I'm with you on the angelic counterpart, whatever her form.So in this update the Prietesses can get pregnant. Now Ziva wheres the crown that connects her to Qetesh during mass (a time when MC is f***king both 1 of the women & Qetesh through proxy). I really want an angelic counterpart to the Succubus to be born through this... she dosent have to be a TRUE angel she could be a Nephilim or Cupid/Erots or a Houri. I just think it would be hot AF lol. Also mabey the 2 half-sister would work with there daddy instead of fighting![]()
I'd love to see progression in the MC's relationship with Ziva, where the affection blossoms and actually matches the largely physical side of their connection. It still feels too much like he's an important cog in the system; someone who's skilled enough to carry out her tasks to accomplish her agenda. His relationship with Erevi is similar, but she has had moments with him where it's revealed that she's gradually developing feelings for him, which adds a different dimension to their bond. Developing his relationship with both women would add more to the development of the story. What would happen when both of them found out that the MC is also involved with the other? It would add a different dynamic to the tale, as there would be more at stake; more for the MC to lose. It could also bring in another interesting character, or the half-sisters, to help the MC with his problem, bringing Ziva and Erevi together. Maybe they'd unite to take on a greater, mutual enemy. And the end result; can you imagine that? An MC-Ziva-Erevi love triangle? He'd end up in a magical sex coma!