VN Ren'Py Abandoned Playing Hard to Get [v0.1] [SuaveGents]

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Overview:
Gabriel was an infant when he got abandoned in front of a church. He grew up there until one day, a well-off couple who are avid church members adopted him when he was 10. He loved his adopted parents. One day his adopted mother died and left his father in deep depression, but after 2 years he remarried to a single mother with 2 children. Gabriel's new mother hates him and after some talk with his father, he plans to live on his own.​

Thread Updated: 2019-08-28
Release Date: 2019-08-27
Developer: SuaveGents
Censored: No
Version: 0.1
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
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The forehead on this one....I'ma check it out.

EDIT: This was....strange. The grammar and spelling need obvious work from the first few lines on its own. There is an annoying pause after every sentence that forces you to click constantly to see the next line of dialogue. The renders are fine. Even above average at times, but it's okay. The characters are strange. I don't know if I'd personally come back to this one. I'll tune in again at some point, but right now, I'm not feeling it at all.
 
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LewdTheLolis

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Never cared for the spelling. I stopped caring after the first 1000 games I played with that problem. And dont forget it takes time away from the release of the next version to fix that.
Yeah but it is a needed fix, sure you might not care but you're also not the only one in the target audience. For many, myself included, many mistakes like those presented here can be a huge turn off and make it impossible for some people to truly enjoy the game.
 

Deleted member 54063

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Never cared for the spelling. I stopped caring after the first 1000 games I played with that problem. And dont forget it takes time away from the release of the next version to fix that.
That is the craziest thing I've ever heard.

You do know that there is a lot of down time while you're waiting for scenes to render!?! Time management is easy, fixing errors like that is easy, and increases the quality of the product, making us more likely to support it.

Suggesting not fixing is stupid from a development standpoint.
 

ProofreadingRUS

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That is the craziest thing I've ever heard.

You do know that there is a lot of down time while you're waiting for scenes to render!?! Time management is easy, fixing errors like that is easy, and increases the quality of the product, making us more likely to support it.

Suggesting not fixing is stupid from a development standpoint.
Then change your crazy glasses.
Cause you never had a friend like meeee.
 

SecretSal

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First thought - how come you have to click twice to get to the next dialog? This isn't helping my carpal tunnel.