VN Ren'Py Abandoned ParaScape [Day 1] [Harkonnan]

Harkonnan

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Overview:
You are a Facilitator and your job is to help our main character Parami through her first year on the job.
At times she will be unsure as to what to do and that is where you come in. You "nudge" her in the right direction. You must help her without giving away your presence. In the beginning you can't really mess up as she won't be paying that much attention but after a while you will have to be more careful.
If she discovers you, you will lose your job as a Facilitator.
There is no sexual content at this time but some is planned for either the next release or the one after.​

Thread Updated: 2021-05-06
Release Date: 2021-04-17
Developer: Harkonnan -
Censored: no
Version: day -1
OS: Windows, Linux & Mac
Language: English
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Android: (Thanks caxhub for this.)

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LorgarAurelian

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Looks interesting, will give it a try.

Edit after having played it: Nice consept, also kind of refreshing to not be playing the MC, definitley looking forward to more
 
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Harkonnan

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MC is the player character. I think the dev is confused
I'm not confused. I know what I wrote. Parami is the MC you are not. Try playing the game and I think it will be a bit more clear.

Edit:

Just realized my statement seemed a little harsh. That was not my intention so to clarify; MC is the Main Character and PC is Player Character. They are not always one in the same. That may be the case for most VNs that you control the main character. I wanted to do something different. You do not control the MC directly but you do however have a certain influence over the MCs decisions. The MC will not always do what you suggest and will act on their own as the story requires. I hope this clarified things and I apologize if I seemed rude for the way I responded initially.
 
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Harkonnan

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Will def check it out when it's available for Android.
I think I red somewhere that you cant make an android port without a mac. If I figure out how to do that I will add android version to download.

Edit:

While looking for a way to port to android I came across something that lets you play windows games on android devices. Here's a link if your interested in checking it out.



I hope this helps.
 
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Walter Victor

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I'm not confused. I know what I wrote. Parami is the MC you are not. Try playing the game and I think it will be a bit more clear.

Edit:

Just realized my statement seemed a little harsh. That was not my intention so to clarify; MC is the Main Character and PC is Player Character. They are not always one in the same. That may be the case for most VNs that you control the main character. I wanted to do something different. You do not control the MC directly but you do however have a certain influence over the MCs decisions. The MC will not always do what you suggest and will act on their own as the story requires. I hope this clarified things and I apologize if I seemed rude for the way I responded initially.
Either way, it seems that you have a female MC, and you should tag the game as such.

To my mind, the MC in a game is the character who makes the choices.

By F95 definition, an MC is the Protagonist.

Wikipedia defines Protagonist as follows: A protagonist is the main character of a story. The protagonist is at the center of the story, makes the key decisions, and experiences the consequences of those decisions. The protagonist is the primary agent propelling the story forward, and is often the character who faces the most significant obstacles.

In your game, you have two characters that combine the elements outlined by Wikipedia. Your MC is obviously the Main Character, and may experience the consequences of any decisions and may face the most significant obstacles. However, your PC is the one who MAKES the key decisions, and is the PRIMARY AGENT PROPELLING the story forward. I believe those latter elements prevail in determining who the MC is in a game.

Here's an example in another porn game: In Haley's Story, Haley is the central character of the game. The game revolves around HER. But she is not the main character or MC. The MC is her twin brother, for whom the player makes all the choices, and is in every scene with or without Haley.

You can write whatever kind of game you desire. I fully support your decision to tell it the way you have. I do disagree, however, with your terminology, for what that's worth.
 

Walter Victor

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Okay, on to more significant matters... Will this be a pure lesbian game, or will there be male options? Also, will any sexual activity be optional or not? A list of planned (also never-to-be implemented) fetishes would be helpful to those who might like to try your game. Because right now, there is probably way too little information to entice people to download it.
 

HansDampf788

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The preview pics look ok but are not the best I have seen when it comes to HS games but the OP is too vague for me to even try the game.
 

PeggyBlackett

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I welcome any and all constructive criticisms. If you have suggestions on how it might be better let me know and I will consider it as long as it doesn't conflict with my vision of what I want the game to be.
Does your vision include future sexual content?
 

Yoru

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No sexual content yet, but I can recognize a nice pair of buttocks when I see one.
I will give it a try.
 
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dolfe67

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The MC will not always do what you suggest and will act on their own as the story requires.
I call that fake choices. If I have a choice between making her go right or left and choose left, I don't expect MC/the game to tell me "I don't feel like it, I'll go right". Why giving a choice in the first place then ?
 

Harkonnan

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I call that fake choices. If I have a choice between making her go right or left and choose left, I don't expect MC/the game to tell me "I don't feel like it, I'll go right". Why giving a choice in the first place then ?
I don't know about other people but in this case it will be used rarely just to help the player remember that they are not the MC and as such not everything will go as you want. It's a story telling tool to remind the player the MC still has a will of her own.