So, I gave it a try after seeing an Amanda picture on Reddit.
Good visuals, both lighting and models (except Robert's model). Decent writing. Hot girls. I do think it was a bit short, so I still have a ton of questions, but the MC and Rosie are sympathetic, so I'll keep track of the whole thing.
Btw - great job with... the MC's body. More often than not, when designing a muscular character, devs just add muscles onto an average body type, or go all-in and make him look like a professional bodybuilder. Your MC has broad shoulders, like an athlete would, but his muscles aren't overdone. Good job.
I'm now trying to figure out all the connections.
1) Rosie. She's the easiest - the MC's stepsister. Her dad was abusive to the MC, who then left. So far, so good.
2) Agnes. The MC's friend from when he was away, who he eventually hooked up with. When he decided to leave and go help Rosie, Agnes got salty because she'd started catching feelings. Robert's sister?
3) Yola. A criminal, so, automatically, my least favourite option. Also, the GF of the local criminal kingpin who searches for someone who might be the MC. Also, she possibly dates Amanda on the side? All in all, avoid at all costs.
4) Amanda. Angela's tenant or servant. Dates Yola? Shares a tragic past with the MC. Possibly his ex or someone he unwillingly hurt a lot in some other way.
5) Angela. The local MILF philantropist. An aunt or a family friend; the latter is more probable as Amanda would know Angela's nephews otherwise. Probably gonna be my canon pick, as I agree with this:
Anyways, it's just the beginning, but as of right now - Angela would be my pick as a main girl, she is beautiful, kind and rich) Win-Win situation)
And so far it doesn't look like she has any mental issues or involved in any shady business which is also a bonus.
Moreover, if the MC really has trouble with the mob, he could use someone with money on his side, as fists can only take you so far against guns and corrupt cops. To this end, he should get
as close with Angela as possible