Eerie Entity

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I wouldn't say he broke her, she was already broken. He put her together the only way he could.

She had no confidence, completely froze when she was exposed in the Octagon and panicked whenever it looked like she might be seen naked by someone.

Now she's getting to where she needs to be. More confident, even manages to pull off a dress and act girly .... until she beats the shit out of the guy.
Sophie, Jenna and Amy form my top 3 in the game :p
Usually I'm not that into blondes (just a preference, not saying there's anything wrong with them), and plastic tits most often turn me off, but there's just something very endearing about Jenna, even if she is a stereotype. I don't know if I'm the only one, but I for one don't really wanna go too hard on her, as in to break that bully spirit in order to shape the lovely girl she can be and deep inside is, if she only LET herself be vulnerable in front of others. I think she'd make a lovely girlfriend for MC in the long run, at least I hope so, haha.
 
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I think she's make a lovely girlfriend for MC in the long run, at least I hope so, haha.
I have no idea what Domiek has planned, let's be honest here, nobody knows what goes on in that head and i'm pretty sure it would take years of therapy if we saw it.

My perfect ending would be MC and Jenna, happily ever after.

Not sure if there are multiple endings planned. This is one game where I really don't mind, i'd settle for pretty much anything but I would love a happily ever after with him and Jenna.
 
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I have no idea what Domiek has planned, let's be honest here, nobody knows what goes on in that head and i'm pretty sure it would take years of therapy if we saw it.

My perfect ending would be MC and Jenna, happily ever after.

Not sure if there are multiple endings planned. This is one game where I really don't mind, i'd settle for pretty much anything but I would love a happily ever after with him and Jenna.
The current work in progress ending for Jenna is actually too cheesy, even by my romantic soft teddy bear heart standards. Jenna drops her guard and lets MC into her life. They end up casually dating, mostly just wrestle around the place, quick morning anal sessions, etc. But sometime between all the cuddling and pegging, they realize that they truly love and care for one other.

MC proposes to Jenna with a ring-pop because he can't afford a real ring on a part-time personal trainer income. They start a go-fund campaign to come up with the cash to host a modest classic church wedding. Jenna gets to wear the white dress her mother wore, one that Jenna's had an eye on ever since she was a little boy (we've only met post-surgery Jenna).

Sophie gets her ordination license because she's an important part of both of their lives (they fool around together all the time). Que the wedding bells, Jenna walks down the isle looking so beautiful in a hulk-esque way. She has a fresh tatoo on her ribcage that says "Avaron's Bitch" (Thanks Avaron for that $300 donation btw). Skip past them saying their vows, "you're not only my soulmate, but my bestfriend" yada-yada. You may now kiss the bride. Except Sophie says "Now Kith" because her and MC were watching a b-flick porno featuring Mike Tyson the night before. As MC and Jenna lean in to share their first kiss as man and wife- BOOM!

Everyone is instantly vaporized. For you see, the entire premise of this game was for you to stop North Korea from developing long-range nuclear missiles capable of reaching America. The clues were scattered throughout the game all along. You could have saved millions of innocent lives, but instead, you chose to be selfish and got your dick wet as often as possible. I hope you enjoyed your nuclear holocaust. Everyone you loved is dead. Only Walter survived as cockroaches do.

Shame on you, player.

Shame on you.


(Of course it's only a work in progress. I'll probably end up changing some details here and there, by the time the game is completed.)
 

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The current work in progress ending for Jenna is actually too cheesy, even by my romantic soft teddy bear heart standards. Jenna drops her guard and lets MC into her life. They end up casually dating, mostly just wrestle around the place, quick morning anal sessions, etc. But sometime between all the cuddling and pegging, they realize that they truly love and care for one other.

MC proposes to Jenna with a ring-pop because he can't afford a real ring on a part-time personal trainer income. They start a go-fund campaign to come up with the cash to host a modest classic church wedding. Jenna gets to wear the white dress her mother wore, one that Jenna's had an eye on ever since she was a little boy (we've only met post-surgery Jenna).

Sophie gets her ordination license because she's an important part of both of their lives (they fool around together all the time). Que the wedding bells, Jenna walks down the isle looking so beautiful in a hulk-esque way. She has a fresh tatoo on her ribcage that says "Avaron's Bitch" (Thanks Avaron for that $300 donation btw). Skip past them saying their vows, "you're not only my soulmate, but my bestfriend" yada-yada. You may now kiss the bride. Except Sophie says "Now Kith" because her and MC were watching a b-flick porno featuring Mike Tyson the night before. As MC and Jenna lean in to share their first kiss as man and wife- BOOM!

Everyone is instantly vaporized. For you see, the entire premise of this game was for you to stop North Korea from developing long-range nuclear missiles capable of reaching America. The clues were scattered throughout the game all along. You could have saved millions of innocent lives, but instead, you chose to be selfish and got your dick wet as often as possible. I hope you enjoyed your nuclear holocaust. Everyone you loved is dead. Only Walter survived as cockroaches do.

Shame on you, player.

Shame on you.


(Of course it's only a work in progress. I'll probably end up changing some details here and there, by the time the game is completed.)
Domiek I salute you, that was great and made me laugh....
 

Avaron1974

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(Of course it's only a work in progress. I'll probably end up changing some details here and there, by the time the game is completed.)
Oh, hunni. There is so much wrong there that needs to change.

Except Sophie says "Now Kith" because her and MC were watching a b-flick porno featuring Mike Tyson the night before.
This bit, right here.

Nobody wants to watch Tyson fucking.

Look, i'm not one to kink shame but he's got the body of a bulldog and the voice of a fairy on helium. Nobody wants to hear those squeaky orgasms.

Everything else is fine though.
 

Eerie Entity

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The current work in progress ending for Jenna is actually too cheesy, even by my romantic soft teddy bear heart standards. Jenna drops her guard and lets MC into her life. They end up casually dating, mostly just wrestle around the place, quick morning anal sessions, etc. But sometime between all the cuddling and pegging, they realize that they truly love and care for one other.

MC proposes to Jenna with a ring-pop because he can't afford a real ring on a part-time personal trainer income. They start a go-fund campaign to come up with the cash to host a modest classic church wedding. Jenna gets to wear the white dress her mother wore, one that Jenna's had an eye on ever since she was a little boy (we've only met post-surgery Jenna).

Sophie gets her ordination license because she's an important part of both of their lives (they fool around together all the time). Que the wedding bells, Jenna walks down the isle looking so beautiful in a hulk-esque way. She has a fresh tatoo on her ribcage that says "Avaron's Bitch" (Thanks Avaron for that $300 donation btw). Skip past them saying their vows, "you're not only my soulmate, but my bestfriend" yada-yada. You may now kiss the bride. Except Sophie says "Now Kith" because her and MC were watching a b-flick porno featuring Mike Tyson the night before. As MC and Jenna lean in to share their first kiss as man and wife- BOOM!

Everyone is instantly vaporized. For you see, the entire premise of this game was for you to stop North Korea from developing long-range nuclear missiles capable of reaching America. The clues were scattered throughout the game all along. You could have saved millions of innocent lives, but instead, you chose to be selfish and got your dick wet as often as possible. I hope you enjoyed your nuclear holocaust. Everyone you loved is dead. Only Walter survived as cockroaches do.

Shame on you, player.

Shame on you.


(Of course it's only a work in progress. I'll probably end up changing some details here and there, by the time the game is completed.)
Haha, that was just bloody awesome, an awesome mini-story, you sure are awesome coming up with great stuff, but that we all knew since the beginning :p
 
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