GandalfTheWhite
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Thank you, dykan. We treated you too harshly
Thank you, dykan. We treated you too harshly
Dykan29 The Great, Btw 78 and 79 are in the wrong order.
Yeah just look at Brandi one the main protagonists just there doing nothing like a coward instead of doing exciting things lol.Getting really obvious PS has lost all writing inspiration. Well, at least for this series imo.
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Kelly telling Brandi about the pool party would have so good, Brandi's reaction, priceless for sureOutlaw AN 22 80 - 90 pages with trash low res quality only for chronic coomers
Notes:
-Page 84 Brandi says something that never happened.
-The dialogues from Page 90 are very interesting , maybe we are going to see Brandis 180 soon...
-Kelly telling Brandi about what happened on the party offscreen was weak af , would have been great to see Brandis reaction.
Wasted opportunity no doubt about it, PS missed so many cool moments like wtf, he needs a consultant.Kelly telling Brandi about the pool party would have so good, Brandi's reaction, priceless for sure
PS could do what Daval did in ID10 - show it in flashback.Kelly telling Brandi about the pool party would have so good, Brandi's reaction, priceless for sure
The problem is Ps is kinda retarded that always omits details like Kelly swallowing Dylans cum.PS could do what Daval did in ID10 - show it in flashback.
Time was the best answer.I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
Interesting theory, Brandi is the contradiction himself and I hope that changes asap, I can see Kelly becoming the new cumdump of the island for sure but I hope Brandi have fun too.I still believe that Kelly will gradually separate Brandi from Dylan. Let's remember that the author has often failed to build his characters. You can't trust anything he proposes in this story because everything has contradictions from start to finish. Kelly will probably stay with Dylan because she has already shown an interest in him and she is jealous of her sister, but she could also be jealous of her. That's why Brandi will gradually interact with the Swedes and the rest of the islanders. Because they are sisters and want each other's convenience, it is certain that they will both become prostitutes very quickly. One will complement the other.
Tbh I don't want a conflict between the 2 sisters they can have Dylan anytime but the curious thing here is AN 22 page 90 dialogues, Dylan just let the window open for Brandi and I hope she eventually takes it...Time was the best answer.