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From a technical side, I am still learning a lot so this project still serves its initial purpose.Totally understand. If this project is meant to be limited, and is 'getting in the way' of the big project, I would counsel sticking to your plan to get to the main effort.
My biggest gripe is off-screen action. In almost all events it takes away from the pace of the game, kind of like dream sequences. In this games' case, flashbacks are your best bet for the mom and teacher. Going forward, I hope your plan can be realized in real-time, so to speak. Also, some of your transitions are very abrupt from one scene to the next. Again, not a killer, just an observation.
Don't interpret my complaints as deal-killers. This is a very good game with a good story and great renders. I am very impressed that this is your first project, and as I said I will be supporting you shortly.
While I have come a long way in developing a 'process', I still have some fine tuning before I jump into a bigger project.