Look don't take this the wrong way I don't intend to insult or offend you just to give some creative criticism.I dont see how a character falling in love with the player performing a sex act on them somehow makes them *soulless.*
I think the storyline for her is pretty great with the Thornfalls and her people's origins will add a lot more depth to her character, but okay.
I assume you're meaning my comments so first I did support this game for quite a while and second I think places like this are more valuable for developers then their Patreon, Subcribestar and Discord echo chambers. It's funny especially for developers who let their subscribers dictate what should be priorotized during development who then end up wondering why they don't get more support or even loose some.Man, this thread is an eternal bitchfest. Its not like the devs are gonna change the story or characters based on feedback by a bunch of pirates.
Look don't take this the wrong way I don't intend to insult or offend you just to give some creative criticism.
You establish characters with specific traits and then change their character so you can get a sexscene in even if it doesn't fit the narrative, short they act out of character.
I'll explain why it feels soulless;
In the BJ scene she begs the MC to call her a slut this doesn't fit her, before established, innocent character, why does she suddenly feel the urge to blow him while he is eating, and how gratefull the MC is stuffing his face while someone blows him? Or masturbating while the MC fucks a slime doesn't fit her either, the sex scenes don't fit they are not earned you as MC do nothing to get them, the first two did at least a bit you got her clothes, food, lingerie etc. All this goes for most characters, Nyx for example in the Slaver Mission she just lets herself get fucked by the MC, she shouldn't have come in the first place, this was a chance to take Elena or Ves along or add a quest to capture one of the Lizardgirls in the desert, Nyx even mentions the Slaver prefering exotic races and he takes a human women to him.
You can tell the greatest story but when you let your characters act out of character it destroys the immersion and believability. Just a piece of thought. It's your game you can do with it what you want and that is your good right as the developer.
But I have to thank you've teached me a valuable lesson![]()
Well as said before it's your game. You can ignore my criticism this is enterly up to you. I never inteded you to change anything you already did because I lost my intrest in this game entirely, this was just some piece of mind who might help along the way.1.) Not every sex act needs endless running around, there's a whole point to Elena's arc that she wants to learn to be more confident and *be* more sexual... It's why she literally goes to a courtesan for advice, and talks about how she used to be spied on while she bathed and how it made her feel. Why *wouldn't* she try to explore more?
2.) Nyx was never *meant* to go during the slaver quest, that was a last minute change to the plan due to her contact falling through in the final hours, so Nyx decides to just do it herself instead of aborting.
Like most people who go undercover, they might 'be willing to do what needs to be done' - she's shown to be nervous, but there is both a literal hostage in the room and multiple lives on the line.
The 'lizardgirls' are a pack of cannibalistic killers who will attack on sight and are *very* venomous, the only unique position there is the MC's with them with the pheromone perk... But they aren't exactly following his orders, more just 'You strong and beat me in battle - make good mate.' No slaver is going to want a thing that will literally eat the client.
Always happy to provide more valuable lessons~![]()
That is the current end of the main storyline! The story will continue soon!Does anyone know how to trigger the next part of the storyline after arriving at Hamun docks? I'm stuck here.
I came back to this game after a while because I was only interested in one character and boy did they do my girl Elena dirty, no new scenes beside the AI slop with the slime, no more character development. Now she's just a mindless slut like every girl in this game, this borders on character assassination. I'm glad I pulled my support for this long ago.
The game overall has potential but man is it horny and I say that here of all places.
I don't think so, you killed her character for me by making her a soulless fucktoy. And besides that whats gonna happen you add one or two minor quest maybe a scene with her, make her even slutier and then you're gonna continue to add another 50 scenes for other characters? Don't get me worng you would have a solid game but for my tastes it's to horny the scenes don't feel earnend every girl is to easy even for a male power fantasy. I think you found your target audience and it's not me or people like me. Nevertheless good luck with your game.
Okay, this might be long, so bear with me. And disclaimer, I'm not being mean or anything. I'll just use the "spoiler" mechanic like a folder for the second part, even if its not so you don't have to bleed your eyes with long posts. I'll thoroughly explain as to how she's acting is normal there.Look don't take this the wrong way I don't intend to insult or offend you just to give some creative criticism.
You establish characters with specific traits and then change their character so you can get a sexscene in even if it doesn't fit the narrative, short they act out of character.
I'll explain why it feels soulless;
In the BJ scene she begs the MC to call her a slut this doesn't fit her, before established, innocent character, why does she suddenly feel the urge to blow him while he is eating, and how gratefull the MC is stuffing his face while someone blows him? Or masturbating while the MC fucks a slime doesn't fit her either, the sex scenes don't fit they are not earned you as MC do nothing to get them, the first two did at least a bit you got her clothes, food, lingerie etc. All this goes for most characters, Nyx for example in the Slaver Mission she just lets herself get fucked by the MC, she shouldn't have come in the first place, this was a chance to take Elena or Ves along or add a quest to capture one of the Lizardgirls in the desert, Nyx even mentions the Slaver prefering exotic races and he takes a human women to him.
You can tell the greatest story but when you let your characters act out of character it destroys the immersion and believability. Just a piece of thought. It's your game you can do with it what you want and that is your good right as the developer.
But I have to thank you've teached me a valuable lesson![]()
For Mrs. Tanner, you simply gotta visit her and read the notes beside the Quest tab inside the Journal. Be sure you level up, especially your barter skill, so you'll be ready with the Quest dialogues. Please refer to the other threads/posts already available in the discussion as they have given more detail.So I can't find these scenes can you help me
-Black Diamond Girl 3rd and 4th scene
-Myu's last scene
-Nijah's first scene
-Nyx's 2nd and 3rd scene
- Also I don't know how to process with Ms Tanner
- Lastly there is one locked person between Elena and Kiera in gallery
Okay, this might be long, so bear with me. And disclaimer, I'm not being mean or anything. I'll just use the "spoiler" mechanic like a folder for the second part, even if its not so you don't have to bleed your eyes with long posts. I'll thoroughly explain as to how she's acting is normal there.
First of all, you say "creative criticism", but all you did was complain in the first two comments. That's not criticism, my brother. "Creative criticism" is by discussing things properly as to what you didn't like, asking the dev questions why they made it that way, asking further questions if it's possible to improve it. You can't criticize something without asking or getting to know the reason, otherwise you'd just sound like a Karen. If it simply isn't for you, then that's that.
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Brother, all of what's happening in game, people often do it to add excitement in their lives as a couple. While not all, it does happen. You see Nyx? It's not uncommon for girls to dress up to add some spice before sex. Why do you think some women buy sexy looking lingerie just for the eyes of their man? It's to arouse, brother. Women would dress up, take time to get ready, and look good during events, sometimes for themselves, but in some cases, so their man will feel proud, especially during dates. "I'm this man's woman". They may do it to assert dominance to other women that you're hers alone. This would also be the time where you would compliment their outfit or every little detail about them. It don't even have to be dates, just compliment your lady. And even if they just wanna be simple and not go through all that hassle, then there is nothing wrong with that too. That's perfectly normal as long as the couple is happy just being with each other.
So if a lady wants to bang, or bang because she has no other choice atm (Nyx), or simply she acts naughty in front of the man she likes, she's immediately a slut? What?That's pretty rude and disrespectful, bro. None of the characters went out of character. That's what some people do when they get intimate with someone they like which is normal. It's not being a "sloot", not one bit, friend.
I added the criticism only with the 3rd post so yes the first two I was venting my frustration how they handled Elena.
To your point about Nyx and women in general yes your right some do that AFTER you got closer not before. I was criticizing how the quest could be handled. When you read my post I did add the part with Elena where you get her lingerie as a positiv examaple and in-character.
And no it's not normal that every women wants to jump on your dick. You can do that with someone like your childhood friend whos been in love with you since she knows you or for instance you could do it with Elena if you add the context that she is in heat or add a point to the lore that everyone is horny af because of some magic or disease, or that the MCs new form secrets somekind of pheromones.
I added the criticism only with the 3rd post so yes the first two I was venting my frustration how they handled Elena.Okay, this might be long, so bear with me. And disclaimer, I'm not being mean or anything. I'll just use the "spoiler" mechanic like a folder for the second part, even if its not so you don't have to bleed your eyes with long posts. I'll thoroughly explain as to how she's acting is normal there.
First of all, you say "creative criticism", but all you did was complain in the first two comments. That's not criticism, my brother. "Creative criticism" is by discussing things properly as to what you didn't like, asking the dev questions why they made it that way, asking further questions if it's possible to improve it. You can't criticize something without asking or getting to know the reason, otherwise you'd just sound like a Karen. If it simply isn't for you, then that's that.
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Brother, all of what's happening in game, people often do it to add excitement in their lives as a couple. While not all, it does happen. You see Nyx? It's not uncommon for girls to dress up to add some spice before sex. Why do you think some women buy sexy looking lingerie just for the eyes of their man? It's to arouse, brother. Women would dress up, take time to get ready, and look good during events, sometimes for themselves, but in some cases, so their man will feel proud, especially during dates. "I'm this man's woman". They may do it to assert dominance to other women that you're hers alone. This would also be the time where you would compliment their outfit or every little detail about them. It don't even have to be dates, just compliment your lady. And even if they just wanna be simple and not go through all that hassle, then there is nothing wrong with that too. That's perfectly normal as long as the couple is happy just being with each other.
So if a lady wants to bang, or bang because she has no other choice atm (Nyx), or simply she acts naughty in front of the man she likes, she's immediately a slut? What?That's pretty rude and disrespectful, bro. None of the characters went out of character. That's what some people do when they get intimate with someone they like which is normal. It's not being a "sloot", not one bit, friend.
To your point about Nyx and women in general yes your right some do that AFTER you got closer not before. I was criticizing how the quest could be handled. When you read my post I did add the part with Elena where you get her lingerie as a positiv examaple and in-character.
And no it's not normal that every women wants to jump on your dick. You can do that with someone like your childhood friend whos been in love with you since she knows you or for instance you could do it with Elena if you add the context that she is in heat or add a point to the lore that everyone is horny af because of some magic or disease, or that the MCs new form secrets somekind of pheromones.
look in 1st pagedid they changed the unlock gallery cheat again ?
I saw a user point out various balancing decisions and lostraven enthusiastically said he'd send it to the programming team to review.Man, this thread is an eternal bitchfest. Its not like the devs are gonna change the story or characters based on feedback by a bunch of pirates.
I think you have reached the end of the current main story. All that's left is to wait for the next update. Also, the game clearly warned you about progressing into the main story. You should have completed everything before progressing to the evening meeting.Can someone tell how do go further in story
I am stuck at Hamun city
I reached hamun city made love with Kiara and she told the mistress will come in morning but she hasn't arrived and I have like made 5 days with no money left I may die and she haven't arrived yet
Is there no further story or I need to do something
I haven't completed divine sisters requent of girls
And mika and also Arwen scene are still not completed so is it due to that or is the game bugged there
It still shows 32/41 notes completed surely there must be more and I haven't gotten the scene with orc yet ?
I will be very grateful for your help
And I said this was handled in a good way, then she cooks for you, which is sweet and alright, and then she suddenly jumps under the table and sucks you of while you are eating and begs you, and I quote "call me a slut, am I a good slut?"Elena - you took it slow, actually going around to figure out her problem. She began feeling comfy after a while, then began opening up to you about her past. Getting to know each other better. You helped her on something that was personally important and invaluable to her. At that point, she began taking interest til she was slowly falling for you. The master-companion relationship began, until she started falling for you. That's when she took interest in intimacy, and wanting to know the cultures of humans and how to seduce. She worked her way slowly, from wanting to look good, to being sweet while having a balance of seduction.