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Ok. Love the enthusiasm dude. But some choices clash with existingnlore so this isnt to put down or say bad ideas. Just a clean up.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Dragons are matriarchal & endangered. I dont think we will see another "alpha" & his harem but I do know that Tink plans for Vix to birth a special Daughter we can get close to
Victoria was a tavern waitress/wench who married Hans for his money. Roderick threatens to kick her out, back on the streets I doubt she knows any nobles. Also the other room upstairs is for more Vocrotia children with the little room being for a potential nanny. I like the upgrading ideas but that would be BIG Update like the goblins or vampires.
I also did a draft idea for giants that basically removes the chief without anyone finding out you knocked up Hilde (except Frida which played into the plot) & not having MC actualy kill him, mostly because I feel like that is an action that pushes MC more in the darker shade of morality, dude just wants to get his dick wet & protect his GFs, not kill nice leaders lol. Also giants are highly superstitious to all things magical so they will not agree to make a portal. Both Frida & Hilde make a point if this if u try to use Waystones with them in you're party.
The story is set in & around Weirdwood. I feel the closest to a political intrigue quest line will be the Bandit Conspiracy that is planned further along. You have some good ideas but I feel some of it breaks established lore or isnt something the MC would do. Hes a good hearted guy who wants to be a hero but thinks with his dick lol. We will most likely never get far from the village (possible portals to kne of planes or buildings in other lands could happen. High Council Building of the Elves, Nergal's throne room in the Underworld or even Qetesh's realm mabey? But not the Capitel, or Citadel or surrounding counties sadly)
Keep up the creativity tho these where fun to read
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