VN Ren'Py Phone Story [v0.5] [Taptus]

[CrysusPariah]

That was a mean cliffhanger

 

[Taptus]

So maybe I'm missing something here, but I tried so far to play strickly the love path so far, but she ends with with Karl in the card. So right now, Lisa is cheating correct? Unless I missed something

Hello! In Version 0.6, your choice will be revealed in more detail. I can guarantee you that if you follow the path of love, nothing bad will happen.

 

[Taptus]

You serious?
Lisa is a lying, cheating, selfish bitch just like the rest of them, lol.

Get her a bit horny or drunk and she'll starts kissing and sexting with close friends or personal trainers. Do we even have to talk about her past of being a cheating college free-use fleshlight?

That's true, but it's not about manipulating others, and I'm writing about manipulating others.

 

[whitewolf1990]

Hello! In Version 0.6, your choice will be revealed in more detail. I can guarantee you that if you follow the path of love, nothing bad will happen.

Looking forward to 0.6 then! Just seems like the cliffhanger puts Lisa in a bad position and shes cheating despite picking most if not all the love options. Maybe its because I declined Kira's offer?

 

[Taptus]

I need to check the family albums to see if there are still any photos in them... If not, I'll have to resurrect a few loved ones, buy a few things that are no longer produced, find the same places... The hardest thing will be when it turns out that the forests are gone, the lakes and seas and their beaches look different... Grandma's house no longer exists, and my other grandma's house looks completely different... That will be a challenge!

Unfortunately, this is the only way program code works. I did not find a solution to open the already shown images, alas, just go through the game first

 

[Taptus]

This game is torturous in the best possible way. Exceptional writing and pacing. Playing on hard without knowing the outcome and stats of your choices is VERY exciting. Can't wait to play the finished game eventually. Please, please never abandon this game...

Hello! Thank you for your feedback! I do not plan to abandon it, on the contrary, I think about how to improve and develop it, so I am always happy to receive feedback and advice

 

[Taptus]

Looking forward to 0.6 then! Just seems like the cliffhanger puts Lisa in a bad position and shes cheating despite picking most if not all the love options. Maybe its because I declined Kira's offer?

Don't worry, if you made the right choices and supported love, then Lisa will always reciprocate! At the expense of choosing Kira, this is another question, but I can safely say that this choice gives a lot of interesting content in version 0.6/ As I wrote earlier, version 0.6 is essentially two large branches and each has 2 highlights. Actually choosing whether to masturbate Lisa in front of the bar is one of the most important choices of version 0.5

 

[Suntar]

That's true, but it's not about manipulating others, and I'm writing about manipulating others.

Cheating involves some form of manipulation most of the time, but that's arguing semantics. I understand what you mean, Lisa isn't actively manipulating everyone to further her own goals.

If this is the story you want to write, you're doing a great job. Not my cup of tea, but it's certainly a trainwreck in the making I'll keep checking up on. Keep up the good work.

Would like to see some positive character development further on in the story though. MC becoming less manipulative and more secure in himself and not seeing everyone as his arch-nemesis for example (though in this game his paranoia is actually justified).
Maybe Kira and Sophia adopting some positive influence from each other. Sophia replacing the stick in her butt with a dick and Kira maybe respecting some boundaries.

Looks like if you play your cards right you can even stop Lisa from cheating before you have the relationship talk with her. That's definetely a plus. Another on-ramp for a Karl route would be nice though. Maybe as his undercover office slut or something, while she loyaly reports to MC.

 

[Joshy92]

Speaking of NTS, when I play, I get the feeling the MC is not fully sure if he wants to share Lisa yet. It's a big decision, and he knows it could all blow up in his face. But he'll need to make a choice soon, I think.

 

[whitewolf1990]

Don't worry, if you made the right choices and supported love, then Lisa will always reciprocate! At the expense of choosing Kira, this is another question, but I can safely say that this choice gives a lot of interesting content in version 0.6/ As I wrote earlier, version 0.6 is essentially two large branches and each has 2 highlights. Actually choosing whether to masturbate Lisa in front of the bar is one of the most important choices of version 0.5

Just subbed to the patreon cause I had to see what 0.6 was about. Won't spoil, but one of the options when talking to Karl is blocked off. I assume its because X didn't happen so I can't ask?

 

[Taptus]

Cheating involves some form of manipulation most of the time, but that's arguing semantics. I understand what you mean, Lisa isn't actively manipulating everyone to further her own goals.

If this is the story you want to write, you're doing a great job. Not my cup of tea, but it's certainly a trainwreck in the making I'll keep checking up on. Keep up the good work.

Would like to see some positive character development further on in the story though. MC becoming less manipulative and more secure in himself and not seeing everyone as his arch-nemesis for example (though in this game his paranoia is actually justified).
Maybe Kira and Sophia adopting some positive influence from each other. Sophia replacing the stick in her butt with a dick and Kira maybe respecting some boundaries.

Looks like if you play your cards right you can even stop Lisa from cheating before you have the relationship talk with her. That's definetely a plus. Another on-ramp for a Karl route would be nice though. Maybe as his undercover office slut or something, while she loyaly reports to MC.

Thank you for your ideas! Some of them are already in my plans, and I will think about the second part.
Before me, I see the task of making characters as motivated and evoking emotions as possible, so that they are not template NPCs

 

[Taptus]

Speaking of NTS, when I play, I get the feeling the MC is not fully sure if he wants to share Lisa yet. It's a big decision, and he knows it could all blow up in his face. But he'll need to make a choice soon, I think.

You right, so far I plan to give this active development in version 0.7

 

[Taptus]

Just subbed to the patreon cause I had to see what 0.6 was about. Won't spoil, but one of the options when talking to Karl is blocked off. I assume its because X didn't happen so I can't ask?

I would ask you here not to spoil the plot of version 0.6, if you have any questions about this version, then either write to me in the BOS on patreon or on this site, I will answer everything

 

[atrebor68]

A really good AI graphics !!

 

[atrebor68]

I'm so happy I haven't "a good friend" when I travel !!

 

[ItsNotUs]

So.....with the latest Update...love Path is suddenly off the Table??? But i guess this wasn t Lisa in the Car (last Picture)

Yeah, weird cliffhanger at the end! Moreover, the ending for all paths is the same, but we know from the words of the Taptus that this is not Lisa!
Moreover, MC somehow had to react to Karl’s car, he should know what kind of car he drives, if after all Lisa and Karl are in the car, then judging by their pose, there can’t be any excuses, but its not her... right?
We'll have to wait a month to find out, unfortunately.
If you play one path, then the update really turned out to be small, but if you take the fact that there are three paths in the game and many different options to choose from, then it is clear that much more work has been done, but still i wanted more!

The question is why Kira sent messages to Lisa just photos of sex with Karl that happened a month ago, but there was no conversation between them, just photos - is this how it should be?

 

[ItsNotUs]

I like knowing what consequences my choices will have in real time, it makes replays easier, but I'm not sure what each 'stat' means.

Love, Lust, Freedom - I'm assuming they're just shorthand for 3 different paths? So is Love Open Relationship, Lust Sharing/NTS and Lust NTR/Cheating?

I'd normally assume Love was monogamy, but I didn't think that was on the cards for this game.

Logically, it should be that the maximum or large amount of love is the Love Path, here we minus the points of freedom and lust.
For the NTR path, we increase the freedom points to the maximum and decrease the love points, etc. Of course i may be wrong.

 

[Taptus]

The question is why Kira sent messages to Lisa just photos of sex with Karl that happened a month ago, but there was no conversation between them, just photos - is this how it should be?

Hello, this is not a bug, at this moment Kira and Lisa are in the same room and Lisa just asked to send Kira these photos in the messenger, and the discussion of this action takes place behind the scenes

 

[ItsNotUs]

Calm down. The last Scene you saw (app. Lisa in the Car with Karl) this wasn t Lisa and neither was it Karl. The Scene is a cut off. Save the pic (just press "s" during Gameplay and open the Pic in your Game Folder. Zoom it...and then you u can see that the Guy in the Car is wearing a Necklace. Karl doesn t. The Girl, who is app. giving a BJ is wearing a Black Top/Dress...Lisa is wearing a RED Dress. So...IF you are on the Love Path...i am SURE..that nothing happend.

Well, actually, it’s not a necklace, it’s the collar of the shirt that made it, and the dress is red and the girl is blonde.

Spoiler: emmm

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[O1duvai]

Well, actually, it’s not a necklace, it’s the collar of the shirt that made it, and the dress is red and the girl is blonde.

Spoiler: emmm

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One of the photos from the gym has two belly buttons. I'm not picky because it's a small thing, but it's worth polishing later.

Spoiler: this

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That's why I said above that it's better to focus on the author's replies or patreon/boosty. AI could well have generated a similar, albeit soapy, model that differs from the author's text and idea. I wouldn’t get hung up on such a small and soapy piece of a picture.