- Aug 11, 2020
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Yeah I agree, when she was talking about her night with Erik it did feel disjointed. They probably should have had a camera where the MC could have just watched. Since Erik is one of the few who gets her pussy I wanted that to be a bit more. For instance she should have just given her husband a BJ when she came back since her pussy was so sore from Erik banging her all night long. And yes, that is green.....And I'm partially color blind.Anyone else find the scenes where she's re-telling the husband about what she did a bit awkward. Like the flipping back and forth and the inner monologue type descriptions make it feel kind of disjointed to me.
I don't know a way to make it smoother except maybe less flipping back and forth
Also yes that guy's face is green to me too.