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KingsRaiden
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To me it's repetitive, every issue is just Dylan with either his Mom or his Aunt now, maybe Dylan screwing a few other girls on the island. The only variation is Victoria and her two sons.
Only so much of kids screwing blonde milfs that can go on before it's feeling stale.
AN is not boring but the last chapters Victoria's story resulted more interesting than Dylan and his intercourse with Brandi and Kelly. I wish Brandi broadened her horizons with another relationship apart from Dylan.
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And what about the lesbian sex between Brandi and Kelly ? And the nice threesome developing ?
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The lesbian sex between sisters was developed in order to set up the threesome wit Dylan. It's always around Dylan. I wouldn't be surprised that Victoria ended with Dylan too and Kelly and Brandi don't have any sex with another man perhaps lesbian sex. It's a pity.
KingsRaiden
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Be nice if it was just them, or the threesome was with someone else. But it's not. It's still with just the blonde milfs and the kids they showed up with, and not any of the other guys on the island. I get he's giving his supporters what they want, but eventually many others will get bored.
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I agree Tom Pete The Monsters The Master needs to get involved more , PS needs to give Brandi free will , Kelly needs to be unhinged and have fun with the locals too not hist with Dylan , Victoria and Petra probably are going to be fucked by him eventually , we need new scenarios PS better be smart and stop gatekeeping himself.
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You have told the truth. PS should watch this thread and get some suggestion.
KingsRaiden
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Doesn't need to be PS, the collective WE who read his comic here can present opinions and feedback to others.
What drew me to this was the good writing, art, free use, and free sex concept. Now it's basically an incest comic revolving around two of the parents and their kids. Plenty of people enjoy it, and that works for them, but would be nice to see it get back to where it started.
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AN 25 Pages 56 - 61 LQ shitty translation
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In this forum PS can have a lot of feedback to improve AN lore and motivations of the characters (he forgot Brandis motivations from chapter 1) thats the irony but he choose to gate keep himself hurting the comic since chapter 10.
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What I don't understand is that AN was an incest comic from the rip. It hasn't deviated from that. Folks insist on complaining "he's keeping Brandi all to Dylan" etc and so forth. A bunch of non-donors complaining in a forum isn't going to make him change that. Apparently that's what folks want in their incest comics, at least the folks supporting him, anyways. He's added Dylan having sex with others and Brandi as well as build up and drama for the story, but their focus was always each other. Always. Having said that, now that Kelly is there and the 3 of them are having their big build up moment, I can't imagine he'd keep the story going for much longer. Other than current events, it has gotten a little stale. He could have condensed or omitted some of the previous parts and have this all wrapped up, but you know, money. He needs to wrap it up, whether they stay on the island, whether Kelly stays with them, etc. Personally I hope they leave the island that way their story(Dylan, Brandi, and Kelly) can continue maybe in 1-off stories here and there. That's just my 2 cents.
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Brandi motivations chapter 1 page 16
Chapter 17 Pages 128 and 129 dialogues dont lie and I quote "Im sure Dylan would understand that"
And how can we forget about broaden her horizons quote from Chapter 17 page 132
PS created those scenarios for a reason, her desire is right there so why do you think we want to see her 180.
Chapter 10 changed this comic for the worst , now shes a hollow restricted shell of herself with a lot of sexual desires she wants to do not involving Dylan.
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Rhabeeb
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Honestly, I'd say it's more than likely the donors that influenced the current path the story is taking. Personally I don't put much stock into what she said in chapter 1, it's literally the introduction to the story and in about 99% of the incest stories I've read(admittedly not a lot as it ain't really my thing), the mother doesn't know she wants her sons dick up in her until it's damn near there. As for what happened in part 17, I don't know what happened there. I remember that part, but I wouldn't say it was because of part 10 as that was almost 10 parts previous. Even in the dialogue it seemed he was ready to let her spread her wings/cheeks and do some investigating of her own, but then just dropped it. Again, I'd probably chock it up to donors. Probably had some kinda poll and the majority voted against it would be my guess. Personally I think that polling the audience/donor shit is for the birds. At least with main-line stories. Yeah, it makes them feel part of the process and they're getting their money's worth, but honestly it kills stories.
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Her quote in chapter 1 was before all the incest yes but doesn't change what she said , her desire to have fun with the locals sexually and chapter 17 solidified that statement , PS fucked up the story including a unwanted out of nowhere NTR scenario just to create a rivalry between Dylan and Rory (not my words PS words on discord).
Brandi got interested in Pete's dick when she was looking for Dylan on the island in the beginning, also on Toms schlong when she met him she even touch it and she was blown away (both scenes before the incest I know ,even after fucking Dylan I'm pretty sure she thinks the same thing about those 2 ) and the awful scene with Rory in chapter 10.
I agree that if the creators let the subs to dictate how the story must go on that will eventually destroy their creativity and the story and thats what precisely happened here and in Daval Immoral Desires comic just to name another example.
The intention of her 180 is there , I didn't make that shit up or anyone else either thats what a lot of fans here don't understand.
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We want to see this,but we won't. Dylan and only Dylan. The whole point of the comic is Dylan 's penis. Stop dreaming about Brandy getting fucked by men.