Gamerboybst64

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Mr true, You're making my point for me, you know that right? But you're just using selective reasoning to try to not make it seem that way. And my whole point was, I knew that was the beginning of the VN. I literally said it breaks the immersion and the interest for a new reader to come in for people who are just not here for pretty faces who like to immerse themselves in a good story. Like I said before, it does not change the fact that my point is valid. In the beginning of the story. You are supposed to at least set the plot in theme. Why didn't he? at least attempt to see if. they have a camera that they're not using. or express his entrance in photography with his mother or caretaker or adopted mother, whichever Taboo Mod you decide to install.


Look, I can see you're one of those types that just argues for the sake of arguing So be my guest. Try to pick apart everything I say and make it seem like it's not valid. I literally said I did research and saw that it wasn't meant to be in English. It could have been a bad English translation. but it doesn't change the fact that the story is broken. And the first impressions are what matters in games like this. Some people might like to get invested in the story and not just say, ooh, pretty pictures.

P.S.

This is to address your assumptions. Yes, I understand he can take a loan out for a camera, Sure. But to just take it out even. knowing the shady things that you have to do. that could have been the opportunity to at least talk to his mother to see. for other options before agreeing to do something. that is clearly illegal. If we're going to actually bring in real life consequences of taking out loans. then go all the way use. bringing in real-life stuff into a visual model. When all I'm saying is to flesh out the story so it doesn't have big gaping holes. at the beginning when you're trying to get people invested in it. that could possibly bring in more revenue. Even if it's just a two page disclaimer when. you start a new game.
Dude woke up on the wrong side of bed. Tbh there are much worse VNs out there. Here whatever the story lacks in plots is definitely covered for in top notch renders and imo story is good and this VN is just one of a kind which caters to different kinks and fetishes, again this is a rare feature for a VN.
 

MAGO-DAG

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There's that girl that MC's dad knocked up.
A woman who just shows up somewhere 2-4 times? and then only to complain, good guess lol. :KEK:

If anyone wants to see some pregnancy content, there is a scene from Evelyn's past and Mc's father, as well as some hints in the pregnancy future.
 

Just Jericho

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A woman who just shows up somewhere 2-4 times? and then only to complain, good guess lol. :KEK:

If anyone wants to see some pregnancy content, there is a scene from Evelyn's past and Mc's father, as well as some hints in the pregnancy future.
It's Chekhov's Gun, man. Which states "Every girl in the scene must be fucked".

...Or something like that.
 
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useless-j

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Yo! I'm done with Grace's main story for v0.18 and decided that should do it (well, gonna make a couple more side events), so I better get ready with the next girl!

Jennifer 34%
Lina 25%
Fiona 41%
44 votes total · 25 days left



Yo! I'm done with Grace's main story for v0.18 and decided that should do it (well, gonna make a couple more side events), so I better get ready with the next girl!

Jennifer 34%
Lina 25%
Fiona 41%
44 votes total · 25 days left
Voted for Fiona. Hopefully she wins.
 

MrRick

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I'm at the part where it's telling me to find Evelyn's photographer because she won't talk to me. Where and when am I supposed to meet him?
 

MrTrue

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I'm at the part where it's telling me to find Evelyn's photographer because she won't talk to me. Where and when am I supposed to meet him?
Just pass time until the weekend or sleep on Friday night and it should auto trigger.
 
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