Great Story ... had me hooked ... the characters are already well developed ... looking forward to more
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I finally caught up with the story. I had skipped the last couple of updates so it had been a few months since I last followed our hero's adventures. Jesus, the end to that duel felt so damn good 
And we are making some progress on the sexy side too! Imagine that: our MC will have to share his seed with half of humankind to ensure its survival. I'm sure each and all of us thought that's where this is going
Nah, that won't happen, but it would be a really nice (and wholesome) plot twist.
Now some constructive criticism.
There have just been a few lewd scenes so far, so dev if you'll accept some advice, moving forward please pay more attention to their quality. There's still a lot of game ahead of us so you'll have many chances to make them better.
In my opinion, a dev should never rely exclusively on animations for his/her sex scenes, not even if ther animations are the best. In your case they're more than decent but still not the best I'm afraid. That's ok, they will improve over time. But what I mean is that those naughty moments with Maria felt pretty empty and boring when there was nothing but just one or two looped animations from the same angle all the time. You should insert sexy still renders, show us Maria getting rid of her clothes (that's basic for me), show us Maria from the side, from behind, from above, etc... Let us see her face change its expression, etc. Still renders make a sexual scene much richer and interesting even if animations are top quality.
And we are making some progress on the sexy side too! Imagine that: our MC will have to share his seed with half of humankind to ensure its survival. I'm sure each and all of us thought that's where this is going
Nah, that won't happen, but it would be a really nice (and wholesome) plot twist.
Now some constructive criticism.
There have just been a few lewd scenes so far, so dev if you'll accept some advice, moving forward please pay more attention to their quality. There's still a lot of game ahead of us so you'll have many chances to make them better.
In my opinion, a dev should never rely exclusively on animations for his/her sex scenes, not even if ther animations are the best. In your case they're more than decent but still not the best I'm afraid. That's ok, they will improve over time. But what I mean is that those naughty moments with Maria felt pretty empty and boring when there was nothing but just one or two looped animations from the same angle all the time. You should insert sexy still renders, show us Maria getting rid of her clothes (that's basic for me), show us Maria from the side, from behind, from above, etc... Let us see her face change its expression, etc. Still renders make a sexual scene much richer and interesting even if animations are top quality.
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Man this plot is literally too good!! We are going to Slay those bacteria and make them pregnant, wait can mc make Emily preg?
DEV loved this story fantastic renders Now it's my some best games list . Can't wait for new chapters and those writings of romance with maria, Wow!! Anyway dev loved it. Good luck❤
DEV loved this story fantastic renders Now it's my some best games list . Can't wait for new chapters and those writings of romance with maria, Wow!! Anyway dev loved it. Good luck❤
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Lol you are sounding like those worst tv shows show from above i guess dev you can make it happen i certainly don't mind or you can make mc remove Maria's clothes it's a romantic game bro like fully romance you can kiss her then remove her clothes play with her boobies, haha sorry sorry boobs!
Man that will be certainly worth watching , no ? Either way this is good❤ no complaints from me.
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ReLOL.
Let me rewrite that as "show us the sex scene from different angles, at different points."
As for the rest of your post, that's also what I meant. In the last scene they had to be quick because Emilia would be back any second so they couldn't take their time to kiss, etc. but that shouldn't have prevented us from seeing her taking off her clothes. That's one of the most erotic things for us; we men are very visual. Otherwise strip clubs wouldn't exist.
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I felt a sudden urge to praise our sweet Emilia.
She is pretty, she is sensitive, she is humble, she is understanding, she is clever, ...
And to top it all off she can cook the best-looking chicken tikka masala w/ rice and lentil dhal that I've ever seen!
Jesus christ, I can almost smell it!
She is pretty, she is sensitive, she is humble, she is understanding, she is clever, ...
And to top it all off she can cook the best-looking chicken tikka masala w/ rice and lentil dhal that I've ever seen!
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Emilia is indeed very sweet! She's got a lot more going on than just that, though. You'll see.I felt a sudden urge to praise our sweet Emilia.
She is pretty, she is sensitive, she is humble, she is understanding, she is clever, ...
And to top it all off she can cook the best-looking chicken tikka masala w/ rice and lentil dhal that I've ever seen!
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That's actually pea soup, not daal, and I don't remember what food asset the meat dish is... I'm pretty sure I checked to make sure it was reasonably period-accurate, but I could have made a mistake.
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Ok, ok... I concede it's pea dhal thenEmilia is indeed very sweet! She's got a lot more going on than just that, though. You'll see.
That's actually pea soup, not daal, and I don't remember what food asset the meat dish is... I'm pretty sure I checked to make sure it was reasonably period-accurate, but I could have made a mistake.
But I won't be fooled into believing that's not chicken tikka masala with basmati. My mind is set on that, all visual evidence points in that direction, and it would fit with Emilia's awesome resourcefulness.
It's dinner time here, let's see what I have in the fridge
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Maria makes the MC happy a couple of times but no penetration yet.
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I have question about the uncle maria does he dies automatic when get the box or there other options I could of choose?
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Only Blowjob is done so far. Thigh job, Boob job, Ass Job, foot job, pussy grinding, forearm job, Armpit job and then you'll get Pussy Job. Take a guess
.Don't worry though because the lewdest job that is hand holding job is done already.
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Oh man I really love your hardwork, I'm sorry I can't support you with money for now,but when I have a job and have salaries I promise I will donate you,you really deserve that
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Thank you! Glad you're enjoying the game! Feel free to leave a review if you can - they help a lot.
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Hey! I really love this game, I've commented about it a few times on this thread.
I've reached the part where we receive the letter challenging us to a duel and we start talking about it. Gotta say, the ammount of asspulls in the narrative is really weird, almost like there was an internal debate within the dev to have the duel at all (i know they read the thread, this isnt a diss I love your game!)
"There haven't been duels in a century", "the last one was over a 20 year thing and ended with 3 banishments", and then "if you show off you are too good, they'll think you are using witchcraft".
None of that makes any sense, though? I was looking forward for the duel since last update, but I guess I'm going to be dissapointed...
Just wanted to post my thoughts on the subject, still love this game.
I've reached the part where we receive the letter challenging us to a duel and we start talking about it. Gotta say, the ammount of asspulls in the narrative is really weird, almost like there was an internal debate within the dev to have the duel at all (i know they read the thread, this isnt a diss I love your game!)
"There haven't been duels in a century", "the last one was over a 20 year thing and ended with 3 banishments", and then "if you show off you are too good, they'll think you are using witchcraft".
None of that makes any sense, though? I was looking forward for the duel since last update, but I guess I'm going to be dissapointed...
Just wanted to post my thoughts on the subject, still love this game.