VN Ren'Py Playing the Girlfriend [v0.1] [NoctaEterni]

[Xill]

With the facts that it's supposed to be a "slow burn" and "story-driven", I have high hope for this project to not turn into the classic of many others games being "MC is super smart, but she sees a big dick, now she is stupid and can't think for herself. Also, all of her morale and rationale are thrown out of the window." -> Cue all the stupid decisions for the sake of having her get fucked by multiple dudes.

Personally I am hoping that her "fall" makes sense. That she naturally starts liking and understanding Tyrone and why he acts this way. I'm really hoping that he isn't a complete asshole and that the whole game isn't just one giant blackmail fest.

Of course, it's a sex game so she there needs to be attraction too, not to the point like you say where she sees his big dick and loses her mind, but more like she sees his big dick and admits it looks good. Knows that it will feel good. And she ends up enjoying it a lot when they eventually do sexual stuff.

Unlike some entitled people in here though, I ain't gonna demand the game caters to my tastes if it doesn't go the way I hope. And I certainly ain't going to think that something is a "problem" as if it's some undeniable fact just because the dev chose to stick to his ideas.

So yeah, dev, please stick to your idea. There's a pretty big difference between feedback and suggestions, and literally demanding that game design and story is changed because someone doesn't like it.

 

[LoveWhores]

I think you misunderstood what I was trying to say or didn't take into account that I was replying to Acsuka. Because I do understand that the cheating is with her husband. Like, no shit. That's why I literally wrote "it doesn't seem to make sense to go toward cheating with someone else if she doesn't with "Tyrone" at first". Acuska was basically asking if there would be a route without "Tyrone" in it. And since he has no interest in BBC content, I tried to show a way where there could be with maybe the husband boss (if he is white). Also, with the way the story is right now, it seems impossible to skip "Tyrone" anyway.

For the rest of your comment, yeah obviously, those scenarios are a possibility if the dev wants to use them. The fake-cheating with a rival of "Tyrone" would still be her cheating on her husband, and that's fine. The only thing I really care about is if the story to make those possible scenarios happen is well done and somewhat believable. With the facts that it's supposed to be a "slow burn" and "story-driven", I have high hope for this project to not turn into the classic of many others games being "MC is super smart, but she sees a big dick, now she is stupid and can't think for herself. Also, all of her morale and rationale are thrown out of the window." -> Cue all the stupid decisions for the sake of having her get fucked by multiple dudes.

In other words,you did mean to show that if the main bad guy wasn't a black dude it will most likely be something like "Fresh Story(formerly known as Kate)"? Well,yeah i guess in that case it did was a misunderstanding. But like i say it in my previous comment to Acuska,i did explain it that it's pretty obvious that would be a interracial porn game where the whole point is the girl to date and fuck with black guy(or black guys) and that there's no chance the developer will add another one as optional to choose and play instead Tyron just because Acuska don't like interracial.

Yeah,i also think that this one it has chance to become one of the best interracial porn games. May be after start spending time with Tyrone and pretending to be his girlfriend Amber will have the options to try some weed or even some other drugs as cocke,amphetamins or extasy while going to party with Tyrone and his gang - after all it was revealed that he was seen smoke and sell weed and that he is acting like some kind of thug And may be after trying some drugs she will start to act more carelessly and dumb which will make it even more easier for her to become a huge slut/whore

 

[LoveWhores]

Personally I am hoping that her "fall" makes sense. That she naturally starts liking and understanding Tyrone and why he acts this way. I'm really hoping that he isn't a complete asshole and that the whole game isn't just one giant blackmail fest.

Of course, it's a sex game so she there needs to be attraction too, not to the point like you say where she sees his big dick and loses her mind, but more like she sees his big dick and admits it looks good. Knows that it will feel good. And she ends up enjoying it a lot when they eventually do sexual stuff.

Unlike some entitled people in here though, I ain't gonna demand the game caters to my tastes if it doesn't go the way I hope. And I certainly ain't going to think that something is a "problem" as if it's some undeniable fact just because the dev chose to stick to his ideas.

So yeah, dev, please stick to your idea. There's a pretty big difference between feedback and suggestions, and literally demanding that game design and story is changed because someone doesn't like it.

It can be both way too,you know? Just becase Tyron may be a complete asshole as you say it doesn't mean she may not admite that his big black cock it looks good when she see it and that she thinks it will feel really good. Actually most girls when they see a big cock especially if it's big black cock immediatelly start thinking how woould it be to feel it inside and how good the sex with them would be,no matter if they did hear about it or did watch some porn like that. And when she feel it inside then she may happen to lose her mind(especially if she did some drugs before that with him) because of the huge pleasure it gives her and how good it does feel - and of course Tyron as a complete asshole may try to take advantage of that in different ways: trying to make her wear more slutty clothes,sending him nude pictures at any time he wants,letting him film her while he fucks her,may be even make her do a Queen of Spades tattoo on one of her ass hips and other stuff like that...and if you are at the cuck route instead the cheating may be even asks her to send her husband photos and videos of how he fucks her and how she does admite he is much better then her pathetic husband(making sure to humiliate her husband) although this may happen even in the cheating route if at some point in the cheating route you have the option to keep going with cheating or turn the cheating(cuckolding) to a cucking if she does agree to send such pictures and videos to her husband or doesn't agree to do it

 

[peperonni31]

I really liked the plot let's see where this goes

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

The cheating is suppose to be cheating on her husband. She is married and unless she divorce she can't really cheat on anyone else except the one whose she is in relationship - in that case her husband. Now,since she will be pretending to be Tyron's girlfriend some of his buddys(friends) or rivals(for example from another gang)can try to make her cheat on him with them and since she is pretending to be his girlfriend that may be considered cheating although it's false cheating since she is not really his girlfriend(at least at first - may be later in the game if you did choose the cheating route she may happen to turn the fake relationship with Tyrone to a real one while her husband does not suspect anything,but will see if that happens)

And if Tyrone knocks her up, it might look like this at the hospital

 

[Dessolos]

Just played this Not sure if this is only gonna be NTR / Cheating or have NTS / sharing as well. While nothing amazing and it's still too early to judge I do like what I see even tho im not a fan of BBC unless said BBC character ends up being an okay / decent guy. While im more a fan of Sharing / NTS and not really of NTR / cheating i'll probably play this either way cause it does look like a fun game and the model is hot even if it ends up only being NTR / Cheating.

Tho I will say I already hate Brenda. I didn't like how she basically said the FMC was racist if she said no cause she doesn't like the idea cause of her being married and all that. Honestly if it was me I probably would of said no on the spot after she made a remark like that and drop her as a friend over it.

 

[el diablo rojo]

This game has potential. I like the whole premise and FMC is attractive. I can see where the Dev is going with this and giving the player the choice to tell the truth or not on the sofa looks like it could have big ramifications later in the story. Obviously, Tyrone is going to take advantage of the situation and end up having sex with the MC. The question is will his "homeboys" get to play too after Tyrone "claims his prize". I hope so.

My only concern going forward is that this game will just become another "Patreon money grab" and not have the MC cheat until somewhere around chapters 8-10. This first episode was pretty short so even if this Dev posts an update every 2 months we could be potentially waiting for more than a year for any action and ain't nobody got time for that. My message to the Dev is this - don't draw this out. It's understandable as we all want to make money but start thinking about your next game. Don't delay, delay, delay and just rake in money. Make a quality game and deliver the action in a reasonable amount of time. Patreons will appreciate it and look forward to your future offerings if your product turns out to be any good and you will make money after having earned the trust of the community. Good luck.

 

[LoveWhores]

And if Tyrone knocks her up, it might look like this at the hospital
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And it would also be really good if it happens that he knocks her up this would not be one of the endings but instead something that happens in the process while playing the game. It would be amazing at some point her husband to find and see she is pregnant and of course if you play cheating then she to lie to him that is from him only later to to either he see is a black(may be as a choice to turn the cheating to a cucking) or either she to lie to her husband that she did lost the baby(of course that's more brutal but it doesn't mean there are not girls that do that kind of lie) and asks Brenda or some other friend to take care of the baby while she is busy,with her husband or with Tyrone... Or if you play the cucking route from the beginning then may be it will happen that her husband get excited of the idea she to give a birth to a black baby since he will already be a cuck who enjoys watching her been fucked by BBC Most games happen to have "knocking up" as one of the endings and it would be cool to have one where the game doesn't end if she gets pregnant but instead keep the story going,you know what i mean?

 

[Xill]

It can be both way too,you know? Just becase Tyron may be a complete asshole as you say it doesn't mean she may not admite that his big black cock it looks good when she see it and that she thinks it will feel really good. Actually most girls when they see a big cock especially if it's big black cock immediatelly start thinking how woould it be to feel it inside and how good the sex with them would be,no matter if they did hear about it or did watch some porn like that. And when she feel it inside then she may happen to lose her mind(especially if she did some drugs before that with him) because of the huge pleasure it gives her and how good it does feel - and of course Tyron as a complete asshole may try to take advantage of that in different ways: trying to make her wear more slutty clothes,sending him nude pictures at any time he wants,letting him film her while he fucks her,may be even make her do a Queen of Spades tattoo on one of her ass hips and other stuff like that...and if you are at the cuck route instead the cheating may be even asks her to send her husband photos and videos of how he fucks her and how she does admite he is much better then her pathetic husband(making sure to humiliate her husband) although this may happen even in the cheating route if at some point in the cheating route you have the option to keep going with cheating or turn the cheating(cuckolding) to a cucking if she does agree to send such pictures and videos to her husband or doesn't agree to do it

I know, I'm just saying that I personally won't get invested that much if it goes that route. I prefer having a more smart/strong female protagonist. It is what it is though. I'd rather the dev make the game he/she wants at the end of the day.

 

[StrongEpsilon]

The main idea looks like "pineapple". I'm pretty sure she'll like it.

 

[NoctaEterni]

So you'll be able to choose to tell him about boundaries getting crossed each time it happens? I like the choice of honesty though, more NTR games need that.

Honestly, I’m not sure at the moment. I was thinking more about the husband’s general awareness of the affair (when chosen such option) rather than choosing if the wife give daily report about what she had done that day, but I’m not ruling anything out.

A lot depends on how complicated all of this will be, because I suspect it would quickly become problematic. With every disclosure of a boundary being crossed, It would require path providing context that a boundary had already been crossed previously, in case the previous violations of boundary hadn’t been disclosed. I think it would be too complicated.

But this is my first game, so maybe I’ll come up with something before it gets to that.

It's ok to compare it to Pineapple Express but the fact people are saying it's copying it, is the same exact argument I hear every single time there's a black lover in a game. Meanwhile there's dozen harem games with exactly the same premise yet no one complains.

I don’t understand this either, especially from the perspective of people who supposedly liked the story of a given game, which has already been completed.

 

[NoctaEterni]

NoctaEterni Wanted to ask another thing here don't you think Amber's Hip to waist ratio is kinda of unrealistic ? slightly out of proportion and looks exaggerated for a fit Caucasian women ? would you be willing to tone it down a little in upcoming updates if enough ppl agree ? Btw everything other than that is perfect about her

I’m not sure, maybe a little. In general, you have to take into account that we have exceptionally favorable lighting here, and the model is standing with legs slightly apart, which accentuates the impression of wide hips.

Of course, the choice of wide hips was intentional… it was motivated by the desire for them to have a relatively nicely rounded shape, because with narrower hips the upper part would form an unattractively slightly flattened surface… maybe I was doing something wrong, I don’t know xD

Changing shape now could be problematic, and I’m not sure I’d achieve a shape that would satisfy me, without that weird slightly flattening of the hips.

 

[NoctaEterni]

So is this gonna be Amber cheating with Tyrone story or can we expect other dudes/rivals?

Unlikely, this game is more of a romance. I don’t want Amber, after a few updates, to go from a faithful wife to a slut who sleeps with anyone after five minutes of knowing them… That’s why I intend to end this game before it jumps the shark, rather than dragging it on indefinitely, and start another one where I can use the things I learn while creating this one.

At least I intend to, but we’ll see how it turns out hehe

 

[Ragnar]

Unlikely, this game is more of a romance. I don’t want Amber, after a few updates, to go from a faithful wife to a slut who sleeps with anyone after five minutes of knowing them… That’s why I intend to end this game before it jumps the shark, rather than dragging it on indefinitely, and start another one where I can use the things I learn while creating this one.

At least I intend to, but we’ll see how it turns out hehe

Thanks for the answer. I'm not into Blacked porn, but I'm sure you will find a market for it.

 

[NoctaEterni]

First of all, thank you for your response. Yes, there was indeed a choice, and I told my husband everything, because that is the right choice in an honest relationship. I'll be honest, and going back to my previous comment, my question was not a coincidence. I have zero interest in BBC content, so if I say no to this stupid idea, is there a guarantee that I will never have to see Brenda's son? I don't even want the guy in the friend zone, so do you have an alternative version of the wife having an intimate relationship with another character? I'm not interested in crossing the line with this guy... I'm interested in never having to meet him. And yes, I may lose a lot of content that you mention, but that's only because you're building your game around one fetish... So if your story is only about Tyrone, that's a problem, give the woman more freedom to explore herself and her desires with other men (Swedish lumberjack, Italian mobster, Japanese yakuza, blah, blah, blah) Let me give you an example: .An ice cream vendor doesn't only have chocolate flavor, every person likes different flavor, but if you specialize in just one flavor, the connoisseurs will look for another ice cream vendor.
Finally: The game is yours, and it's up to you how creative you are and what possibilities are hidden within you...

Okay, now I understand—the game is about helping Brenda, so if you choose to refuse to help her in the second update, the game for that path pretty much end, outside maybe some scenes with husband... so you can save yourself the time of playing the update.

Of course, I understand your dissatisfaction with the direction the game, but adding extra characters creates complications and would overly expand the game, because it’s meant to be more of a romance rather than the wife starting to sleep around… So adding extra characters wouldn’t create a satisfying experience for players who reject the main premise of the game. And it wouldn’t add anything for players following one of the main paths either.

 

[NoctaEterni]

Hi man keep the NTR story grounded and realistic as possible no need to rush anything set up things properly for good payoff don't rush anything aim for a realistic story and screenplay experience and change the Bull's name if you can the name Tyrone is too stereotypical also don't add unnecessary secondary characters

Yes, I know it’s a bit stereotypical, but he’s also a slightly stereotypical character… and personally, I like the name; I think it adds a subtle humorous touch without being over the top, like some others stereotypical names.

But I’ll consider options for users to change names, as long as it’s not too complicated technically; I’ll be looking into that.

 

[Xill]

A lot depends on how complicated all of this will be, because I suspect it would quickly become problematic. With every disclosure of a boundary being crossed, It would require path providing context that a boundary had already been crossed previously, in case the previous violations of boundary hadn’t been disclosed. I think it would be too complicated.

Yeah that's fair. Him knowing in general that they are moving forward with intimacy is more than enough really, especially for your first project.

I’m not sure, maybe a little. In general, you have to take into account that we have exceptionally favorable lighting here, and the model is standing with legs slightly apart, which accentuates the impression of wide hips.

Of course, the choice of wide hips was intentional… it was motivated by the desire for them to have a relatively nicely rounded shape, because with narrower hips the upper part would form an unattractively slightly flattened surface… maybe I was doing something wrong, I don’t know xD

Changing shape now could be problematic, and I’m not sure I’d achieve a shape that would satisfy me, without that weird slightly flattening of the hips.

I think she looks perfect. If - and that's a big IF - something needs changing, it's probably the waist. Because I think that's what's creating the "unrealistic" look, the waist to hip ratio. But reducing the hips after we've seen her now would be a bit disappointing, imo.

 

[wolfling11]

Yes, I know it’s a bit stereotypical, but he’s also a slightly stereotypical character… and personally, I like the name; I think it adds a subtle humorous touch without being over the top, like some others stereotypical names.

But I’ll consider options for users to change names, as long as it’s not too complicated technically; I’ll be looking into that.

Hey man what direction are you planning to take on in terms of story and screenplay ? will it be realistic and grounded or Generic BBC porn genre cliche type story which way you plan to take the story forward man ?

 

[LoveWhores]

Unlikely, this game is more of a romance. I don’t want Amber, after a few updates, to go from a faithful wife to a slut who sleeps with anyone after five minutes of knowing them… That’s why I intend to end this game before it jumps the shark, rather than dragging it on indefinitely, and start another one where I can use the things I learn while creating this one.

At least I intend to, but we’ll see how it turns out hehe

A romance with her husband or a romance with Tyrone? Although i'm not sure that if the player did choose to play the cheating route instead the cuck route it can really be a romance since she will be doing stuff behind her husband back which less or more it would make her kind of a slut

 

[wolfling11]

Unlikely, this game is more of a romance. I don’t want Amber, after a few updates, to go from a faithful wife to a slut who sleeps with anyone after five minutes of knowing them… That’s why I intend to end this game before it jumps the shark, rather than dragging it on indefinitely, and start another one where I can use the things I learn while creating this one.

At least I intend to, but we’ll see how it turns out hehe

So is it a slow corruption game ?