VN Ren'Py Abandoned Playing Favorites [v0.19] [clowns234]

[clowns234]

ok but when was there the choice to pick "Tim or Tom" ??? I have only seen two choices in the game. Tim picking Aunt or Cousin. Then Tom Picking Teacher or her Daughter. At least that is all I remember. The rest I have just been reading along

Did you start the game over? If not, then you will not have access to some of the paths.

And yes, there are more choices than the ones you mentioned, and they do affect which path you end up on. But there is no direct choice of 'Tom or Tim'. BTW, it's not necessarily one or the other.

 

[ropershy]

Just an FYI - If you are strictly Team Tim (which I assume you are), then you won't see everything.

Ok I"m just really confuses and starting to think where was some of the game skipped on this update that I downloaded. Tim is on his bed talking to his cousin about his situation. Cousin calls out to Tim's Mom cause she knows she is listening in. Then Lisa is in the Living room and Tom (asshole) tells her he is leaving for the Teachers house. And doesn't give a damn what Lisa has to say about it or anything else.

Next Lisa is waking Tim up and sliding on the the bed to talk to him but they end up making out and fucking right then. Then is skips to Lisa being in the Kitchen leaning on the counter like she is day dreaming ( makes me wonder if she wasn't day dreaming of her and Tim fucking) and Tom (asshole) walks in starts flirting and hitting on Mom like he cares about her. Regardless of how he behaved earlier in the Living room with her.

God I'm so confused

There seems to be a gap between Alice (the cousin) calling out Lisa for Listening and Lisa being in the Living Room. I mean why didn't Lisa just stay and talk it out right then? Instead she head to the Living room and has a bit of an argument (one sided) with Tom(asshole). Then there is a Huge gap between Lisa fucking Tim and her being in the Kitchen. We don't even know if Tim creampied her or pulled out and made her finish him in her mouth. Did they talk or did she realize what she was doing and throw him off and run out of the room? It just went from Mid stroke in to her leaning on the counter.

 

[clowns234]

This update depends a lot on the choice you make in the park.

 

[clowns234]

Then there is a Huge gap between Lisa fucking Tim and her being in the Kitchen. We don't even know if Tim creampied her or pulled out and made her finish him in her mouth. Did they talk or did she realize what she was doing and throw him off and run out of the room? It just went from Mid stroke in to her leaning on the counter.

If you picked the pro-Tim, anti-Tom route, the last line after sex should have been 'Oh Sweetie! That felt SO good.' The key word there is 'felt', as in past tense. Is that not what you got?
And if that is the path you chose, you are gonna miss other scenes.

 

[sharpys]

I feel this game would work much better if the main POV was focused on both or either sons in this interfamily rivalry. Like an antithesis of Summer Story but aggressive in it's pursuits and objectives.

Edit:
IT IS LIKE THE ANTI VERSION OF SUMMER STORY!

 

[clowns234]

I feel this game would work much better if the main POV was focused on both or either sons in this interfamily rivalry. Like an antithesis of Summer Story but aggressive in it's pursuits and objectives.

Edit:
IT IS LIKE THE ANTI VERSION OF SUMMER STORY!

I'm not familiar with that one, but I will check it out.

 

[no_name_742]

not a bad start, good way to learn. i look forward to seeing some group scene and maybe some mother/aunt daughter/niece stuff

 

[RishBish]

Is there an option to kick both of the asshole sons out of the house?

Tim is a very whiny little bitch. His dialogue makes me hear it in Cartman's voice. And then he goes runs off to his aunt because he went off in an autistic fit? Supposedly 18 but doesn't have a job or school and just sits in his room jacking off and fucking around on his computer? - not that this is necessarily a bad thing, because most everyone here probably does that - but Tim is acting like an entitled little shithead.

Meanwhile, Tom is a shitty asshole and seems to be a very pushy idiot who doesn't understand the concept of boundaries. I can't say much more about him because I didn't get very far into this thing. But he comes off as someone I personally would throw off a cliff with c4 strapped to his chest.

I wanted to go further into the story to see if it got better. I tried, I really really did. But both of those assholes need to get put in their place or kicked out on their ass. Let Mom do what most 40ish-something alcoholic moms do when their husband doesn't give them attention - bang the neighbors or any random dude that pays attention to them.

 

[CboyC95]

How much lesbian content is in this game?

 

[Morningstar 1695]

Android

 

[clowns234]

How much lesbian content is in this game?

It's just getting started but it will dominate one of the paths - depending on choices made. It will be very little for most of the other paths.

 

[clowns234]

Is there an option to kick both of the asshole sons out of the house?

Tim is a very whiny little bitch. His dialogue makes me hear it in Cartman's voice. And then he goes runs off to his aunt because he went off in an autistic fit? Supposedly 18 but doesn't have a job or school and just sits in his room jacking off and fucking around on his computer? - not that this is necessarily a bad thing, because most everyone here probably does that - but Tim is acting like an entitled little shithead.

Meanwhile, Tom is a shitty asshole and seems to be a very pushy idiot who doesn't understand the concept of boundaries. I can't say much more about him because I didn't get very far into this thing. But he comes off as someone I personally would throw off a cliff with c4 strapped to his chest.

I wanted to go further into the story to see if it got better. I tried, I really really did. But both of those assholes need to get put in their place or kicked out on their ass. Let Mom do what most 40ish-something alcoholic moms do when their husband doesn't give them attention - bang the neighbors or any random dude that pays attention to them.

Your take on the three main characters is more or less what I made them to be. For me, they have to be flawed to justify the main theme of the story. I realize this isn't everyone's 'cup of tea', but I do appreciate the feedback.

 

[CboyC95]

It's just getting started but it will dominate one of the paths - depending on choices made. It will be very little for most of the other paths.

Will we expect a lesbian path soon?

 

[WildDancer]

Which path is this scene on?

 

[clowns234]

Will we expect a lesbian path soon?

Depending on choices made, a path has started.

 

[clowns234]

Which path is this scene on?

Not quite there yet, but should be next update.

 

[Pick_A_Name]

Pretty good job, clowns234.

You got a long way to go on your journey, but this is a respectable start.
Stay positive. Ignore the negative comments, unless they're constructively critical.

You were honest at the outset, explaining you were new to this, and had planned to only do a simple two part game. Keep being honest with your audience and I'm sure you'll always find support of some kind, from more people than you might expect.

Good luck!

 

[steelmonkey76]

Is there an option to kick both of the asshole sons out of the house?

Tim is a very whiny little bitch. His dialogue makes me hear it in Cartman's voice. And then he goes runs off to his aunt because he went off in an autistic fit? Supposedly 18 but doesn't have a job or school and just sits in his room jacking off and fucking around on his computer? - not that this is necessarily a bad thing, because most everyone here probably does that - but Tim is acting like an entitled little shithead.

Meanwhile, Tom is a shitty asshole and seems to be a very pushy idiot who doesn't understand the concept of boundaries. I can't say much more about him because I didn't get very far into this thing. But he comes off as someone I personally would throw off a cliff with c4 strapped to his chest.

I wanted to go further into the story to see if it got better. I tried, I really really did. But both of those assholes need to get put in their place or kicked out on their ass. Let Mom do what most 40ish-something alcoholic moms do when their husband doesn't give them attention - bang the neighbors or any random dude that pays attention to them.

I just heard c4, cliff and Tom ummm yes, yes, yes and yes kill him then do the mum on the grave then piss on his grave and leave a dead flower.....

 

[joejr1]

I just heard c4, cliff and Tom ummm yes, yes, yes and yes kill him then do the mum on the grave then piss on his grave and leave a dead flower.....

I like the overkill!

 

[ropershy]

Your take on the three main characters is more or less what I made them to be. For me, they have to be flawed to justify the main theme of the story. I realize this isn't everyone's 'cup of tea', but I do appreciate the feedback.

Ok I played it again from the beginning. Seems the last choice and a few scenes before it didn't show up when I used my old save.

So there isn't really a clear cut choice between the two brothers. What I mean is there isn't a place in the game where Lisa ask herself which one Tim or Tom. I think that would have helped. Maybe a Tim or Tom or Both ( continue to play one against the other).

Too many Leaps and Gaps in the Story. Now saying that I hate games where it takes 7- 15 updates before the sexual parts with the main Milfs start to happen. But with that said there does need to be some sort of story. For example "Tim is going to sleep on the sofa" to Alice looking in Laura room and seeing Laura( yes I picked the aunt cause I prefer MILFS) riding Tim. How did that even happen? That needs some kind of build up. But instead it leaves us players with WTF????

Alice is talking to Tim in his room. Alice points out that Lisa is listening in. What happened? Lisa run away? Just seems to be a gap there. Next Lisa is in the living room and Tom comes in and just Tells her what he is going to do.

Something that doesn't make sense. We are given a choice to over hear or not the Teacher while she is on the phone. Why??? Here is the reason I ask. They hear the Teacher talking to Tom. Now that Teacher lives right next door to Lisa. So it doesn't that Sherlock Holmes to figure out it is Lisa's son Tom the Teacher is talking to. The Teacher is talking about her and Tom fucking the night before. Neither Lisa or Laura say anything about the Teacher fucking Tom. Then Lisa is back home talking to Tom and again she doesn't bring up about him fucking the Teacher. So why have that choice?

Other things that make no sense ( yes I realize this is just a game). Lisa has a big fight with Tim and claims she needs to fix things with him. So the first thing she does is run up to Tom and hugs on him like they are Lovers. WTF??? Alice just walking up to Lisa grabbing Lisa's tit and starts kissing her. It just seems anyone who wants to can just walk up grab Lisa's tits fill her up and kiss her. Lisa comes across as wishy washy SLUT who is easy and anyone who looks at her can fuck her if they want. There is not challenge at all to Lisa.

I know all this sounds like I hate your game and i'm being negative. I actually like it. I'm just confused on some of it. As I have said it just seems some of the story is missing. I get that the MC is Lisa. But she isn't a very likeable MC. Maybe I have played too many where the MC is more like Tom. Where he has to work to get the main love interest MILF to have sex with him. So far it seems Tim and Tom(maybe Tom's friends as well), plus Alice can have Lisa when ever they want. They just seem to be sharing her. So for Team Tim I would say the smart thing for Tim to do is pack up and move in with the Laura the Aunt. Then he wouldn't' have to share Lisa and he could probably have a 3 some nightly with Laura and Alice.

Where is the competition to be the favorite son? Lisa is allowing Tom to kiss her when ever he wants. Lisa is also kissing on Tim.