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Fate whispers to the warrior...

It's Elsa's turn to be assessed. How will she fare?

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Can a character and her organization be redeemable after these comments in that situation?
LMAO telling someone that their parent/ex-wife dying was for the greater good.
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Can a character and her organization be redeemable after these comments in that situation?
LMAO telling someone that their parent/ex-wife dying was for the greater good.
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She knew that she was going to die and she accepted it, making things going as fate wanted and keeping the secret until the last moment when she confessed it to her husband and daughter. Lance actions were cold, but not forced. A bit of anger is understandable but with time it can be overcome
 

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making things going as fate wanted
Interesting way to describe it as fate when it was clearly shaped and enforced by lance's organization.
This story feels like a take on Hot Fuzz but they forgot that "the Greater good" guys were the bad guys.

With the revelation that gloria is a Brainwasher, the eagerness with which the ex-wife dies starts to make sense.
On a bigger tangent maybe even her cheating was the result of Gloria's timely intervention.
 
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Fate whispers to the warrior...

It's Elsa's turn to be assessed. How will she fare?

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ok so there is something that is really pissing me off a lot aout this story... so far you have skipped a few places that shouldnt have been skipped there to many gaps in the story that are missing. first one is the part with ex wife in the kitchen after the scene its like everything after that was skipped ...wtf for ? second part is the part in the bar when everyone started getting sad and then FC passed out the guy says take them and leave..... skipped two fucking days worth... wtf for ? i dont know about you but the quotes you keep adding are not being applied someone attacks his family and he jsut leaves because hes told to ? the cryptics answers are absolutely fucking dumb. the guy cant get effected by other peoples powers he should have walked straight to that blonde bitch asked asked her what she did to his family not walk away like some beta bitch.id highly reccomend fixing those GAPS so they have a finishing point that actually makes sense so that the narritive is so blank. give options for something the MC can actually fucking do than twiddle his thumbs and stick his dick in women.
so far the MC is literally wanna wise man with zero fucking balls to do anything PROTECTIVE.you absolutely cannot call this a novel if theres GAPS with no explanation.
 
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you must have a gap play issue these missing gaps need to be fixed so that it actually becomes a good VN plus you keep makeing character appear out of thin air like time travelers that just happen to catch either the MC or one of the FL off guard despite her/her vigulance. ill continue to comment on each one cause there should always be a choice no lets make two days dissapear and magically everyones fucked create small story and then another gap for 2 days agian.............
 

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your short story book.
you have to many gaps with missing content. the narritive is rushed almost forced no really decent choices or options. you need to make the gaps filled with content this feels way to rushed. one minute your captured next your exscapeing with a gap right in the center then fighting that has very little meaning, then another huge gap. sigh this story needs to been completely reworked.
 

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your short story book.
you have to many gaps with missing content. the narritive is rushed almost forced no really decent choices or options. you need to make the gaps filled with content this feels way to rushed. one minute your captured next your exscapeing with a gap right in the center then fighting that has very little meaning, then another huge gap. sigh this story needs to been completely reworked.
You say it is rushed and it has gaps i agree but it has another major problem the updates are few and small i remember an update waiting 6 months and the playtime? a joke 5min, if the dev works on this alone or is not profitable then we can't expect anything or demand anything but as things hoes i foresee that this vn will end up either abandoned or with a rush ending...
 
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your short story book.
you have to many gaps with missing content. the narritive is rushed almost forced no really decent choices or options. you need to make the gaps filled with content this feels way to rushed. one minute your captured next your exscapeing with a gap right in the center then fighting that has very little meaning, then another huge gap. sigh this story needs to been completely reworked.
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I don't think it's a lack of choices, but that the choices given amount to nothing. An illusion of a branching narrative hiding a straight path narrative. Don't get me wrong still an engaging story with good humor and a ton of references, but choice... nah?
 
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Bruh, legit what gets me annoyed is this developer's style of writing banter and not just in this title but across all of his titles. <Insert some lame ass quote> legit he needs to stop using the slang so I don't feel like I'm losing IQ points reading this drivel. He's got some interesting story ideas, but when I have to read basically street slang in the dialogues it makes me think of some punk on a street corner with his pants hanging around with ankles to show off his drawers. It's distracting from the characters in the story.
 

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Ok....the good and the bad.

The good. Overall I like the game. I like the LI's. Valerie though was annoying as fuck for about 15 chapters. I mean like seriously annoying. I'm glad she's finally growing as a character. I really like their powers. I like how they play off each other. I also hate to admit it, but I find some of the cheesy ass humor funny. I mean all the meme and internet shitty references is kind of funny to me. I can see it not being some peoples cup of tea, but I find it humorous and it flows well. I really, really love Elsa and Tilly is a close runner up. All 3 of the main LI's at this point though are very well fleshed out at this point in the story.

The bad....The story is taking FOREVER. I feel like we're going on this globe trotting vacation so this creator can show us family vacation photo's or something. I mean we really don't need this damn history lesson do we? It's like 8 chapters of history lessons and it's just dragging on and on and on.

Another thing. So either the creator speaks a shit ton of languages and wants to show off, or he has some fetish for them and loves to type them out. I mean there has to be only a hand full of people who can speak all of them he uses in this game. So this means you have to click the damn blue text to figure out what is said. This is worse than a sandbox game. I'm so sick and tired of not being able to sit back and just enjoy the dialog of this game. I have to click in the box and click again, then click in and click again and rinse and repeat. Don't get me started when they meet the people in Italy have an entire damn conversation in multiple languages. Would it have been so damn hard to just say [Spanish] or [Russian] and type it out in English? We would understand this would then have been in that language. Instead I get a ton of shit I have no clue what it is. I then convert it to English. I mean you could literally put in anything and I'd have zero clue until I click the blue text. It makes no sense to add these unnecessary clicks just so I can understand what is being said so I can enjoy the game. Very, very frustrating and breaks the flow so hard. Makes auto play impossible.
 
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Powers That Be - Chapter 25 "Training" Full Chapter (God Tier & Patreon Tier 4)





You won’t truly know someone until you fight them


Our fascinating family's trip to the Roman Gladiator School leads them into coming face to face with some unexpected challenges. They'll find out more about their instructors, as well as themselves. A whole lot more.


We're proud to release our biggest PTB update yet:
  • Official BOG Walkthrough Mode has been implemented
  • 200+ new Animations added throughout the game
  • Fully Voiced dialogues for Tilly, Valerie, Elsa, Gloria in Chapter 25
  • New Intro Video
  • Please check the Patreon release post for more info
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