I have half a mind that Drew is gonna have a redemtion arc... I've seen too few things to think Drew can change for the better (final scene on chapter 12 wasn't too shabby gotta admit) and I insist that there is too little time to delve to deep into Drew, David, Kira, Nora, Annabelle, or Young Hunter (if dude isn't a red hearing) that are all characters that are very important to the plot but haven't have much time to be explored.
Drew could have a great redemtion arc (if at the end of the day there is even one) if there was enough time for one.
Calling it now, Drew was originally born with nothing like Horsedick.npg from the movie Miss March.
Aliza is raising the heavyset guy as her son but they're brother/sister.
Is Amber in the same clan as Kumiko and Tiffany? More realistic competition for Brenna!
Brenna is gonna be strictly work partner / forever fuck buddies but never married bc that would mess up the friendship.
Catherine..... she's there. Would like to see her like 2-5" taller and like 5-15% thicker with about 5% less freckles, just to make her look like a realass adult yknahmean?
Eva is the forever first so she can get shoehorned in wherever bc the way things have gone so far it seems that she's okay with both steady relationship or nsa fuckbuddies.
Hotel chick? Ayo sometimes hotel chicks happen. I can testify to this fact lol. One and done never to be seen again.
Idk who tf Keira is in the story. She came after I learned about unren ultrahack. Looks like more competition to Brenna!
Lucia is the childhood exchange summer friend typa origin. Aught to be endgame goal or a forever fuckbuddy.
Mallory is the real twist. She's the egg donor to Ophelia! Maybe?
Nora looks hot!
Nurse is a solid touch. Could be a hair wider in the buttocks and/or hips bc from the POV shots her ass looks 'too tall'.
Ophelia will either become freeuse or hands~off.
Rebecca looks like a random addition of more of Brenna's friends. Neat. Thx.
Tiffany appears to be the first earnest look at a LI bc Eva was all about lust. She did the things with the words that Sterling never heard and he falls down the rabbit hole.
My two cents.
/ end rant lol