless virgin Mary is natural. You can avoid the D with Ellie the entire playthrough (Nadia as well btw) until Void's brainfarts evolved into brain diarrhea in the last few updates.

I agree. I don't like a lot of what VoidStar has done. It is not even clear how Ellie lost her virginity. The plot could be made much more interesting.

 

[Vlad11]

yes but made stupidly, either that that blackmailer get her preggo or larry the asshole or her idiot classmates or some unknown.

This is one of the developer's worst ideas. Some rich blackmailer demands that Ellie get pregnant from someone, and then he disappears. The story turned spoil.

It would be more interesting if Ellie confused antibiotics with contraception, and then was surprised that she became pregnant and did not know from whom.

 

[cxx]

This is one of the developer's worst ideas. Some rich blackmailer demands that Ellie get pregnant from someone, and then he disappears. The story turned spoil.

It would be more interesting if Ellie confused antibiotics with contraception, and then was surprised that she became pregnant and did not know from whom.

we all agree that it was stupidly made.

we still don't know father unless she told it in this update.

 

[Santiana]

WTF DEV.... you literally cuck every player that has enjoy this game ....Nadia blackmail..(The god damn protagonist from the first game ben blackmail by a teneger...) Ellie getting pregnant for retarded reasons...(you should have left it optionally and not forced )..... al you hade to do to let the ACTUAL choices in game.....you had a good balance in the game for everybody.

 

[Christ P Bacon]

This game lacks a middle aged boss character or some middle aged man, ugly or not, with power and money that corrupts the female leads. There is too many male antagonists and none of them are even a little bit impactful. A male MC family member like a not too old dad or an asshole brother would also add spice and taboo ntr to the game but there are none.

One of the characters with more potential in the previous Pandoras Box game was the female's MC boss IMO but he had just one sex scene and was forgotten if I remember correctly. The ugly neighbor design in this game is atrocious, it's like a stereotype of what an ugly italian dwarf or something like that would look like. It takes you out of the immersion. I prefer ugly antagonists to handsome ones sometimes but they should be somewhat realistic IMO, this one looks forced.

there's already the sleazy neighbor, adding more would be favoring quantity over quality, also making new character just another john doe version 2