VN Ren'Py Playing the Girlfriend [v0.1] [NoctaEterni]

[wolfling11]

Unlikely, this game is more of a romance. I don’t want Amber, after a few updates, to go from a faithful wife to a slut who sleeps with anyone after five minutes of knowing them… That’s why I intend to end this game before it jumps the shark, rather than dragging it on indefinitely, and start another one where I can use the things I learn while creating this one.

At least I intend to, but we’ll see how it turns out hehe

So is it a slow corruption game ?

 

[wolfling11]

if yes then great

 

[NoctaEterni]

Yeah that's fair. Him knowing in general that they are moving forward with intimacy is more than enough really, especially for your first project.

A middle ground could be a few turning points in the story to reveal the truth, but not at the end of every 'date', because i think that would require a large amount of 'extra' dialogue, and worse, renders. Especially since most people will probably choose path to reveal the truth immediately, or to not reveal it at all. But we’ll see.

 

[wolfling11]

A middle ground could be a few turning points in the story to reveal the truth, but not at the end of every 'date', because i think that would require a large amount of 'extra' dialogue, and worse, renders. Especially since most people will probably choose path to reveal the truth immediately, or to not reveal it at all. But we’ll see.

Man what about my questions

 

[ramgird]

Man what about my questions

I'm pretty sure from all that has been said, that it is supposed to be a slow-burn. So, it should also be more aligned with being a slow corruption game.

Unlikely, this game is more of a romance. I don’t want Amber, after a few updates, to go from a faithful wife to a slut who sleeps with anyone after five minutes of knowing them… That’s why I intend to end this game before it jumps the shark, rather than dragging it on indefinitely, and start another one where I can use the things I learn while creating this one.

At least I intend to, but we’ll see how it turns out hehe

Considering that reply, it's what I'd expect. Also, I'm glad the focus is more on romance instead of debauchery.

 

[Kapps]

I think this can be a Great Game ! Love The Start.

 

[MaxMarsh0012]

is this ntr or vanilla? Lesbian interracial? Can't grasp much from the pictures

 

[TonyMurray]

is this ntr or vanilla? Lesbian interracial? Can't grasp much from the pictures

It's interracial NTR/NTS. White woman agrees to pretend to be a younger black guy's girlfriend, and it sounds like romance will then develop between them while her husband either knows the whole situation or thinks that she's just helping with mentoring or something.

 

[Pdr602]

I was interested until you went the black kid route. Let me guess. "Tyrone" will have a 12 inch cock putting the white husband to shame, right? Real original. Good luck with it though. There's definitely an audience. Just not my cup of tea.

 

[Dessolos]

I was interested until you went the black kid route. Let me guess. "Tyrone" will have a 12 inch cock putting the white husband to shame, right? Real original. Good luck with it though. There's definitely an audience. Just not my cup of tea.

funny thing is the guys name actually is Tyrone

 

[Pdr602]

funny thing is the guys name actually is Tyrone

I know. Zero points for originality on the name selection.

 

[el diablo rojo]

I know. Zero points for originality on the name selection.

You guys are funny. Everything has been used at this point so eventually themes and tropes are going to surface again, get over it.

 

[Pdr602]

You guys are funny. Everything has been used at this point so eventually themes and tropes are going to surface again, get over it.

Shoot. Forgot to check with you before sharing my opinion. Sorry about that chief.

Btw..there's really nothing to "get over" because no one is upset.

 

[wolfling11]

funny thing is the guys name actually is Tyrone

well it could've been even more worse lol, This is from a abandoned VN

 

[Gato negro]

its funny how this game has similar context same as pineapple express. Keep the updates monthly and you shall rise.

 

[RacistSanta]

And it would also be really good if it happens that he knocks her up this would not be one of the endings but instead something that happens in the process while playing the game. It would be amazing at some point her husband to find and see she is pregnant and of course if you play cheating then she to lie to him that is from him only later to to either he see is a black(may be as a choice to turn the cheating to a cucking) or either she to lie to her husband that she did lost the baby(of course that's more brutal but it doesn't mean there are not girls that do that kind of lie) and asks Brenda or some other friend to take care of the baby while she is busy,with her husband or with Tyrone... Or if you play the cucking route from the beginning then may be it will happen that her husband get excited of the idea she to give a birth to a black baby since he will already be a cuck who enjoys watching her been fucked by BBC Most games happen to have "knocking up" as one of the endings and it would be cool to have one where the game doesn't end if she gets pregnant but instead keep the story going,you know what i mean?

This tbh

 

[MaxMarsh0012]

too much discussion on this thread. The dev is a newbie. I won't be surprised if this game ends up abandoned after 2-3 months

 

[Xill]

too much discussion on this thread. The dev is a newbie. I won't be surprised if this game ends up abandoned after 2-3 months

Why? Because of too much feedback? Dev just needs to stick to what they want to do. The fact there seems to be just one LI should be easier than those games with multiple ones. Pretty good for a first game.

 

[Dessolos]

too much discussion on this thread. The dev is a newbie.

discussion is a good thing

 

[Andeee86]

someday, maybe in a year, when there is some concrete content, it might be a good game AND (since she's a blonde, you could give her blonde PUBIC HAIR)