VN RPGM Abandoned Pathetic Demon [v0.3C] [Mack''U]

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The story takes place in a University with a particular set-up: It has its own currency and economy. You are allowed to sell any kind of services as long as both parties agree: Having someone do your homework, paying someone to shut up… or even to have sex with them! The adventure starts as our hero just got expelled of the said university after being falsely accused of rape but luckily he meets a demon who offers him a new identity. In exchange for it, he needs to develop the demon’s power and for that… he needs to have sex with as many girls as possible!​

Thread Updated: 2019-11-15
Release Date: 2019-11-15
Developer: Mack''U

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Version: 0.3C
OS: Windows
Language: English
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[り乇ﾶの刀 ズﾉ刀ム 尺ﾑ刀ᄃ乇]

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[Mack''U]

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Thanks!

 

[RestlessZenza]

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thanks man

 

[Flecc]

Looks interesting from description but 0.1 hmm go on then ill bite and give it a look ,Will give feed back but won't have a chance to have a play with it until tomorrow evening

 

[Mack''U]

Looks interesting from description but 0.1 hmm go on then ill bite and give it a look ,Will give feed back but won't have a chance to have a play with it until tomorrow evening

Fair enough! v0.01 Indeed looks like something you’d want to wait before getting into.

To be totally frank if you care more about the gameplay than the story I’d recommend to wait for the next update where I’ll add more fights (the ones that aren’t related to the main story.)

But, story-wise, the game is currently enough to be entertaining, it should take about 1h30 if you read it all. It’s basically a good chapter1 with a conclusion on its own where we get to see for what purpose the hero intends to use his new power and learn more about the school.

As for the gameplay, right now there are only two fights (since it’s a Battle Fuck RPG every fight is basically a scene), each one has their own mechanic. So if you want to check what kind of gameplay await you it’s also an ok ride if you are just curious about it.

And that’s about it! It’s up to you to decide what fit you best now.

Thank you for your time!

 

[Flecc]

@ Mack"U perhaps you would care to read my post properly.Yes i am sceptical of 0.1 but also added i will have a look tomorrow evening and give some feed back.Have had a very quick look this evening and picked up on a few grammar errors and spelling mistakes. Mc adding to contract was a nice touch.As original post will sit down tomorrow play it through and give more detailed feed back

 

[Mack''U]

@Mack U perhaps you would care to read my post properly.Yes i am sceptical of 0.1 but also added i will have a look tomorrow evening and give some feed back.Have had a very quick look this evening and picked up on a few grammar errors and spelling mistakes. Mc adding to contract was a nice touch.As original post will sit down tomorrow play it through and give more detailed feed back

Oh sorry for getting ahead of myself, I thought that when you said "Go on then I'll bite." you meant that you wanted me to give you more info about the game to play it. Totally my bad!

As for the spelling mistakes, there are some yeah, I actually had someone proofread it but then realized it wasn't fully done and I must've I missed quite a few when re-reading myself, I will try to find someone to properly proofread it in the future.

 

[followmyleader]

I don't think they didn't read what you said! I think they were responding to your concern, and telling other people what to expect. 1h30m is not a bad playtime, but honestly it's not likely that I'll actually do anything but skim over text so it'll probably be pointlessly short for me.

Looking forward to what you do next?

 

[Mack''U]

I don't think they didn't read what you said! I think they were responding to your concern, and telling other people what to expect. 1h30m is not a bad playtime, but honestly it's not likely that I'll actually do anything but skim over text so it'll probably be pointlessly short for me.

Looking forward to what you do next?

Yup, that's the best thing to do, thank you for your interest I'll try to release as much gameplay content as possible for the next update!

 

[Doodadad]

"I see you've been falsely accused of rape. I'll help you out, kid, using my demonic powers."

"Cool, so what do I need to do?"

"First, I need you to rape some girls."

"..."

 

[Mack''U]

"I see you've been falsely accused of rape. I'll help you out, kid, using my demonic powers."

"Cool, so what do I need to do?"

"First, I need you to rape some girls."

"..."

I guess the synopsis could easily make it look like it's what the game is going to be about but I assure you it's not. The guy needs to have sex with girls so it doesn't mean he needs to rape them. And considering the school set-up, there is room to have sex with a lot of girls without any rape so don't worry about it!

 

[JeefZ]

They ain't got noses... What happened to em'

 

[Mack''U]

It looks good, I like the mapping a lot, and story/concept is quite fun. The art is quite good too. My personal feedback would be you write really good, but there is a bit too much reading for my taste, which hinders a bit the nice flow the game could have.
Focus on making it faster-paced, as it is an RPGMAKER game, IMO you don't want the text to be slow paced when you also have to walk and interacts around. Anyway just my two cents, but I can see already a lot of good work that has been invested into it.

Thanks a lot for your message! I believe that you are right, RPG games need to have action, probably even more than talking so I will try to work on the pacing of my work. I thought that since it was the intro I could put a bit more of text but I might have overdone it a little bit, I will be more cautious in the future!

They ain't got noses... What happened to em'

Yeah, I can see why you'd say that, I'm not a big fan of detailed noses, they don't fit in my style as I tend to drift closer toward the japanese style (a lot of them also do the "single line" nose unlike the western style) because doing so mean that you need to adjust your whole art style toward realism a bit more or the nose stand out too much. But even with that, this is definitely a part of my art style that could be improved and where I need to find a good compromise!

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Just noticed something, check the stairs, they have no walk limitation.

Oh nice catch! I will fix that, thank you!

 

[Deleted member 562521]

I cant find out how to find a group

 

[Deleted member 562521]

How do I find a way to form a group

 

[Mack''U]

How do I find a way to form a group

You have to go in the room where the hero is facing in this image. (Looks like I really need to put more indication for where are the important places.)

 

[Mack''U]

A carpet/An arrow/something that shines could be really good!

Yeah I think I'll go with the arrow, that way I can make it float up and down to catch the eye's attention


Probably something like this should be good? Maybe a little bit bigger or add some space between the letters to make it more readable now that I look at it again.

 

[Nelythia]

Mh, it did look interesting but having those RPG fight systems is always a turn off for me, honestly.
I really don't want to grind all those RPG potions and items to equip and use proper skills in proper order and what not.

I mean, it's a porn game after all so I really never understand such RPGM games that have grinding.

I didn't play it yet, but it does sound like it will be one of those.
Could you clarify on that?

 

[Mack''U]

Mh, it did look interesting but having those RPG fight systems is always a turn off for me, honestly.
I really don't want to grind all those RPG potions and items to equip and use proper skills in proper order and what not.

I mean, it's a porn game after all so I really never understand such RPGM games that have grinding.

I didn't play it yet, but it does sound like it will be one of those.
Could you clarify on that?

Don't worry about it because it won't be and that's because of the hero's power! For the power to grow he needs to have sex with as many girls as possible hence you will only get experience the first time you win a fight (Although it has not been made clear in the game yet). Now some fight might end up harder in the future updates but the solution will never lie in grinding (because you won't be able to) but in finding the right way to win the fight!

(Edit: little edit to say that I don't plan on making fights that feel almost impossible and if I ever were to do so it wouldn't be on a girl from the main story, I want people to be able to smoothly progress through the game unlike what the end of my message could imply.)