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MRhnm1992

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The wonders of mind control. Of course, from a narrative point of view it seems too hasty to me as well, although it could be justified as a way for Elara to be testing the limits of the moral and mental corruption she is using on the young Ethan.
True. I think in the previous chapter, when Ethan sees his mother, Elara is already thinking about how to make him cross all possible boundaries, whether it's family or not.

I still think that Elara hasn't told Ethan the whole truth about the bond they have now and that she surely needs Ethan to have sex continuously to feed her and increase her power. For now, Ethan sees the positive side, satisfying some sexual appetites he has, but surely at some point in the story he discovers the truth about Elara and that he has to get rid of her.

He still has to sleep with his mother, with the teacher, with his classmate and who knows if PS adds more characters. I feel that this story can go on for a long time, not as long as AU, but a good number of chapters.

The fun will come when he doesn't have to use his powers to sleep with women.
 

Dr.Rape

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its hilarious the dev is so lame didnt even made helf decent exture for fishnet stockings, it looks like 8 year old first texture mod for skyrim

frankly the brandi bitch is only thing decent he ever made, everything else is hideous, i think he was just goofing around with sliders and made it unawarely lel.
 
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Hmm. An improvement over the past updates(part-13 only). But I'm still waiting for more TimmyxTina sex scenes. Pegasus ended thier first time way too shortly. Let's hope he'll make up for it in this chapter by adding a sex scene between them consisting of at least 40-50 pages.
 
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its hilarious the dev is so lame didnt even made helf decent exture for fishnet stockings, it looks like 8 year old first texture mod for skyrim

frankly the brandi bitch is only thing decent he ever made, everything else is hideous, i think he was just goofing around with sliders and made it unawarely lel.
He is quite an experienced developer, but after all these years, he still doesn't bother with basic cloth physics. I mean, look at the breast area—the clothes are tucked in between instead of being stretched. It's exactly an 8-year-old's mistake!
Sometimes, I think this is the reason he renders only naked characters—so he doesn't have to adjust their clothes at all.
 
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