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MEFANBOY

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They are hot but the main male character is crap, boring as sh**. Those comics would be 100x times better if his mother and auntie fuck with anyone else in the island. Leave that Dylan shit and focus on the two blondes. I stop supporting it because in every comics it´s Dylan and his mother, and now Dylan with his auntie. :sleep::sleep: Boring..

Imagine having 24 comics already and the 10th is still your best comic..you are clearly doing something wrong with them.
If you are going to make Dylan fuck other characters on the island do the same thing with his mother and auntie even if it has to be more progressively. Nothing has been done in 24 comics. They are still acting the same as when they arrived on the island.
Chapter 10 is the reason why the series has become shit ass boring. Don't agree? Then you're a blind ntr lover, that's all.
 

MEFANBOY

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To bad it's way better than the AN has gotten, Tina's gangbang scene in Trick or Treat was very well done and hot.
It was okay only in the first chapter but pegasus kinda dragged it too long upto chapter 3, I think. And he kept on teasing TimmyxTina for 11 chapters, only to give around 30 pages of physical intimacy then quickly turned her into a background character in the next episode. I don't know if it's the A.I translators who gets the translations wrong or the makers forget about those lines/scenes which always indicates some strong presence of these characters getting more prominent presence in the stories, only to take a U turn on the next episode.
 
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KingsRaiden

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It was okay only in the first chapter but pegasus kinda dragged it too long upto chapter 3, I think. And he kept on teasing TimmyxTina for 11 chapters, only to give around 30 pages of physical intimacy then quickly turned her into a background character in the next episode. I don't know if it's the A.I translators who gets the translations wrong or the makers forget about those lines/scenes which always indicates some strong presence of these characters getting more prominent presence in the stories, only to take a U turn on the next episode.
Most of it I can't disagree with, but you knew from the beginning the Timmy x Tina scene would be dragged out, I did like the other Mom getting turned into a slut for the upcoming party which has my interest more than the rest of the story. The other Moms were fucked by Timmy, then once he had his revenge he was done with them for the most part.
Still better than just Dylan screwing around on an island where everyone is having sex with others but his mom. It's just become an incest story where the son is a stud and the Moms give in to their sons and only them.
 

MEFANBOY

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Most of it I can't disagree with, but you knew from the beginning the Timmy x Tina scene would be dragged out, I did like the other Mom getting turned into a slut for the upcoming party which has my interest more than the rest of the story. The other Moms were fucked by Timmy, then once he had his revenge he was done with them for the most part.
Still better than just Dylan screwing around on an island where everyone is having sex with others but his mom. It's just become an incest story where the son is a stud and the Moms give in to their sons and only them.
Pegasus screwed up in chapter 10 and the backlash he received, fried his brain cells.
 
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MEFANBOY

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He did great, they are on sex island but some people pretend only 1 guy should have all sex and girls he sleep with should remain only his. They stupid phantasy ruined good plot.
He did great? Yeah right. Good joke.
And I never said brandi shouldn't have sex with anyone else on the island. But the forced ntr in chapter 10 received so much backlash that pegasus completely lost his way and screwed up the whole series. And why does it seem that you are probably part of that group who encouraged pegasus to add that bullshit into that chapter? Do you have a twitter account? Are you part of pegasus smith community there?
 

LiMp17

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Chapter 10 is the reason why the series has become shit ass boring. Don't agree? Then you're a blind ntr lover, that's all.
I am not saying both Dylan and mother should fuck at the same time looking at each other, but I wish Brandi and auntie should experiment on their own a little, create some different circumstances when they could have sex with other characters not only with the son nonstop 24/7 in every comics he releases., and Dylan is like "line up ladies, I can´t keep fucking all of you at the same time". All the female characters are glued to Dylan in every comic, it´s like the rest of the male characters don´t ever exist on the island. Pegasus started good and then after certain comics he went nowhere.
 
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Dustellar

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Unintended has huge potential, unless it's a one-off, if it's an ongoing Pegasus should develop it "slowly", not make them fuck in this first issue, just the mom trying to keep contact with him without revealing her identity, the son should be the one thinking she wants to fuck him.

Also, the foster mother should be part of the plot too, she's hot after all... imagine this ending with a mommy threesome, would be amazing!
 
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egenes

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Does anyone know what Pegasus Smith is working on currently ?
I guess Au Natural 25 is being worked on, but is there anything else ?
There used to be a calendar showing release dates of ongoing projects...
 
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