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Zorro#34
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Maybe it's just me, but I stumble across harem and incest fans demanding something far more often than NTR fans. These latter guys just enjoy their games and let us enjoy ours.
I'd legit be fine with that, as that means Amanda is certainly free for us.
And MC refused to tap that, can you fucking believe it?!
This scenario definitely needs a selection menu. I'll choose yes and do it.And MC refused to tap that, can you fucking believe it?!
Hopefully, the next update will display two options.
Think it's worse, MC went full anime protagonist there, not at all picking up what she was trying to "tell" him.And MC refused to tap that, can you fucking believe it?!
Man was clueless.
Zorro#34
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Man this update was short
But im really enjoying the (little bit) of content so far, the girls look really pretty, story seems fun and i like the style
But im really enjoying the (little bit) of content so far, the girls look really pretty, story seems fun and i like the style
Jnx
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This is bottom tier "Everyone distanced themselves from MC, who they love to the point of obsession, because they needed the story to be MC getting closer to them as he's the most amazing muscular nice guy that beats all the bad guys."
All to tell "MC returns after X years and suddenly everyone wants sex. He goes to college and the mafia/big business wants to take him/his family down."
I feel like it's a cosmic joke at this point. Just a little originality is all I ask for. And no, "there are actually male characters that aren't just rapist/virgin losers" is not originality.
All to tell "MC returns after X years and suddenly everyone wants sex. He goes to college and the mafia/big business wants to take him/his family down."
I feel like it's a cosmic joke at this point. Just a little originality is all I ask for. And no, "there are actually male characters that aren't just rapist/virgin losers" is not originality.
TajaRrR
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Okay... Where did you get "they love to the point of obsession" part? From the dialogues and actions we saw so far only 2 characters got some feelings for him and its far from it being an obsession.
Another things - "everyone wants sex"... When? Where? Maybe I missed something again but I never saw anything sex releated in dialogues either, no one is jumping on him or anything like that.
You either played different game or you cant read - which is it?
I'd recommend ignoring that person, they're known to jump to game threads and just shit on them.
As for girls:
Agnes - Does want MCs dick - not even a doubt
Yola - Wants something from MC, highly doubt it's his dick. Think it's gang related. (my guess - his father related)
Amanda - Kinda wants to stab MC. Same as above, think it's father related.
Not-sister - 100% does not want dick currently.
Not-aunt - Getting to point where she wants it, and definitely gets a bit wet seeing him half naked. Hardly jumping at him.
"Everyone distanced themselves from MC, who they love to the point of obsession" Who? Everyone distanced themselves from the MC? I don't remember writing something like that. The only one I could think of that "distancing themselves from the mc" are Amanda. Yet as far as the game goes, she's itching to stab his ass. So I don't get the love and obsessed part.
"Mc returns after X years and suddenly everyone wants sex" I don't get it... The game ain't even have sex yet. And here I thought people would complain and ask for more lewd/sex scenes. I guess I'm wrong.
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Yup - thats the 2 I was thinking about.
And as for the guy.. yeah I kind of got that vibe from him, well whatever gooners be like that sometimes.
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He's not literally talking about the game but making fun of the tropes and what he thinks the story will be about."Everyone distanced themselves from MC, who they love to the point of obsession" Who? Everyone distanced themselves from the MC? I don't remember writing something like that. The only one I could think of that "distancing themselves from the mc" are Amanda. Yet as far as the game goes, she's itching to stab his ass. So I don't get the love and obsessed part.
"Mc returns after X years and suddenly everyone wants sex" I don't get it... The game ain't even have sex yet. And here I thought people would complain and ask for more lewd/sex scenes. I guess I'm wrong.
Many AVNs start with the setup of an MC who's liked by the people around him but leaves for X years. When he returns, the time away lets other characters forget about his familiarity, allowing for lust and love instead.
My interpretation is slightly different. I think she got naked as a Hail Mary, and that she only realized her feelings when she did it. To me, it looked too desperate to have been a fully conscious decision.
Let me clarify: When I say she wants his dick, I didn't mean it in erotic sense. Oh, she does want that too, but she seems to have fallen for MC big time, and yeah, I get it it was her last ditch effort to keep him.
Wrong approach, but nobody's perfect. I do look forwards to seeing what she does.
Holy shit... THANK YOU!
YES! Desperation, It's not simply that she wants MC's dick. Holy shit, finally! Thank you for noticing that!
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My pleasure!YES! Desperation, It's not simply that she wants MC's dick. Holy shit, finally! Thank you for noticing that!
That's what I meant with "great characterization" in my review of chapter 2. This desperate act of trying to keep the MC close tells us so much about her character.
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Jnx
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The same rebuttals to my same criticisms. If I can reduce your game to the same story over and over I'm bored. But glad people know me. If you can only argue with my exaggerated or reductive criticism by taking it literally maybe reading comprehension isn't in your skillset.
All I want is for writing to get better. Sure, I don't say what I'm thinking nicely, but this is an ADULT forum for ADULT games made by and for ADULTS. Not an echo chamber for throatzillas. At least I wish it wasn't. My god.
All I want is for writing to get better. Sure, I don't say what I'm thinking nicely, but this is an ADULT forum for ADULT games made by and for ADULTS. Not an echo chamber for throatzillas. At least I wish it wasn't. My god.
Whoa! Thank you for making the translations! <3
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Eh, my idea for the future is more straightforward. Agnes arrives and seduces MC (successfully this time). Angela hears or even sees them going at it, gets jealous, and becomes MC's Sugar Mommy. The other girls find out eventually, but by that time, the MC is too far gone.