Valeries dialogue before the sex scene make it sound like she fucked every guy in her highschool lol. "Every boy I've been with...", "I broke up with all those boys for you." That's just "too much information" stuff, she feels too young for a big bodycount.

I don't care about virgin stuff but it would be better to not write about anything other than her last bf.
Still she is the best girl so far. Sex scene was nice but I kinda wanted mc to fuck her while she was stuck there. Her ass looked so good sticking out of the washer like that.

Maybe now that they have an established sexual relationship she can get "stuck" there one more time? And this time they will fuck before pulling her out. That would be hot.