VN Ren'Py Peace of Mind: Watcher's Eye [Prologue Day 3] [Silent J Games]

[HiHaHo]

No. Now the story will move foward in full swing. Any additional information from the past will either be discussed when needed, or be presented in a dream or memory. For example MC's and Mia's pending conversation.

So consider the next update 0.01 version. Or an equivalent, I have to run the numbers to see the actual numerical version. Or see it as a movie that starts without a title, and then boom something happens that triggers the actual beginning and the title pops up.

It won't be a day to day update, it will flow with either a in game weekly or bi-weekly update. Meaning that the next update will be a 1 or 2 in game week time frame. It will depend on how long it takes me to develope it. If 1 week takes me close or more than 6 months (mind you this is an example and I am a solo dev) then I will stick to just 1 in game week per update.

heh i was just taking a jab at it being a "prologue" , the MC is essentially just moved with 1 chick met 4 more women, then 3 more show up the next day.
there is the cop and crime etc... what i'm trying to say is this 3 day in game time doesn't seem very prologue to me,more like getting thrown into the deep end.

Anyway i won't tell you how to do stuff and i do understand the characters will get more fleshed out in upcoming content.
it looks good enough thus far.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

heh i was just taking a jab at it being a "prologue" , the MC is essentially just moved with 1 chick met 4 more women, then 3 more show up the next day.
there is the cop and crime etc... what i'm trying to say is this 3 day in game time doesn't seem very prologue to me,more like getting thrown into the deep end.

Anyway i won't tell you how to do stuff and i do understand the characters will get more fleshed out in upcoming content.
it looks good enough thus far.

Ha! That's exactly what I was going for. Dude just wanted to settle down, get shit sorted and try to move forward, but life won't let him. Hence the title.

And don't worry, I don't take comments or concerns as people trying to tell me what to do, unless they actually state it. But I do like to address them in case someone else shares that concern, it might help me clear the air or see things from a different perspective I didn'tconsider. So all good.

 

[xapican]

heh i was just taking a jab at it being a "prologue"

backfired ?

 

[HiHaHo]

backfired ?

i don't think so ,we probably have different idea's on what a prologue is for a story.
not that it matters to much its just a label...

 

[xapican]

i don't think so ,we probably have different idea's on what a prologue is for a story.
not that it matters to much its just a label...

Haha, was more a fun coment, but you answer made me courious, what do you understand under a prologue, ? I mean as a prologue it was pretty long, did you expect more background info and less, sex ?

 

[HiHaHo]

Haha, was more a fun coment, but you answer made me courious, what do you understand under a prologue, ? I mean as a prologue it was pretty long, did you expect more background info and less, sex ?

more clarity and introduction..everything gets kinda dumped on you in a vague manner...and all at once

when you pull the dictionary meaning along side it makes even less sense IMO, as the the dev intends to build off this and tell to earlier stuff with flashbacks/memories...

 

[sergerserj]

Interesting and visually descent (except animation) game, with normal plot.
But why incest tag here? Dev say it's not about it at all...
Or this is another Dev who trying to adapt to Patreon's rules and at the same time trying to advertise game with fake tags?
I hope not, because this is just... disgusting.
And yes, Dev can ask moderators to remove fake tags on their game.

 

[a1fox3]

Interesting and visually descent (except animation) game, with normal plot.
But why incest tag here? Dev say it's not about it at all...
Or this is another Dev who trying to adapt to Patreon's rules and at the same time trying to advertise game with fake tags?
I hope not, because this is just... disgusting.
And yes, Dev can ask moderators to remove fake tags on their game.

Quote from the dev.
""" -There are a few relationships you can configure. Please for the love of all that is Holy, do not set them as your mother and sisters. You have those and are part of the story."""

So instead of mother and sisters since there in the game already you put in """Aunt and cousins""".

But you do you like the dev says and I will do what I like.

(((So incest tag is not a fake tag at all for a lot of players.)))
Maybe go read the OP completely to not miss anything else.

 

[AceOfNiagara]

...
Maybe go read the OP completely to not miss anything else.

Still trying to get that to happen?

Perhaps if it was in pretty pictures, it might happen more often. ¯\\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Interesting and visually descent (except animation) game, with normal plot.
But why incest tag here? Dev say it's not about it at all...
Or this is another Dev who trying to adapt to Patreon's rules and at the same time trying to advertise game with fake tags?
I hope not, because this is just... disgusting.
And yes, Dev can ask moderators to remove fake tags on their game.

Basically what a1fox3 said. But I did not create the game with inc#$+ in mind. I thought allowing people to dictate whatever relation they wanted would be something people would appreciate, not take it there. But we're all adults here, hence why I said you do you. So no, it's not for Patreon. In fact, the patreon version doesn't have that option.

As to why the tag? I had it removed a few times, but people kept contacting the mods, and they added it. I stopped fighting it as long as it doesn't hurt the project. The story won't change because of that, it might add huge wtf moments down the road. Maybe people will like that more, but it won't affect the story I wrote. Hope that clears it up for you.

As for the animations, I'm still learning that part. Posing each frame and character is tasking. But I want to include them, and hopefully improve over time.

 

[Harem4life]

Basically what a1fox3 said. But I did not create the game with inc#$+ in mind. I thought allowing people to dictate whatever relation they wanted would be something people would appreciate, not take it there. But we're all adults here, hence why I said you do you. So no, it's not for Patreon. In fact, the patreon version doesn't have that option.

As to why the tag? I had it removed a few times, but people kept contacting the mods, and they added it. I stopped fighting it as long as it doesn't hurt the project. The story won't change because of that, it might add huge wtf moments down the road. Maybe people will like that more, but it won't affect the story I wrote. Hope that clears it up for you.

As for the animations, I'm still learning that part. Posing each frame and character is tasking. But I want to include them, and hopefully improve over time.

Does that mean MC's mother or his sisters won't be LIs?

 

[AVNstory]

Basically what a1fox3 said. But I did not create the game with inc#$+ in mind. I thought allowing people to dictate whatever relation they wanted would be something people would appreciate, not take it there. But we're all adults here, hence why I said you do you. So no, it's not for Patreon. In fact, the patreon version doesn't have that option.

As to why the tag? I had it removed a few times, but people kept contacting the mods, and they added it. I stopped fighting it as long as it doesn't hurt the project. The story won't change because of that, it might add huge wtf moments down the road. Maybe people will like that more, but it won't affect the story I wrote. Hope that clears it up for you.

As for the animations, I'm still learning that part. Posing each frame and character is tasking. But I want to include them, and hopefully improve over time.

Maybe someone has already asked you this question.... but when can we expect to get the next update? I really do like the story and all the characters because each of them have completely different personalities.

 

[MadMoonMan69]

Does that mean MC's mother or his sisters won't be LIs?

Mother & Sister are both Cunts! Why would you want them as an LI?

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Does that mean MC's mother or his sisters won't be LIs?

In simple terms, you would be correct. As the story progresses, I will give you more reasons to hate them, and there will be conflicts between LIs (current and pseudo current) with them. And I mean real conflicts. It wouldn't work out even if I had written it as an ic story.

But you will have plenty of girls to substitute those 2.

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Maybe someone has already asked you this question.... but when can we expect to get the next update? I really do like the story and all the characters because each of them have completely different personalities.

I am working on it at the moment. Eta is not available since I want to make it an in-game week long update. Day 1 is available to certain subcriber levels on Patreon and Subscribestar. Day 2 is already in the works, scripted and am currently working on the renders. This day will be something different from any other day before it.

 

[FatGiant]

In simple terms, you would be correct. As the story progresses, I will give you more reasons to hate them, and there will be conflicts between LIs (current and pseudo current) with them. And I mean real conflicts. It wouldn't work out even if I had written it as an ic story.

But you will have plenty of girls to substitute those 2.

I hope it at least makes sense, and it isn't just drama for the sake of drama...

I can read something dramatic, my only requirement is that it makes sense, that it is indeed necessary and that there isn't an intelligent and sensible way around it.

Otherwise, it's just soap opera, and for that, I last saw a telenovela when I was 15, I'm 61 now...

So, if you want to go for the Dramatic, sure, just make it be good. If you can't, better not.

I think I will have to wait and see, but, to be honest not feeling hopeful.

Peace

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

I hope it at least makes sense, and it isn't just drama for the sake of drama...

I can read something dramatic, my only requirement is that it makes sense, that it is indeed necessary and that there isn't an intelligent and sensible way around it.

Otherwise, it's just soap opera, and for that, I last saw a telenovela when I was 15, I'm 61 now...

So, if you want to go for the Dramatic, sure, just make it be good. If you can't, better not.

I think I will have to wait and see, but, to be honest not feeling hopeful.

Peace

Ha! I hear you. I think it will make sense, and I believe you will be pleased with it. But that's down the road.

 

[HornyyPussy]

But that's down the road.

Are you doing a crossover with Fasder?

 

[Silent_J_Dev]

Are you doing a crossover with Fasder?

I don't know who or what that is, so I'm going to say no.

 

[HornyyPussy]

I don't know who or what that is, so I'm going to say no.

Yeah sorry, just my bad sense of humor

He makes a VN named "Down the Road"