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Such a lame plot. An incest comic without a grain of taboo. Just like 99% of modern comics, when moms say, 'Son, wanna fuck?' and the son replies, 'Sure do,' and they just fuck. And all these free-use themes make no sense for the incest genre.
I'd say they are killing it.
 

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I wonder what’s going on with Brandy at this moment ?
Maybe she fell asleep in the beach after talking to Victoria, wakes up and pass by her cottage and hears moans, she gets close to take a look and sees Victoria getting railed by Carl and Lucas, she masturbates imagining is her getting 2 dicks at the same time, she cums and realize is sunset already and leaves, hopes thats the case.
 
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Just wondering here... is anyone that's here for au naturel tired of Brandi and Kelly only fucking Dylan? I mean damn, can anyone else on the island fuck them? If people are going to freak out about it being NTR then just write it in that Dylan doesn't care who they fuck because he is fucking every woman on the island anyway. Kelly is blowing Dylan right now right? So can't Brandi be off fucking someone somewhere else on the island?
 
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Just wondering here... is anyone that's here for au naturel tired of Brandi and Kelly only fuck Dylan? I mean damn can anyone else on the island fuck them? If people are going to freak out about it being NTR then just write it in that Dylan doesn't care who they fuck because he is fucking every woman on the island anyway. Kelly is blowing Dylan right now right? So can't Brandi be off fucking someone somewhere else on the island?
So, instead of NTR, going directly to cuckolding... I don't think the majority would like it, and it would kill the story for me.
But hey, everyone has their tastes, right?!
 
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So, instead of NTR, going directly to cuckolding... I don't think the majority would like it, and it would kill the story for me.
But hey, everyone has their tastes, right?!
From Brandi more often then not, targeted for complete ruining in PS's writing and Dylan making stupid choices.
Things had different(better) storytelling perspectives then in the past titles.
Definite Makings with chance progress in their bonding(Brandi/Dylan), getting where needed.

Then Gina, who's supposed to be a 'Naturist' pulls shit ONE Would NEVER do(Naturists don't pull crap she did).
On top of her Son being a total disrespectful Narcissistic douchebag.
Things already went to shit, Gina and Rory ruined it.

Not promoting NTR, lets just be clear ...
Could easily be heading to typical Whore-Out-Brandi-Fuck-Fest.
Typical PS Crap .....Again, and again, and again...

Who really knows *shrugs*
 

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I think we can all agree we watch PS comics more for the visual element (nicely rendered tits for example) then the writing (which is getting kinda cringe)
And that is sad since for the incest element you do need some serviceable writing to make good scenes. Maybe it has just gotten drawn out too much, interests waned, etc. but it just doesn't spark like it used too.
 
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I think we can all agree we watch PS comics more for the visual element (nicely rendered tits for example) then the writing (which is getting kinda cringe)
And that is sad since for the incest element you do need some serviceable writing to make good scenes. Maybe it has just gotten drawn out too much, interests waned, etc. but it just doesn't spark like it used too.
Well, to be fair ... it does hold a particular spark to the writing.

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Just wondering here... is anyone that's here for au naturel tired of Brandi and Kelly only fuck Dylan? I mean damn can anyone else on the island fuck them? If people are going to freak out about it being NTR then just write it in that Dylan doesn't care who they fuck because he is fucking every woman on the island anyway. Kelly is blowing Dylan right now right? So can't Brandi be off fucking someone somewhere else on the island?
Me and a lot of fans do (thats kinda taboo by a few for some reason) never forget that Brandi got interested on Petes Tom and The Monster cocks and her goal was to have fun on the island and fuck anybody she wanted, PS had the perfect chance to established a open relationship in chapter 10 with Gina convincing them but no instead he created that stupid retarded ntr scenario out of nowhere that clearly ruined Brandi character and established Rory as the ultimate dickhead.

After that PS created the Shaman scenario helping Brandi to cope about cucking Dylan and look at her now shes boring af pretending to be a puritan restraining her true feelings because of chapter 10 awful writing, Kelly is starting to get use to the lifestyle of the island so makes sense there because she will be a cum truck thats a fact, PS needs to do something with Brandi asap shes the MC that fans cares the most hell even Victoria plot is more interesting than hers, Dylan can fuck anybody but Brandi not is horseshit, we are in A22 PS just dropped the ball with her so much is sad to see.

Imo the only way she can change her mind and getting loose is watching Kelly getting absolutely destroyed by Tom or The Monster and Gina manipulating her to get unhinged just like her, at least theres still hope to give her a 180 in the story I just dont see the point of keeping her away of the fun while the rest are fucking each others knowing the fact that she got interested on other dudes, I still have hope but in a minor way...
 
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Me and a lot of fans do (thats kinda taboo by a few for some reason) never forget that Brandi got interested on Petes Tom and The Monster cocks and her goal was to have fun on the island and fuck anybody she wanted, PS had the perfect chance to established a open relationship in chapter 10 with Gina convincing them but no instead he created that stupid retarded ntr scenario out of nowhere that clearly ruined Brandi character and established Rory as the ultimate dickhead.

After that PS created the Shaman scenario helping Brandi to cope about cucking Dylan and look at her now shes boring af pretending to be a puritan restraining her true feelings because of chapter 10 awful writing, Kelly is starting to get use to the lifestyle of the island so makes sense there because she will be a cum truck thats a fact, PS needs to do something with Brandi asap shes the MC that fans cares the most hell even Victoria plot is more interesting than hers, Dylan can fuck anybody but Brandi not is horseshit, we are in A22 PS just dropped the ball with her so much is sad to see.

Imo the only way she can change her mind and getting loose is watching Kelly getting absolutely destroyed by Tom or The Monster and Gina manipulating her to get unhinged just like her, at least theres still hope to give her a 180 in the story I just dont see the point of keeping her away of the fun while the rest are fucking each others knowing the fact that she got interested on other dudes, I still have hope but in a minor way...
This point PS is just going to do the Same Shit with Brandi, all the time becoming a Cum Dumpster like the rest of the titles.
No point in having a story with Dylan and them realizing their Never Perused Love-Conection For Each-other..
when in fact.... it's Horseshit..... just no point in it anymore.

Continue with the Cum dumpster Whore PS has made Brandi to be.. and be done with it.
That's really what You want ...Right?
 
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This point PS is just going to do the Same Shit with Brandi, all the time becoming a Cum Dumpster like the rest of the titles.
No point in having a story with Dylan and them realizing their Never Perused Love-Conection For Each-other..
when in fact.... it's Horseshit..... just no point in it anymore.

Continue with the Cum dumpster Whore PS has made Brandi to be.. and be done with it.
That's really what You want ...Right?
Well is very clear that PS aint doing the cum dumpster scenario with Brandi, hes just taking her away of it and making her at same time a really boring character when she showed interest in other dudes while the rest are having fun and a lot of fans just dont agree with that so whats the problem with it, I just want a good reason for her to do what she wants without using lame and lazy ntr, if this keep going Kelly is going to take her protagonism in a second and thats not ok at all, Dylan can fuck any girl he wants so why Brandi cant do the same.

At the end of the day this is a porn comic I dont see any issue wanting the MC to have sex with others in a very open minded nudist beach, kinda funny when she had lesbian sex scenes nobody said nothing about (wheres the Never Perused Love-Conection For Each-other you talked about) but if somebody wants to see her with Pete Tom The Monster etc thats a problem lol

Finally I want to see Kelly Victoria Emily etc with other people too not just Brandi.
 

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Well is very clear that PS aint doing the cum dumpster scenario with Brandi, hes just taking her away of it and making her at same time a really boring character when she showed interest in other dudes while the rest are having fun and a lot of fans just dont agree with that so whats the problem with it, I just want a good reason for her to do what she wants without using lame and lazy ntr, if this keep going Kelly is going to take her protagonism in a second and thats not ok at all, Dylan can fuck any girl he wants so why Brandi cant do the same.

At the end of the day this is a porn comic I dont see any issue wanting the MC to have sex with others in a very open minded nudist beach, kinda funny when she had lesbian sex scenes nobody said nothing about (wheres the Never Perused Love-Conection For Each-other you talked about) but if somebody wants to see her with Pete Tom The Monster etc thats a problem lol

Finally I want to see Kelly Victoria Emily etc with other people too not just Brandi.
What part of It Went To Shit, is not clear?
You're totally skipping over the point, remove Dylan all together.
The Very plot from start onward as well:

"wheres the Never Perused Love-Conection For Each-other you talked about"

in case ya missed this: https://f95zone.to/threads/pegasus-smith-collection-2024-02-16-pegasus-smith.48395/post-14995453

Just because You want to see Brandi become a Cum dumpster Whore by a Big Dick.
Doesn't rule out or justify fact, It Went To Shit.. Period.
May as well be the same it's always been in past titles.

Including and not exclusively Your desire to see her get split in two LOL!! :ROFLMAO:
 
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Dylan had sex with everyone and no one bothers.

Brandy had sex only with Rory and she is already a whore.

And enough to say that Dylan was training to be a better lover because he already trained enough.
Case and Point, Dylan's been making Stupid Choices from early on.
'If' he was truly into Brandi as it was written per plot point (not just in getting his dick wet).
He's main focus would have been her but, he thinks with his dick (stupid choices).
 
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What part of It Went To Shit, is not clear?
You're totally skipping over the point, remove Dylan all together.
The Very plot from start onward as well:

"wheres the Never Perused Love-Conection For Each-other you talked about"

in case ya missed this: https://f95zone.to/threads/pegasus-smith-collection-2024-02-16-pegasus-smith.48395/post-14995453

Just because You want to see Brandi become a Cum dumpster Whore by a Big Dick.
Doesn't rule out or justify fact, It Went To Shit.. Period.
May as well be the same it's always been in past titles.

Including and not exclusively Your desire to see her get split in two LOL!! :ROFLMAO:
Then Gina, who's supposed to be a 'Naturist' pulls shit ONE Would NEVER do(Naturists don't pull crap she did).
On top of her Son being a total disrespectful Narcissistic douchebag.
Things already went to shit, Gina and Rory ruined it.

LOL so you blame Gina for ruining this comic for pulling out shit a naturist will never do bruh this is a porn comic the autor can take liberties on their work, IT DOESNT HAVE TO BE BASED ON REALITY you are the one missing the point, Rory is a piece of shit well thats pretty usual to see

I disagree about seeing Brandi just there doing nothing while the rest have fun.
 
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