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This has potential but I don't think the Nightly Ritual and this novel should be separate.
Think this novel would be best served to have both boys as the protagonist you follow, you follow one until he crosses paths with the other, and then you switch.
So you follow the son through the story until a Yoga event, the son goes out and you stay with the powers boy until the son comes home.
or
You stay with the powers boy after the yoga event, then stay with the powers boy until he returns to their house for the next yoga event, and then switch back to the son then.
Just an idea I'm throwing out there, as I said, this novel has potential.
This post would've been so much better if I could've remembered either of the boys names lol
Think this novel would be best served to have both boys as the protagonist you follow, you follow one until he crosses paths with the other, and then you switch.
So you follow the son through the story until a Yoga event, the son goes out and you stay with the powers boy until the son comes home.
or
You stay with the powers boy after the yoga event, then stay with the powers boy until he returns to their house for the next yoga event, and then switch back to the son then.
Just an idea I'm throwing out there, as I said, this novel has potential.
This post would've been so much better if I could've remembered either of the boys names lol