Okay,so first how's everyone doing?hope your doing great.so it's been a while for me to do this kind of review about the game for the past 2 updates and I must be honest you improve big time Mr black there are lots of things you nailed but there is also some lapse you remain on doing (I dunno if it's the right word but I'm sure you know what I'm talking about)
Okay so for the past update before this I saw some characters that are better off with the game,like what are you trying to do with this character Mr black we have no idea.first the mail man then the taxi driver then the fatso baker.would it be great if we just focus mainly in the story by corrupting the mother, improving the story by slowly losing her some morale and give in.idk what's the deal for these characters to show up like are you planning to do some NTR? overall the rendering process of those character are chefs kiss and good job on doing that,but I guess you can minimize adding unnecessary dudes into the game.a couple of people is okay like the assistant from the husbands office but if you can't help adding male dude you can just add some figure of them but not to the point that your literally doing them dip into the actual game.
Second I like to thank you for improving yourself this past months I know it's hard because you also have life outside this spinoff but you still killing it,good job man.the updated game looks like the original and your are getting close in making your renders close to cloudlet's.
-Writer
maybe it's about time you get yourself some partner who is a mad lad in writing this type of mother and son corruption thing because it's getting better and better,you can see also through cloudlets game that there is something already burning in that game in just one of those adoption, teasing, peeping and groping thing I think that's THE MISSING INGREDIENT for this crabby patty to be perfect.
Also you improve in terms of expressions keep that up although it's not perfect but I know you can do something about it on how you will get rid of those empty eyes of the mother ❤ overall the lighting and shit is bloody beautiful you deserve a trophy or an 8 hour sleep lol.
We are gonna expect a juicy update this time
Because the main story now will be focused in the house since the husband and mother are having a feud.this will be the time Danny takes his luck further with her mother.please minimize adding unnecessary character like they are planning something to the mom.danny is enough for the whole game to run.ALSO WORK ON THE WRITING HIRE SOMEONE so that you won't burn yourself with all this progress you getting now.well be expecting a good writing next update..THIS IS THE TURNING POINT DUDE there's something on that original that you forget to add in the spin off and that is the writing..
I'm expecting and hoping you will
still improve in this coming months,years we are rooting for you brother ❤but also taking care of yourself.we don't want you being slayed with all this pressure you have without taking care first of your sane and status❤we love you dude and I'm still here supporting you with or without cloudlet
Key points to improve next :
- expression( don't rush but still improve slowly)
- writing /story (important)
If it's possible
Can you add a blowjob scene finally from Dannyand the mom?I mean it's already there dont leave us having a boner here just like cloudlet did before he gone AWOL lol but if it's not the right time it's okay❤
That's it for now I already spent half an hour writing this shit up so it's means something to me take care dude
Watching you silently
-lvl9 toaster