CREATE YOUR AI CUM SLUT ON CANDY.AI TRY FOR FREE
x

Ren'Py Photo Hunt [v0.17.1 Extra] [Moochie]

4.30 star(s) 181 Votes
Discussion Reviews (181)
K

killazap

Newbie
Oct 31, 2023
15
16
MrTrue said:
Why is taking a loan such a weird concept to you? MC is an adult and wanted to support his hobby and needed money for it and decided to not bother his mom he had not seen for years and instead decided to provide for himself.
Nothing wrong with it and is a common practice in todays age.
Besides the real story doesn't start until later. You got worked up about an introduction.

As for the language first few updates is written by Moochie in russian then translated to english but later on she got a team that does the writing for her as she only does renders.
Click to expand...
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Mr true, You're making my point for me, you know that right? But you're just using selective reasoning to try to not make it seem that way. And my whole point was, I knew that was the beginning of the VN. I literally said it breaks the immersion and the interest for a new reader to come in for people who are just not here for pretty faces who like to immerse themselves in a good story. Like I said before, it does not change the fact that my point is valid. In the beginning of the story. You are supposed to at least set the plot in theme. Why didn't he? at least attempt to see if. they have a camera that they're not using. or express his entrance in photography with his mother or caretaker or adopted mother, whichever Taboo Mod you decide to install.


Look, I can see you're one of those types that just argues for the sake of arguing So be my guest. Try to pick apart everything I say and make it seem like it's not valid. I literally said I did research and saw that it wasn't meant to be in English. It could have been a bad English translation. but it doesn't change the fact that the story is broken. And the first impressions are what matters in games like this. Some people might like to get invested in the story and not just say, ooh, pretty pictures.

P.S.

This is to address your assumptions. Yes, I understand he can take a loan out for a camera, Sure. But to just take it out even. knowing the shady things that you have to do. that could have been the opportunity to at least talk to his mother to see. for other options before agreeing to do something. that is clearly illegal. If we're going to actually bring in real life consequences of taking out loans. then go all the way use. bringing in real-life stuff into a visual model. When all I'm saying is to flesh out the story so it doesn't have big gaping holes. at the beginning when you're trying to get people invested in it. that could possibly bring in more revenue. Even if it's just a two page disclaimer when. you start a new game.
 
Last edited:
Gamerboybst64

Gamerboybst64

Member
Jun 8, 2018
124
163
killazap said:
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Mr true, You're making my point for me, you know that right? But you're just using selective reasoning to try to not make it seem that way. And my whole point was, I knew that was the beginning of the VN. I literally said it breaks the immersion and the interest for a new reader to come in for people who are just not here for pretty faces who like to immerse themselves in a good story. Like I said before, it does not change the fact that my point is valid. In the beginning of the story. You are supposed to at least set the plot in theme. Why didn't he? at least attempt to see if. they have a camera that they're not using. or express his entrance in photography with his mother or caretaker or adopted mother, whichever Taboo Mod you decide to install.


Look, I can see you're one of those types that just argues for the sake of arguing So be my guest. Try to pick apart everything I say and make it seem like it's not valid. I literally said I did research and saw that it wasn't meant to be in English. It could have been a bad English translation. but it doesn't change the fact that the story is broken. And the first impressions are what matters in games like this. Some people might like to get invested in the story and not just say, ooh, pretty pictures.

P.S.

This is to address your assumptions. Yes, I understand he can take a loan out for a camera, Sure. But to just take it out even. knowing the shady things that you have to do. that could have been the opportunity to at least talk to his mother to see. for other options before agreeing to do something. that is clearly illegal. If we're going to actually bring in real life consequences of taking out loans. then go all the way use. bringing in real-life stuff into a visual model. When all I'm saying is to flesh out the story so it doesn't have big gaping holes. at the beginning when you're trying to get people invested in it. that could possibly bring in more revenue. Even if it's just a two page disclaimer when. you start a new game.
Click to expand...
Dude woke up on the wrong side of bed. Tbh there are much worse VNs out there. Here whatever the story lacks in plots is definitely covered for in top notch renders and imo story is good and this VN is just one of a kind which caters to different kinks and fetishes, again this is a rare feature for a VN.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Boobs Lover, MrTrue, Beduin123 and 1 other person
MAGO-DAG

MAGO-DAG

Forum Fanatic
Sep 1, 2023
4,623
15,433
Jericho85 said:
There's that girl that MC's dad knocked up.
Click to expand...
A woman who just shows up somewhere 2-4 times? and then only to complain, good guess lol. :KEK:

If anyone wants to see some pregnancy content, there is a scene from Evelyn's past and Mc's father, as well as some hints in the pregnancy future.
 
Jericho85

Jericho85

Well-Known Member
Apr 25, 2022
1,968
6,739
MAGO-DAG said:
A woman who just shows up somewhere 2-4 times? and then only to complain, good guess lol. :KEK:

If anyone wants to see some pregnancy content, there is a scene from Evelyn's past and Mc's father, as well as some hints in the pregnancy future.
Click to expand...
It's Chekhov's Gun, man. Which states "Every girl in the scene must be fucked".

...Or something like that.
 
  • Wow
Reactions: MAGO-DAG
U

useless-j

Member
Aug 15, 2019
163
828
You must be registered to see the links


You must be registered to see the links


You must be registered to see the links


Yo! I'm done with Grace's main story for v0.18 and decided that should do it (well, gonna make a couple more side events), so I better get ready with the next girl!

Jennifer 34%
Lina 25%
Fiona 41%
44 votes total · 25 days left

useless-j said:
You must be registered to see the links


Yo! I'm done with Grace's main story for v0.18 and decided that should do it (well, gonna make a couple more side events), so I better get ready with the next girl!

Jennifer 34%
Lina 25%
Fiona 41%
44 votes total · 25 days left
Click to expand...
Voted for Fiona. Hopefully she wins.
 
  • Like
  • Sad
  • Wow
Reactions: VVAR666, \\_Tremolo_//, Uriel ☁ and 11 others
M

MrRick

Member
Apr 30, 2018
239
43
I'm at the part where it's telling me to find Evelyn's photographer because she won't talk to me. Where and when am I supposed to meet him?
 
MrTrue

MrTrue

Member
Dec 2, 2021
489
1,027
MrRick said:
I'm at the part where it's telling me to find Evelyn's photographer because she won't talk to me. Where and when am I supposed to meet him?
Click to expand...
Just pass time until the weekend or sleep on Friday night and it should auto trigger.
 
  • Like
Reactions: MrRick
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom
4.30 star(s) 181 Votes